Chronicle of Zero (Self Insert) (Rebooted) [Stop until new update]

LV 5

Suriel8224

Another dxd fanfic with fanboy Mc hahah. Again and again HAHAHAixt. Hes thinking of training issei but he himself is a weakling HAHAHA.. 😂😂😂😂 😇😇😈😈😈😈🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐😈😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🤔😈🙃😈🙃🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🤔😈🙃😈🙃🙃😈🙃😈😈🙃😈🙃😈🙃😈🤔😈😈😈🙃😈

LV 5

simplevoid

The story is basically loss in many ways. The mc and characters just appears to be there with no real purpose, character interaction seems empty and forced at times. Grammar is okay but the mistakes that are made sometimes seem to be caused by impatient writing. The story has a rushed feel and little character development. Not to mention mc has so many power it seems you can’t keep up with them all and he keeps getting more and more which isn’t necessarily bad but half of the chapter can literally be just his updated stats and new power leaving little left for actual story progression. The story feels empty when it comes to characters trying to relate their thoughts and feeling to the readers there’s no connection, which make certain moments in the story come across forgettable.it seems the focus of this story is an overpowered mc with tries to come across as cool and smart but at the cost of the overall writing in the story.

LV 4

VictoriousFighting

WEAK WEAK WEAK WEAK WEAK WEAK WEAK MC MORE LIKE A SIDE CHARACTER. YOU ASK WHY ? HAVE NO DESIRE, HAVE NO DREAM, WHAT ELSE ? YET, HE TRAIN ANOTHER PERSON WHICH YOU-KNOW-WHO. ANOTHER HEROIC TENDENCY. (DOING SOMETHING WITHOUT ANY BENEFIT OR THE BENEFIT ISN'T FAIR)

LV 5

AstralJuggernaught

A barely readable story about some guy who gets every overpowered ability you can think of, and still struggles against basic mob characters. I mean, seriously?!? The Gamer ability, all the abilities from Negima, DMC, the Nasuverse, Ramen rider, ....the list goes on and on, and actually takes up most of the first 10 chaps.

LV 4

gargantaaa

Hah, bored, always finding this obscure fanfic. I tell you what makes me bored. 1 You are too focused on MC development and there is no other POV. 2 too much time skip a brief and unclear explanation, the conversation between characters in this novel is too little. 3 bad grammar, not clear in writing. This is what makes me bored and disappointed.

LV 3

UncleSheo

Another trash tier Story with trash MC getting powerups with OP weapons still is afraid to disclose himself to suernatural world. ANd what kind of obligation does he have to explain his existence and powers to low class devils? If its not trash tier unreasonable fanboy MC story then i dont know what is

LV 5

koala1of2the3abyss

sometimes have useless conversations with villains if you already know the story is supposed to already know most villains then because have a stupid conversation of who are you? just kill it and point unless the conversation contributes something to the story

LV 14

KxV09

This is a great fanfic so far, only downside would for some would be lack of harem (since it’s dxd) and fights, also although mc seems weak his treasures and external power is pretty op

LV 4

200000000000000011

The craze of today's writers is to pick up and add clichés to it, like MC being someone from Earth who reads and watches manga and anime, or adding useless harems to the story or this lemon **** they call, or does MC doggie. behind woman, it hurts the dignity of a man you know? And another I don't know who was the retard to say that every man's dream is harem ... my dream is to reincarnate in the immortal world in search of strength and not this garbage harem

LV 4

Pial

Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem

LV 5

Otakusalem

More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more mm or wore mm or wore👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😎😎😎😎😎👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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TeddyPL

I liked it very much, I hope the author will release chapters more often //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

LV 12

Silver_Epsilon

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LV 14

SYIHAAKIRA

The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. Even though I spent a stone spirit I still hope you carry on your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.

LV 12

GhostFinder

The strories is good. ..................................................................................... I don't know what to write though

LV 6

Devang98

Well till know i didn't much problem with plot but i would like you to make this story as original as possible where he have his own different adventure and harem i don't want original charachter to be just another replacement perverted mc with just more power. I want some original type of story .But let me tell you till know you have done your best and keep up the good work.

LV 5

Majeh7

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LV 4

Smashy_Boy

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XV117_a

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LV 6

Henrique_Paiao

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