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摘要
On the night of the Uchiha Massacre, Uchiha Yi awakened a system dedicated solely to developing Fire Release techniques!
- Fire Release: Flame-Flame Fruit – Control flames and achieve elemental body transformation!
- Fire Release: Devouring Void Flame – Devour bloodlines and optimize oneself!
- Fire Release: Amaterasu – Black flames that burn eternally!
- Fire Release: Ryūjin Jakka – "All things in creation, reduced to ash!"
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Where the Will of Fire burns, the flames of the Uchiha will never die.
When the fire of the Uchiha illuminates the village, you will pay the ultimate price!
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RAW: 火影：这个宇智波只会火遁术！
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Hi Author, I appreciate your effort, but I feel the story could use some improvement. It seems a bit rushed and inconsistent. The protagonist feels overpowered, yet they don’t use their abilities effectively. Perhaps you could focus on giving them just one or two powers and exploring those in depth. Alternatively, if they’re meant to be very powerful, consider showing them dominating their challenges in a way that feels earned. Also, please check for grammatical errors to improve readability. Keep up the hard work!
I can't give professional ratings, but if something is readable and without a harem, then 5 stars right away.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
everything here is very stupid and pointless... there is too little logic in everything. and MC is one of the stupidest uchihas I've ever seen in fanfiction... most likely the stupidest uchiha I've ever seen)
Please skip the Obito Kakashi drama I'm sure everyone watched the anime and don't really care anymore.
Just junk food. Literally its a crack fic by chap 89 where the MC magically fixes everything and everyone is a yes man. Only thing going for it is the comedy
The author here of course I'm going to give myself a 5 star review, this novel updates 3 chapters daily stay tune for that collect it in the library and give this novel 5 star review and power stone vote ---- Thank you
Absolutely brutal story. First couple of chapters he has three different names. There is very little showing of the thought processes, and plenty inexplainable features of the system.
I am reviewing this fic because i think it's too low rated. Sure I don't think it's perfect, there are things I don't like how the MC killed a child for revenge but overall it's a pretty good read. The grammar is good, the MC's personally is nice and is quite strong while not being too OP and the side characters are all also well written. And most importantly the plot is super fun too read. The MC and black zetsu team up to absolutely destroy Hiruzen and boy is it glorious. At the time of this review this fic has 72 chapters and it only took a few hours for me to finish it and it left me wanting for more, so that's probably a good indication that this fic is great.
it is not a bad novel. it is indeed rushed and basically a mixture of wish fullfiment but it is still an enjoyable experience
He was very interesting but when he destroyed Konoha and started enjoying life they gave him a personality that I don't like. well that's all but I have to put more words
Едпдадпдпдпжпжпдпдпдпдпдпдпдплрлплплрдрдрдрдрдрдпдплпплплплмдпдпдпдпдпдпплпл плавно по на по сколько не знаю почему так получилось с уважением Сергей отправлено на квалификацию не могу понять как мы с ним и ок не знаю что ты мне
It was really good until the plot of Naruto ended. Then it went onto some bs like the Naruto world being 2D, a digital world being 2.5D and the real world being normal 3D. But the power levels don’t translate from 2D into 3D meaning he became weak again, plus the real world isn’t a normal world but also a supernatural world with its own factions that is then connected via an infinite tower to other realities (meaning anime or movies etc) but those then aren’t 2D?! Anyway it’s a good read but I’m outta here now lol. Best to leave before it gets worse and worse
It's okay, many chapters and you did your best on the translation, there isn't much Chinese reference or even mismatched words, IL call it good enough to read and pass time y'know? Please continue your hard work comrade
honestly, this is a good read. all the way up until he kills Sauske in front of Itachi. bro went from avenger to villain in a single act. killed the book for me.
He killed Konohamaru, so I’m out! The fic isn’t bad, but I really like Konohamaru.