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the death of one life is but the beginning of another...
the beginning of another life is but a trial...
Trial is the basis of character...
character is who we are...
we are, the Force...
I don't own starwars, this is a Fanfic only
(ps. CHANGED the title because it's not really gonna revolve around the system, as it is ment as a limiter.... so yeah.... hope you like it)
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This is by far one of the most immersive stories on web novel. You can truly visualize and let your imagination bring the story and characters to life. Very very few stories on web novel can match up to this quality
very nice love how he is OP and isn't gonna be jedi or sith best of both XD what is the release schedule? .....................................................................................................
I don't like giving 5 stars but this deserves it I mean who doesn't like fanfic set in star wars :D,MC isn't bad in personality and background and process of his reincarnation is smooth and story, for now, has good content with good quality writing.
The story actually changes the plot, it does it fairly quickly as well. The first 10 or so chapters just reveal his powers and abilities while showing the jedi's thoughts about how he balances the force and their subtle changes in ideology. In the latest chapters though we get to jump into a war that didn't happen in the canon because of the changes in the force due to the mc's appearance.
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Warning this is not strictly star wars as i thought it was when i started reading. The author has a beautifully crafted story with characters and then add some other fan-fic into his own. It got very confusing and overall ruined the story for me.
Simply amazing cant wait for more 1111111111111111111111111111111111111111111144444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
Really good story so far. 20 chapters in and everything is going at a good pace, nothing too ridiculous has happened and the spelling and grammar is actually understandable unlike A LOT of other stories on here. I just wish the chapters were longer so I could read more, lol.
overall I'm enjoying this star wars fanfic. there are some glimpses, different perspectives of the galaxy's characters than have been explored else where. the duality of sentient beings with strong mirror reflections showing the results of choices made that for some characters effect millions. thanks, be well and stay safe.
The world background is good but maybe but a tad bit into it more and show the area around mc more...an example would be...if let's this random person has a minimap but it just show like 1km away or something...why not make it more useful and make it at least 1 or 2km more so that we can get more of a view of the universe (or whatever) it is in then just the places he is not the places he is at...like example more what's around him then what's in fount of him...just so you know I'm not that great at explaining things so I try to use a round about way...just take it as you did a good job but dig deeper into your imagination and/the story as if you are in it...to others that want to read this and/or want a good star wars story that goes fast but not too fast that you a lost all the time then this may be for you...I recommend going through two chapters at least just to know that is at least ok if not good for you...or well ok at least in general if not good... **, GOOD JOP AND PLEASE KEEP IT UP AS LONG AS YOU CAN OR AT LEAST DO NOT DELETE IT...YAYA...B
Welp what can i say other then keeping going its awesome.....................................................................................
This is great keep up the great work author this is one of the best Novels ive Read het and nr 1 star wars story ive Read yet youre really good dont drop please this had great potential
Very interesting I like the variations in story and I look forward to seeing the deviations in the plot line I hope to see some interesting things going on in the story line
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One of the best star wars fan -fics I've read to date well thought out and executed.👍👍😎😎😎 long my it continue . and "may the force be with you" .
Really good story but i would like to read more. So dear author please release new chapters. No offenses. Until there are new chapters i can only hope and wait. Keep on writing. It’s reeeeeeeeeaaaaaally good
Great Read, though there could be some improvements on Writing Quality, mostly punctuation since there are a number of commas in the beginning when there should be more period. I think it would be better to introduce new information without parentheses, via character's thoughts and acknowledgements. I can't wait to learn more about the World State that Death had created by placing him in the Star Wars Universe with his own unique background. Though I will have to suggest a bit more research on Star Wars Canon, as English is verbally spoken through both Galactic Basic Standard and High Galactic. Overall Story Development is pretty good, though I think some of the chapters can be squeezed together due to their length, and following the same idea of waking up. Thank you for the delicious Fan Fiction!
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This book keeps getting better and better I can’t wait tell the chapter comes out so please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read thank you 🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏