Warrior Princess: The Vamp Kingdom

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winterdaisy55

Wow! Just wow, dude. The way you describe the scene and atmosphere is amazing! I can picture every scene you wrote in my head very clearly! The only downside is that it starts off pretty confusing, but later on it became easier to understand! Keep up the good work! You are doing an amazing job.

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ZOA

The story description is just awesome and quite attractive. I really liked how you wrote this story. The plot and pace of this story is quite good . Keep on writing and update soon..... 😍😍

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koladeizdavid

This story is absolutely amazing! A ravishing gem amongst others. I love fantasy and this book is something I definitely would read over and over again without getting bored. Story is well-paced and the characters are lovable. Author's english is superb and this gives a smooth and enjoyable experience when reading. Also, the author's skill at giving descriptions is excellent. Greatly interested to see where the story goes. Definitely a must read! 💯 What are u still doing reading this review? Go read once. More updatess author. 👍 ✌️

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Dawn_in_dark

Yahoo!! Vampire hehe 😋.. I liked this novel very very much. This is very amazing and interesting one. Please keep updating this regularly. I'm gonna read it till end. I love vampires 😁😁

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Admisful

Very good book! Usually I'm not into these types of books, but this one is very well done! The dialogue is inventive and easy to read, while the pacing is just right. Definitely recommend!

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Lord_Meph1sto

Your update speed is amazing and the story so far got me hooked,especially the prologue. I never thought I could read a good novel by visiting the forum nowadays. Keep up the good work.

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Phodoodles

I love how this novel times its cliffs hahaha! Story pacing is a bit confusing on the 1st few chapters but everything slowly comes to light by the time you reach chapter 6 onwards. Suspense is a tricky thing to do and this story has a lot of those moments. The writing may need proofing though since some of the Character names had minor typos (the surnames) but overall, you won't mind it much since their names are very easy to remember too. My feels for Callista too! (っ˘̩╭╮˘̩)っ

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GloriouslyFamous

The plot and flow of the story are just amazing. The prologue is written wonderfully and is a major factor in keeping the suspense going. Well done! The story is very detailed and written very well, making it a smooth experience. Another great thing is how well the characters get developed as the story progresses. In chapter two I think it would be better to start it off with something like, "Back at the vampire kingdom" to make it clear as it was a bit confusing coming into the chapter like that. The other times that the transition happens, you will not need that. Overall, it was a wonderful experience, well done!

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RABBITICOL

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SamsaraWithWords

The characters are written very well. So far I'm impressed with the narration and world building. The best part for readers is probably the release schedule. 20 chapters in two weeks is great, keep it up!

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FST

Excellent story that kept me on the edge of my seat. Bravo! I love the characters! Can't wait until there's more!

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hye4654

Wow! I was pretty impressed with your writing. I like the premise and the idea behind the story. However, I feel like the pace is a bit slow and it drags in some places. But at the same time, you get to know the characters through the details. Great Job so far!

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kerras

Nice suspenseful story. It is interesting and the descriptions really help paint a picture of the action. It could use a bit more editing grammar-wise, but the errors aren't too distracting.

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VynDahl

Really enjoy this book. It's getting harder to find books that can keep you interested. I felt the ******* and emotion in the very first chapter. I'm looking forward to reading more. The only critique I have is there are some mistaken words here and there. It's nit-picky but I think the quality of the book would increase a great deal if those are fixed.

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XXXXC

Interesting. So far I have only read a few chapters but what should I say? I am hooked. Characters are good. The setting is also cool. Great work, highly recommended

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AnairaG72

Oh my god, i am definitely loving this novel! The way you describe and narrate each sequence is definitely very intricate and detailed that the image it forms in my brain is as clear as day. You indeed have a talent for storytelling.

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MrCarbonite

Really enjoying the story, the characters, and the world you have created here. Really sucks you in and makes you need to know what happens next!!

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Light_ray

Author I really loved reading this book. In the first few chapters I can relate how the character is expressed. Keep updating and keep up with your work.....

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bibiyenini

Another fantasy book mixed with romance is coming your way! You should all check this warrior princess journey! And it's not easy to convey everything out of your imagination, but this novel does that!