/ Anime & Comics / DXD: The Awakening Of Phenex
摘要
"A guy reincarnated in the body of Riser Phenex with a system.
This work is a piece of fiction, a fanfic created based on the original universe developed by its creators. I want to make it clear that I have immense respect for the work and vision of the original creators. The intention of this fanfic is to explore imaginative possibilities within this universe, without any intention of devaluing or replacing the original work."
pat reon.com/22Mirko22
標籤
-- 推薦票
榜單 
-- 推薦票 你也許也喜歡
28評論
4.4
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
I love this so far and Just hope that you donot go akikan style or drop it.I am suggesting (it's more of asking) like you got Ezra right? Just hear me out as I am not saying to do this but just voicing out. The peerage (new Members ) Ais from Danmachi Ruby Rose (Rwby) Like I don't think anyone used them so far this way . Bring someone from other verse like Mashu (Fgo) or even Saint Martha hehe he the looks on Heaven faction will be priceless . Tatsumaki is a good choice Then Lastly like Bring someone from Marvel or DC or even some like Tohru from that Anime called dragon Maid or something I forgot anime name
It's a good fanfiction so far, I can't wait to see how the plot will continue.
dude, your story is good, but the text looks like generated AI, I advise you to revive it and diversify it, and try to avoid monotony and tautology
I love the whole Reincarnated As Riser Phenex trope, but this fanfic has 3 issues: - The characters and dialogue are too robotic and monotonous. This makes the characters look less realistic, and makes their whole personality revolve over Riser. - Because of the first point the romance in the novel is less heartwarming. - Unnecessary Killing. I don't mind killing but the MC in this story was a straight up murder hobo, killing people when there were better ways of dealing with them. A good example of this was the human witch used to track down Asia. Instead of killing her to hide information, a better way would be using mind erasing magic(all devils know it). Realistically her disappearance would only bring him more attention.
There are flaws but I like this.Sometimes it does feel rushed but it's just beginning so I hope you improve as you write more.I suggest something from cultivation Novels too can make interesting like that Phenix bloodline from ATG is a good one to have.I don't know how it works though as I am not a fan of those "I ,your father" type novels.Also show some conversation with his family and peerage members and not make people think it's a diary.We have to speculate some so show his wholesome moments with family too.This way even if you are villain we can see his motives as sometimes Villains are more complex than hero and make him more scheming like Aizen.No need to just brute force on his enemies.He can Humiliate Issei more like he can also talk to Gremory family or phoenix family about Issei behavior or do something more drastic but orchestrate it like why a Grafiya only interferes only when Riser is about to do something but Issei can shout whenever he wants ..I mean there are some places you just skipped over
I didn't really like the protagonist, I thought he did a lot of unnecessary things and I also don't like super chaotic things, I'm not complaining about him killing people, mostly unnecessarily, I like chaotic protagonists but I also like intelligent protagonists, chaotic but intelligent protagonists, no matter how much they change the plot or things like that, they are always in control and a lot of the time they let the plot unfold to get the most benefits or changes the plot to results that he predicted and that won't affect the world much, or turns the world upside down by doing crazy things and in the midst of the chaos he benefits, I think the best example I have and the protagonist of annihilation maker the crazy things he did always benefited him as much as possible. Other than that, I thought the story was great with good grammar and few holes in the script.
its a good fic. a little anoying with the format text ( the way they speak etc) therers just a little problem. Sona character its a little off ( a lot ) Summon characters are brainwashed ( Just puppets ) yubellana ( Puppet ) i read till the exorcists , Xenovia and irina ( Puppet) the major problem its theres no emotion , its boring
揭示劇透
A good FanFiction, it seems that lately in the Webnovel among the DxD stories, it has only been reincarnated as Rizer Phenex and this is one of the best!
Read it for yourself and find out its pretty interesting so far hope author Rodney make him too ok too quickly ...............................
The premise is ok, MC reincarnates as Riser 1 month before the plot starts, and gets a system that gives Gacha depending on the changes in the plot. The problem is that the story writing feels bland and monotone like we know what will happen way before it happens and there is no proper thought and planning shown, everything the fights, the dialogue, the relations feel monotone and artificial It's just generic Chinese Faloo Fanfic. (Plus point not stretching out things and not making stupid dialogues including Chinese cliche dialogues)
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I'm sorry but I will say what in my mind after read 100 chs 1- multiverse characters all are girls and they totally look like emotionless toys don't like and to be honest I think if you make riser collect his servants in dxd world it's well be better 2- kill iseei and vali is kind of mistakes other than steal they gears ability it's better to copy them and suprise people in future battles 3- actually I was hoping start mc life as new born without system so he can build his power slowly and do some ridciculous hurts experiments to increase his power a little by little unit he reach the top demons just to realise he was a ant 🐜 in this world when he saw battles between gods or meeting and felling the power of ophis ofc this my opinion I mean no harm but that what I think and thank you
writing quality is bad it doesn't sound human way to robotic. story development feels quite forced and unnatural. i wish the author the best in their future endeavors
sabes antes de que termine la invocacion matalo haslo simple y realista ygyjfgiufuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
揭示劇透
I hate the fake love talks between Riser and Sona. They just look that fake. And the system is a mix of bad and good. No so OP sadly. I wish there were more ways to earn points, and suddenly the story is moving a lot faster in regards to bonds and all. Fate is inevitable I guess
Wonderful chapter can't wait for more love the context of the oval rating of the world background love the character dysfunction love the story development love the updating status love the translation output I love it all
great to see a good story about riser Phenex.awesome cover art too