Tear a Path

LV 14

Zinion

A good novel,I like the world and so far the mc is interesting enough. Recommend to anyone that likes apocalypse game type worlds. A few things that bother me it's his stats... by doing NA it kind of feels like you have just given up bothering to calculate his growth it also makes it hard for me to determine how much hes grown in a set point more so when months are skipped in the novel. Also stats are important hes not got anything else but the ability to raise his stats with out limitation by either training or eating monsters but if we cant see them then who fucking knows. I hope this is a momentary thing and we will start to see his stats again in the future. Next is the world granted its early days but I feel like your rushing describing the environment and skipping bits which makes things a little confusing, all I can suggest is to slow it down explain things in more detail as so far I am liking this novel but yeah if you keep skipping description or doing them half arsed then things are gonna get a lot more confusing on the future. Keep up the good work and cant wait to read more

LV 4

Why_Windows

TLDR: the novel has smooth grammar really good world building and character development. This story is really good. I feel like it has done several things most novels on webnovel don't do well at. The first is character building because in this story I get a real sense of the characters growth :even though it is a tad unrealistic to go from a modern day youth to what he became so quickly the characters are well defined and the growth doesn't seem arbitrary and just to fuel the story. Not just that but the side characters introduced so far have clearly defined goals and characteristics which is a really nice change compared to being introduced with a few paragraphs of backstory and then making a leap of logic of that being enough to justify all they do. And next comes one of the most enjoyable parts of the story for me, the world building. It's been really good so far even with the system trope because it feels like the system isn't the whole novel which is great. It feels like the system is an aid to getting stronger rather than being the sole reason the character is getting stronger different from what it feels like in a lot of other novels. The world building has been very steady throughout the novel and as we move along in the story we find out more about the world gradually rather than through big info dumps every dozen chapters. Like how we gradually learn about the ecosytems that have been introduced so far and how we learn about the history and background of things through stories that are spread out. It keeps you wanting to read more and learn more about the world the author is creating rather than something just to get out of the way to get to the "real parts" of a novel on webnovel like faceslapping and power tripping. For the grammar there have been a few mistakes but overall you have to go looking for them to find them and there are no glaring mistakes that will deduct from the readability of the story. It feels like a smooth ride throughout grammar wise when reading. Anyway from the wall of text of above the short of it is its a really good novel that I recommend you to read.

LV 10

WTFox

One of the best novels I've read by far. And I've read an ocean full. The world building and character arcs and plot developments great, with good grammar to boot. Really glad I added this to my "must read" list. Highly recommended

LV 12

Dragneil

Great story. One of the best original novels I have read. It is a top 10 material. This story is better than some of the fan-fictions up there.

LV 13

BER5ERK

l'm just writing for anyone who reads this review on this good novel pls read this and push it to top 10 cause this is simply better than some actual webnovels posted here on this website. if ya wanna see a normal dude become the king of beasts with his at first weak powers then please support this novel with powerstones to make more people see this and for the author a man named shia labeouf once said,"JUST DO IT!" keep up the good work dude

LV 6

Veort

Separation trope, enough said. ....................................................................... ............................................................

LV 6

Ideal

Honestly author just submit an appeal for them to consider signing your book. There’s always that option. They have previously signed some very bad books, and yours is actually ok

LV 13

BER5ERK

The story came off amazing in the beginning unfortunately l feel like the latest chapters have been lacking something or any form of system upgrade but l'll continue to read cause l still like it

LV 13

BER5ERK

Just wondering is this story inspired by everyone else is a returnee and re:monster? Also l’ve only read 7 chapters but the sypnosis sounds alot like it. The webnovel overall is really enjoyable from what l’ve read especially the bantar with the boyfriend and girlfriend in the beginning hope you continue with the good quality👌

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LV 3

8Eight

The novel is not bad per say, but it's really not for me It starts out pretty cute and nice the first 4 chapters or so but after that there's alot of, dear God he is dumber than a box of rocks moments That seemingly only apply to him which is a bit..eh It's well written and all but the Mc is just too dumb and naive for me

LV 11

Bobidibop

The author is a bad man, making us wait a day to be able to read his scripture. Horrible, when I found I had reached the end I started to starve, just like the Dracas. We need for him to give us a big boon, enough to last for 2 whole years, just like Jormungand. However, don't sacrifice anyone to be able to continue writing.

LV 5

Niko91

WTF how do you have a grade higher then 3, don't read it drags you in just to f... with you like 3-4 time the MC decisons dosen't sem logical ,and the author gets feedback in the coments but he doesn't addresses the problem.

LV 6

ClayRayne

Good story, look forward to a few thousand chapters. (217 read so far) .

LV 14

Crouness

Overall a really good story a little hard to follow at times, lots of little flash backs to past memories, and MC is not to OP which makes the story exciting(for me anyways) very short chapters

LV 12

Snake551g

I was curious about how the relationship will develop with the characters. How do you plan to develop the relationship betweem the mc and the women? Will the system comtinue to play an aid role or will it change in later parts.