Beliarh

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Beliarh
Beliarh
3 months ago
Replied to OsakaNovels

Thanks for the answer. Honestly, I haven’t seen a hero who isn’t a Shadow Monarch, the biggest difference I’ve seen is the use of spears instead of daggers, but the build is the same. It seems that people haven’t played the games and haven’t seen other classes/builds, and they remember other monarchs only as enemies, everything is like in the manga, I’ll wait for the continuation, I like the settings and crossovers, Midoriya as a hero is not very good, but I hope there are difficulties will strengthen character, thank you author for the work.[img=update]

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Beliarh
Beliarh
3 months ago
Commented

The author writes well, but I would like to know in advance whether there will be changes from solo leveling and hero academy? Well, I’ll give an example, in a solo, the hero is a melee fighter pumped up for speed with daggers and in fics he always has the same class and build, the so-called. the patriarch never becomes a tank, an archer, a wizard in fan fiction, all crossovers copy the manhwa, everything is repeated there - a temple, a snake, the underworld, going through a dungeon solo, working as a loader, killing a golem boss, the same thing happens in Moss, he is all Deku in the eyes of Bokudo, he always mumbles and is unsure of himself, is always “friends” with those who mocked him, is a fan of the Almighty, hell, this happens even with those who possess him half the time, Izuku has a different life, the presence of a quirk, a feeling that he is not able to change, no, it happens the other way around, but this is rare in crossovers. I would like to know that this will be a middle copy of two mangas with different names/titles, otherwise the differences are still minimal. But whatever it was, thank you for what you wrote.[img=update]

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Beliarh
Beliarh
7 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter. Mirko is disappointed about the introduction, but this is a common occurrence in this fandom, so nothing new. It is difficult to find where Mirko is not in the harem than on the contrary, this is already the template of harems in this world.[img=update]

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Beliarh
Beliarh
7 months ago
Commented

A beautiful piece of work. As for the change of forces, I think it should be strengthened, for example, it is better to reveal the quirks of schoolchildren and heroes, you can introduce new villains, the same Noma can be introduced as much as you like, but the love interest, well, with the character of the current Midoriya, Jiro is well combined except Momo, they both had quirks somehow crookedly shown, and of the heroines with the character of Midoria that you showed is a joke, Midnight and Mirko do not really mix if you do not change the canon, there are also Ryuko and Cats, but the first is little disclosed in the canon and rarely happens with someone a couple, the authors do not like dragons, although in your case they would have had a reason to get to know each other because of Nejire, she practiced with her.

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Beliarh
Beliarh
7 months ago
Commented

Why does the class give the characteristic that he is a warrior or at least a hybrid with a warrior, and the hero himself pumps physical stats, he is a child, but even they know that such stats are for those who count on physical strength. Nevertheless, write well, I am waiting for the continuation.

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Beliarh
Beliarh
7 months ago
Commented

To be honest, the actions of the hero of the last chapters are not clear to me. At first, he says that he learned disguise to hide and immediately risks trying to keep an eye on Sitri, then arriving in his city it is not clear why he went to fight the Wandering Devil revealing himself, and when he was attacked by exorcists, instead of leaving, he decided to fight them, and now he is almost subordinate to them, even those who do not know about the supernatural side should know that Christianity is weak in Japan and knowing about the demons in the neighboring city, believing that they have some kind of power without even knowing anything is stupid, and the exorcists themselves act like outcasts who cooperate with the fallen, immediately attacking indiscriminately and it is unclear on what basis detaining, planting and interrogating, if they behaved like that, the owners of the holy mechanisms and the organization of magicians would have already been cut out, the church is not as strong as the angels or other factions.

Beliarh
Beliarh
7 months ago
Commented

Did you give him some kind of weakened sharingan and named six eyes? The "six eyes" have improved senses and the ability to see energy is a side ability, not the main one.

Beliarh
Beliarh
7 months ago
Commented

I liked the way the hero behaves, as well as his secrecy and desire to become even smarter and stronger. Will the hero join the demons? I'm tired of watching those who have the potential to become strong quickly agree to become part of a faction, which gives more enemies and problems than benefits, so I wanted to find out in advance so as not to be disappointed. Can the hero study the matrix of evil figures to create his own counterpart, giving his team his own system instead of demonic power? Nevertheless, thanks for the work, in my opinion one of the best in fandom in recent times, I will wait for the continuation.[img=update]

Beliarh
Beliarh
7 months ago
Commented

I've never understood why the authors make Izuka insecure and cowardly regardless of his powers. He is already invulnerable and as I understand it, lasers do not exhaust him much, there is no "will" in this world, and kairoseki and sea water act only in the world of the piece, not in the mga. How can you remain insecure when no one is able to hurt you? Immateriality + lasers already makes him the top of the list of heroes.

Beliarh
Beliarh
9 months ago
Commented

Why aren't the hero's stats improving? It is known that fruits make you physically stronger several times, of course Zoan gives the biggest increase, but the rest also strengthen at least a little, and here was the mythical zoan and logia. Thank you for the works, in my opinion the best work of the Riser [img=update]