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2020-08-04 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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MrCarbonite
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Okay, I really love the beginning of this. Straight into the heart of the action with clear detailed calls. Immediately you know what's up and can't wait for more world building. Keep up the good work!!
Erskine Ravel is keen for forgiveness. To commemorate that he has invited 10 people to his new house for a grand feast. However, when he is killed maliciously they must find out who killed him. The house traps them and binds their magic, time is of the essence as they search for who of them is the killer, trusting no-one as if they did, they could be next.
Okay, I really love the beginning of this. Straight into the heart of the action with clear detailed calls. Immediately you know what's up and can't wait for more world building. Keep up the good work!!
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