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A studious boy meets a tragic end at the hands of the infamous Truck-Kun. But is it truly the end? Or just the beginning of something more?
Reborn into the most secretive and ancient family of wizards, the Pendragons, he becomes the last heir to a lineage that has wielded magic since the dawn of wizardry itself. Far stronger than the sacred Twenty-Eight, their unparalleled power has drawn the envy and wrath of rivals, reducing the once-mighty family to rubble.
Stripped of his birthright and adopted by a muggle family, the young Pendragon bides his time, concealing his true identity. But now, the time has come for his awakening. The world will tremble under the reign of the Lord of Fire as he reclaims his legacy and unleashes his fury upon those who betrayed his family.
Devastation follows the dragon. His shadow will be the last thing they see.
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the novel so far is good. the beginning can do with some work, but overall, it works out. I'm surprised nobody cared to think about what his wand could signify. nobody? just me then. I like his interactions with Hermione. I can also understand why he doesn't talk to so many people. think about it. a grown-ass man in the body of a kid having to participate in 11-year-old conversations seems tiring and boring as f***. I like how Drak doesn't give him all the answers. he has to work for it himself. it is almost like Drak gives him clues instead. the storyline is a bit flat though I must admit but reading the comments the author has written I suspect that it will be different from the first year at the very least. looking forward to it. the Writing quality is very good, and I can easily gloss over the small grammatical errors. stability of updates is fantastic since he is writing two books at the same time. very hard working. character design-wise, I would prefer if Tom had some issues. I liked the whole dragon characteristics influencing his personality and the occlumency counter was wise. I don't see anything wrong with it and I suspect it was used as a plot device to set up the use of occlumency. smart! I like Hermione's change over the course of the year. Kids are easy to mold at an early age, so her change isn't that unrealistic. I like his later interactions with Seamus and Dean. and the spin on his father. very interested to see more of their interactions. his interactions with Dumbledaddy are great and their little battle of wits is very entertaining to read. Voldemort did seem a bit dumber than usual though. for someone who was known to think 20 moves ahead. he was surprisingly outwitted by an 11-year-old. but again, he was weakened and blinded by the desire to get the stone so it can be overlooked. I feel like Drak needs some character development, but I don't see how the author could make that work. either way that was a side note. World background, there is not much of it. we already have a preconceived idea of the world from J.K Rowling. I do think the author needs to expand on this though. Overall, I think this novel is great. everyone keeps trashing on the beginning and write nonsensical reviews about earlier chapters and making assumptions about things they don’t know. I would 100% recommend this. it is a good read with 2 chapters being released every day. give it a try and bear with the beginning if you don't like it. it gets better. I have very high hopes for this Harry potter fanfic, keep up the good work.
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Plot and everything was good, there was just too much hermione, in general there is too much hype about her, think about it, everything she knows is from memorization, I don't actually find her smart, and as for the mc he remembers EVERYTHING as stated and is smart so would be ahead of hermione in everything from occlumency to theoretical knowledge about magic, the fact that you gave her such an important role and hype made me stop reading it, I might have continued, but the story before had the EXCACT same relationship between mc and her, from meeting, talking about how books can be wrong, to being the only friend they have, mc teaching her ALMOST EVERYTHING he knows, and SOMEHOW THE SAME THING ABOUT THE PROTEGO, which caused me to quit the last story due to its stupidity, I get that imagery is important, but perfect memory, amazing talent, and most importantly, the fact that at least a few of the books in the library would have a description of the spell.
The Concept is pretty good and the chapters are fun to read. Though i will still only give it 4 stars as there are many grammatical errors and pov changing between first person and third person. Another reason would be that the background seems kinda forced. These dragons who were super powerful were all killed off as they needed to sleep to store magic power is a bit of a stretch i mean why not just make a ward around your sleeping room(cave?) or heck sleep in shifts? or just kill your enemies when you are awake. This excuse could explain how wizards could have killed one or two but not the whole species also pendragons were the most powerful family but it was also nearly destroyed it all seem too forced. Plus were are these all past old wizards i mean we would see some kind of legacy if the knowledge about pendragon family could be passed down then why not those ancient spells were passed down, why are all the wizards soo weak now? Too many loop holes could be found with this setting.
I really like this novel, but the whole transfer to America to grab his key ruined it for me. They just went through how important it was for him to have Hermione around and not get wrapped up on complete search for power and then he goes and needs to transfer? I’ll most likely try reading again when you have more chapters and can skim through that part. I get that its a new concept, but i just dont think it fits in terms of the flow of the story. Especially with the deal he made with Dumbledore. It makes zero sense.
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I'm really enjoying the book and I like it how the mc is not drooling over all the female characters makes a nice change from all those harem books. But the annoying thing is that the mc is going you know not gona help Harry and Ron all the time and saying how stupid they are and everything but yet still makes up random stupid reasons to get involved with every incident they are apart off.
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The plot of the story is good but as usual for the authors writing a hp fanfic this author also focuses heavily on hermoine and the mc teaches almost everything he knows to her like a simp he is so nah not for me
That was truly a magnificent fic. I enjoyed every single word that was written and was always excited when a new chapter would drop. I think it was a good and new approach to the HP world, cause the story was unique in its way. I have never read a HP fic we’re the author explained details so good and even gave the American school of wizardry a try. I hope the author doesn’t stop publishing this, cause I think it’ s one one the best fics I have ever seen.
Very good read, just ran through it over the weekend and I can't wait for more, whenever that may be. Just hope I'll remember it all well enough to not have to reread it all again.
this is actually pretty good, even though it has It's in and outs it is actually worth reading. I hope the author continues it and keep perfecting his craft
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I have only read through the beginning it's been great so far I was just hoping to ask what the main pairing is the right pairing can make or break a story fast
First-person novels may be something very new to my eyes, but you handle all the tools very well. I love your work since each of the chapters is very well understood.
First time writing a first-person novel, so take it easy I will get better the more I write. I'm writing a story that I would love to read. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it. Love the community, much love to authors and readers alike keep up the good work.