pls continue been awhile since I have found a Naruto fan fic. I like this much.
Guys, I started writing an authorial book and I would like you to support my creation, as I currently have a lot of free time, you could comment on the continuation of this fanfic if you want.
Anime & Comics · SharonMeuToba
I hope this continues
ch 0 9 Origin
Movies · ManofcultureQ_Q
thx for the chapter, and it's fine if chapter length varies.
ch 25 Sussurations...
Fantasy · Zestar19
I hope the story continues it was just getting good
ch 0 9 Mysterious Person
Fantasy · RizzlelTSU
a draw? mikoru was gonna kill him though?
"H-Hey wait.... only competitors are allowed to fight." The announcer had no choice and decided to end the fight with a draw.
Fantasy · RizzlelTSU
can't be handsome, doesn't get to pick skills, and loses his family. I hope things get better for mikoru
Mikoru is crying inside the sphere, he can't do anything his not strong enough to protect those he loved. He past out tears are still falling down from his eyes.
Fantasy · RizzlelTSU
since webnovel is only letting me comment in this one section, I'll add my other comments here as well. no elf immortality/long life, the girl(I am assuming the goddess reincarnating him) is just allowed to mess up him, being handsome with that cake stunt
Mikoru is having a hard time choosing. After a few minutes Mikoru choose the color red. With a white hair and red eye combination he would look like a badass person.
Fantasy · RizzlelTSU
thought it was silver hair?
Mikoru is having a hard time choosing. After a few minutes Mikoru choose the color red. With a white hair and red eye combination he would look like a badass person.
Fantasy · RizzlelTSU
waiting for more, a great story so far
ch 24 Nova's Guide to Evolution
Fantasy · Zestar19
no one else's quirk(that I can remember, I am in no way the most knowledgeable person about mha) in main canon seems to make them act like/become a dog or cat to the degree toga seem to be effected by her quirk. Not bad or anything just seems a tad odd(even for this ffc version of toga but also if this was the mindset of Canon toga)
But instead of receiving affection or congratulations for bringing the 'food' into the house, all she got from them was screams of horror. After that, with rather questionable physical disciplinary measures, she was forced to understand that drinking the blood of a living being or murdering a living being with your bare hands and then eating it on the spot were things only a monster would do.
Anime & Comics · Fitoxi
she is kinda op in the main canon when her quirk awakens, so that isn't to much of a worry.
*2: First of all, I'm going to say that Toga is going to be very relevant in this fic. So I'm going to change her quirk a bit to better suit the 'Alien' theme of this story due to the plans I have in mind. However, the abilities of her quirk will not vary much from the original, but some of her abilities will have some different effects or other benefits. However, these new benefits will have limitations that will balance her powers so as not to make her a OP character or excessively convenient for the main character.
Anime & Comics · Fitoxi
he has been in a major coma and died in he other life. He would have only died once and had a near death experience, right?
"I don't plan on dying for the third time, so good luck with that~"
Anime & Comics · Fitoxi
I thought Nova was smallish and blue, although it is highly possible I'm misremembering a fact
Before he could retrieve his hand, a white eagle flew from above his head, and began to flap its wings slowly, before it climbed onto a nearby tree branch, and looked at him with its blue eyes from the top of the branch with a sharp look.
Fantasy · Zestar19
seems good so far, but I need more to fully form an opinion
ch 0 5 The Night of Awakening Part 3
New Aeon: The Adaptive Warrior
Realistic · SharonMeuToba