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Ling Yunlong is an apathetic youth who was about to truly enter adulthood and was searching for his future, only for a phenomenon to occur that would forever change his life, and the life of millions of individuals across thousands of universes in the omniverse.
Finding himself in a situation where the common sense of his world could not explain his predicament, Yunlong was driven to madness before the Creator appeared before him, making him the successor of the Void.
Reincarnating into the Against the Gods universe and reborn as Yun Long, he decided to pave his way to the peak of existence in his new life, but it seems that the Creator may have other ideas for Yun Long and his so called traverse to the peak!
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Tags: Anime Worlds, Anti-Hero, Apathetic Protagonist, Borderline Loli-con, Comedic Elements, Fan-fic Elements, Handsome Male Lead, Harem, Harem-seeking Protagonist, Multiple Realms (Verses), Novel Worlds, Overpowered Protagonist, Past Plays a Big Role (Spoiler Alert), Perverted Protagonist, Polygamy, Scheming Protagonist, Slice of Life, Special Abilities, Transported into Another Worlds, Time-Travel, World Travel
Sub Tags: Adopted Protagonist, Angels, Arranged Marriage, Bloodlines, Body Tempering, Charismatic Protagonist, Cheats, Cruel Characters, Cultivation, Demi-Humans, Demons, Depictions of Cruelty, Dragons, Elves, Entities, Fairies, Famous Protagonist, Fantasy World, Fast Cultivation, Gods, Goddesses, Hiding True Ability, Loli, Long Separations, Maids, Manipulative Characters, Monster Girls, Mythical Beasts, Older Love Interests, Parallel Worlds, Parody, Phoenixes, Romantic Subplot, Ruthless Protagonist, Shameless Protagonist, Slaves, Vampires, Witches, Younger Lover Interests
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Review from [Ch 131] From the beginning to this point, this novel and the plot is nothing new. it's the typical Chinese protagonist you will find, not special. The Mc is by far a redundant side character who finds himself in the world of ATG, given supreme power by a powerful entity. Nothing interesting. The Mc is a cardboard box with no personality, he does not struggle nor does he go through trials and tribulations. The author bases his character as a righteous person holding the morality from his pass world, but he is very hypocritical and by far an insecure arrogant cultivator. It may seem as if he is a manipulating character, but despite his prep school kid manipulations, he is not smart nor is he hard working other than his pathetic and blatant goal of having wives in his harem, he is nothing more than an average toad who is given a diamond spoon. No outstanding personality all females in the novel are of course the basic braindead virgins who upon meeting the Mc is fascinated by his flowery dubious background and power. The Mc is a hypocrite by far a self insert of the Author himself if I am assuming. While he is allowed to have many wives. He is very mad and takes extreme measures against Xia Qinyue mother to manipulate her into not going back to the God realm. Nothing wrong with that, I understand it's because of Xia, but from my understanding, as I read further into the novel. It's not it. He is insecure garbage who doesn't like cucks and so he lets out his frustrations of manipulation her that he will eliminate her if she goes back to the God realm to her previous lover. [Very boring,] He tries to self justify his evil actions, by pinning his deeds as good while blaming others who do just the exact same thing as evil. Proactively reprimanding Serial killers and Serial rapists to justify his own deeds as good. Black and white. Plot- Mc appears in the world, meets future wives tells them **** and then erases their memories in order to not mess up the timeline. [ He is a pussy and a hypocrite. His existence in itself already means the timeline is not the same, but because the author does not know how to plot. He meets harem, flatters them and in the next second erases the memories of him. This plot is repetitive and quite boring. Harem. Nothing to say. They are the cardboard box of a female women, with no personality. They live for the Mc and they are just there. Though I came here for the Harem, I was expecting more of the sexual side and although I can read through the braindead girls, What I came here for is the erotic story after the build of the Mc relationships with all potential future wives. Sadly the author is an ******* at best at romance with the harem and the R18 chapters. Reading through the sex is stale and bland, the fact the first person the mc sleeps with is very forced and I guess it says a lot about his character. He doesn't give a damn who he has as his first. The relationships between him and the other characters are like that of fangirl and teacher. There is no growth between him and characters every character basic emotion to the Mc is fawning over his power. There is no direction to this novel and I don't see any improvement in the authors writing. I recommend this novel for a nice read about cultivation and power Ideas, though this is a harem. The aspect of it is glossed over and it's closer to that of a pokemon trainer catching pokemon just for the sake of collecting.
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What an ugly thing huh author! Deleting comments you don't like. You post a story on this website and you can't receive any criticism, really that?
THis story is more like a drama show than a cultivation novel. useless dramas with his family member. He gives all his treasure to his family and wives. He doesn't even try to cultivate himself. WTF. He should try to cultivate himself first. He wastes his time not cultivating. But when he encounters stronger enemy he then sacrifices his remaining pitiful cultivation which makes him cripple. he agains starts to cultivate. I bet that if he dedicates only a single year for himself in cultivation after his second rebirth, he would reach the peak of the existence in one fell sweep.
I read 63 naruto type filler chapters. I don't know if I feel insulted or cheated. I came with "low" expectations, but I am leaving with a ball of frustration in my stomach. The author reincarnated a boy who, according to him, is apathetic without love to another person other than his mother / sisters. So far so good, we have another yiba tatsuba, when I read that I was going to be a "" "realistic character" "" I was happy, thinking that this MC was not going to make mistakes left and right. BUT! I was wrong, for some reason he changed his behavior from 0, at first he was sentimental to the point that he injures himself to help his adoptive brother, then he became perverted for some reason all women are shotas and he lets himself be humiliated by them with a cowardly excuse that honestly seems horrible to me is as if you hate your MC, then he became delusional he began to conspire and become paranoid for his stupid actions, example: he released the ice phoenix he lied about some bullsh * t and she fell in love / engaged the MC, only to then seal it again for fear that things may change in the future, here I just have to tell you something: FOR YOU TO VISIT THEM AND ACT MYSTERIOUS JUST TO THEN SEAL THEIR MEMORIES LIKE A LADYBIRD ??????! ! Tell me I do not know what you thought when you wrote all that nonsense filler but for me it is an insult to fellow writers, here you could say something like "I write for my satisfaction" or something like that, f * ck you, I don't care if it you did for your satisfaction or for monetary necessity but this novel is an insult to the novels if you want to receive something you need to write something with meaning. Well continuing with my review, after all his personality changes the MC turned into an arrogant young master cannon fodder with stupid decisions to the level of stupid wuxia villain that any random cultivator can kill which is unbearable to read. What I mean is, I liked the theme of the story, example: he was a filial child who wanted the best for his family but who is realistic and can do everything possible to satisfy his loved ones, but then you started to ruin everything and instead of having satisfaction when reading, the only thing that I receive is a desire to hit someone, call me aggressive but your novel is frustrating for the reader. I wanted to write more about this novel but I don't want to waste more brain cells on a novel that I am leaving. Ok thanks for reading my ramblings sorry if it is not understood but I translated it from Google
MC is given powers by a powerful entity, sent to the ATG universe. MC becomes extreammly OP really fast. Then is nurfed after 60 chapters. There is so much unnecessary information. Makes it seem like he is just trying to fill up the word count. there's way to much unnecessary drama. His cultivation goes up then down then up again, its like a dam roller coaster. It feels like there has not been much progress because of that. ATG is one of my favorite novels and i love reading fan fics about it, but i cant keep going with this one. Give it a go, you may like it but i just don't.
Trash and boringg,waste of time ............................................................................................................
Welcome to my creation! As a shameless author I obviously have to rate my book highly, after all if you cannot love yourself then who will? Moving onto the book, I will be creating an auxiliary chapter in the future to explain the novel more clearly, however what you can expect is an overpowered MC that only cares about his loved ones, playing an anti-hero who has his own morals and his journey through many fantasy universes. Really big harem, however I do not want him picking up girls left and right just because he is so handsome... wow... so creative... I want to develop their feelings slightly so this mainly applies when he starts his adventures around the 200s? That is for the main chicks though! After all side-chicks must remain as side-chicks! (Spoiler Alert) (Do not read if you do not wish to be spoiled) The plan is for him to gain a sudden power however he has to do something he doesn't wish to do, and after that he will adventure through tens if not hundreds of anime/novel verses, where he will start really strengthening the fact that he is the Harem God!
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Even epilogue takes too much chapters.. Let him go to next world already. You monggoloy!. The atg arc is freaking boring and slow slow slow slow slow pace. I just hope. The next world is not boring like you
Story is boring and characters are plain. I didnt want to say more but 140 is limitting me. Only saving grace is your grammar everything else that I have actually liked is copied from main story so this is simply boring and plain. MC wasnt even qualified to be Beta male let alone Alfa its sad tbh. Good start everyhing else not worth mentioning.
Guys, regarding the power system, I just want you to be patient and wait until after the First Tribulation and Rebirth mini-arcs! His power system in the novel will change maybe 2 times, or more accurately it will evolve, and this is especially pertaining his skills and physiques. Once he leaves the ATG Verse a new power system is introduced so try not to pay too much focus on such things. So things may not make sense in a singular chapter but over mini-arcs (10-20 chapters) they should be explained, if there is still confusion after just ask me here I will try explain it clearly!
and boom, you have really done it author,u will be now releasing 1 chapter per day isn't it ? You have more than 350+ chapters stacked up and such slow release, i get it that you are writhing for patreon but we too here are reading this story,if now u get so greedy people sooner or later will start stop reading this story ...cuz its not a original novel but instead a fan-fic and you should understand that we readers are here to read a fan-fic nothing else and out there there are tons of ATG and campione,fate-series fan-fic ,so get ur readers hooked atleast realease the same 2 chapters that you used to do everyday or we will loose interest sooner or later ..and if you want to realease only 1 chapter atleast give us some mass-release...now u may say if there is so many good fan-fic out there and why am I still here? it is cuz of the same reason why u had wrote this novel! didn't u write it forus to read?So as a reader i will readeven if u want it or not...but can't really say any thing if you had written the story only for god-da*m money!
I like the way you build the story. But I think you build it too long. Also I think you should use time skip so the reader not to boring and the story not to bland. I think you should jump to his wedding ( you can shorten it because there is no important event in there)and go to the other continent to study his medical knowledge and get his real sky poison pearl and another wife. I think you should make him train the sword comprehension or body training
This has good potential so far Only worry is that mc wishes are quite overpowered so I wonder how that will affect story pace MC doesnโt seem that apathetic however it is early in so I will judge after a few dozen chapters Xp
The novel is untrue to the original novel's characters, which is fine, however they act unbelievably weirdly, such as shen xi or the ice phoenix in the netherfrost lake, which they just would never do in the original novel, and also there is literally no conflict within the first 70 chapters like what
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For some reason this author took the abbreviation "ATG", he really believes that he writes in the same league as Mars Gravity. In the first chapter, we observe the following phrase: โreturn to motherโ - that is, mama, not a mature son, and the author by itself. What can such a person write? + By adding tags = narrow-minded product to 1 star.
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The author is big wuss who cannot take any criticism at all. He deleted my previous comment when I stated why I did not like some parts of the novel.
Favourite ATG fanfic Canโt wait for anime worlds Xp ......................................................................................
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