Survivors of the End

LV 13

adnanzz

it get my attencion now...keep it up n if the story continue be interesting even it need spirit stone i dont care....for the starter dont mind other people n keep it up

LV 6

Immortal_Potato

This book deserves more attention. POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO

LV 13

Immortal_Kaizer

Good start... Like ur story... Work hard author gambate..... Cayok2.... All the best........... .............................. ........................... ........................ .............................. ............................ .......................

LV 3

LeYank

Exelente historia, me atrapó. Hasta ahora me ha gustado mucho, quiero más capítulos para ver cómo se desarrolla, además de algunos errores gramaticales en algunos capítulos, está muy buena.

LV 5

Mabc1487

Por el momento me ha gustado la historia, se ve con mucho potencia; el desarrollo del personaje principal es algo lento y tengo dudas hacia donde irá dirigido.

LV 5

ThePumpkinKing

The world background is not so bad, but everything is going to fast. The mc became extremely powerful in like 15 chap. he is not op like in other novel but development is way to fast for me. But this is not the worst... i’m not realy good at english (i m french), but the writing quality is crap even i can see how terrible it is and i can’t take it anymore (there is more than one mistacke every sentence...). So yeah this novel need editing and it will be ok, or at least passable.

LV 5

revolverheld

Decent story but in desperate need of an editor I have been trying to enjoy it but the broken English and flip flopping of pronouns make it hard for the story to flow.

LV 7

H_Onee

U got my attention... Update more More More More More More Potato And Potato More Potato Potatoes Knife Chopping Frying Potatoes chip Eat Reading

LV 12

JPrats_2512

muy buena historia me gusta ojalá continuará deseo ver como se desarrolla y no dejarlo a mi imaginación.....................................

LV 4

Daoist174788

🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙😡😡😡

LV 5

Daoist654204

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗