/ Anime & Comics / My Hero Academia: World Fishing Quirk
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Izuku Midoriya suddenly awakens a quirk, letting him fish items from other worlds.
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Warning: More Slice Of Life than Action. No Harem. Overpowered. Some character bashing.
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English isn't my first language, and I wouldn't even call my English any good, so don't expect anything grand.
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I don't own My Hero Academia. The only originals are the OCs and some elements included in the story.
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It's good, only until ch 17, before the author destroyed his story at ch 18 and the final line at ch 19 and decided to protect his little ego by saying don't like don't read. well don't cry when the rating of your story goes downhill.
Here you go a one Star. If you don't like it just don't write a story ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
It started ok, not exactly good but a quality expected in fanfics, however the story was already showing signs for a while of being something like a bashing fic where characters are dumbed down or a Deku villain fic where the world works against him to force him to become a villain. It ended up being both cases. The villain part hasn't happened yet, but everything points to this path with a lot of dumbing down from the beginning (Deku not registering a physical or storage quirck when he won the fish) to prejudiced authors against quirckless and a completely stupid Aizawa who didn't bother to investigate the reports of a quirckless attacking someone who has a powerful quirck 45 times, not even after seeing Bakugou being aggressive and attacking Izuku.
I liked the concept. But the chapters are very short, please increase the length of the chapters. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It started off very well, but chapters 18 and 19 ruined everything with Izuku being expelled for no reason, and also the teacher ignoring the attitude of Chiuhuahua in Katsuki's Pitbull body.
Started out good, a bit like a Chinese novel with the powers to fish items in the multiverse, but it still could be good if this was executed properly. The MC is far from perfect, but it's only chapter 19, and he could develop in the future. Sadly, I won't see it because I'm dropping it because it went downhill from chapter 18 when Aizawa kicked him out of the hero course without any reason. Anyway, good luck on your way as an author.
Great novel! I love fishing abilities, unfortunately I can’t continue with this after chapter 19 because it is a completely illogical twist. Well here’s hoping that there’ll be a clone of this novel soon!
Concept is interesting and could be great. Sadly the MC leaves too much open for improvement and is really too bad. naive, mentally challenged, selfloathing and has a hero complex so he ruins a lot which influences the story development too. one of the reasons i dropped the oc anime too since one cant root for deku honestly since every other character is better. also the powers are pretty much nerfed a lot in a sense that makes the consistency quite bad.
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It started really good but chapter 18 and 19 ruined everything, forcing the plot too much for my taste..............................................................................................
Everything went well until chapter 18 and 19. I'd recommend the author to simply remake those two since they make no sense at all. However, it is your fanfic so feel free to do whatever. Otherwise, the characters seems fine (except ch.18-19), the writing is good and well the world background is MHA. Overall, great work (except ch.18-19) and good luck :)
The f is that last chapter just turned the wrong way, from good to downright bad
There are many stupid things I would like to mention here: 1) Naive plot 2) Stupid Mc (Who are we kidding?) 3) Abnormal and forced romance (Just read and you'll understand) 4) Read it? Now think how All Might would have thought about him when he turned down his offer. It's illogical. 5) Stupid Cheat 6) Again, too much-forced romance, it feels disturbing and disgusting. You could have waited till the middle of the story. Didn't build up some romance b/w them. Time skip ruined it.
Bad, so bad . ..........................................................................................................................................
started great but then at chapter 18 it all just turned sour completely running it