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Absolutely brutal story. First couple of chapters he has three different names. There is very little showing of the thought processes, and plenty inexplainable features of the system.
Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent—your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWick Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishere Or on Twitter: @tirtatare
great translation although sometimes the translation gets messed up like the name of the character many times the akatsuki called Obito by his name instead of tobi even though they don't know who he was same with the MC nagato didn't know who he was but still called his by his real name and after much later they just went with it they don't clarify when the MC told his real identity to them but overall a fun read 👍🏻
everything here is very stupid and pointless... there is too little logic in everything. and MC is one of the stupidest uchihas I've ever seen in fanfiction... most likely the stupidest uchiha I've ever seen)
it is not a bad novel. it is indeed rushed and basically a mixture of wish fullfiment but it is still an enjoyable experience
Yo me Encuentro satisfecho, con la Excepción de la velocidad al capturar a las Bestias con Cola ya que siento que esta siendo un poco apresurado
He was very interesting but when he destroyed Konoha and started enjoying life they gave him a personality that I don't like. well that's all but I have to put more words
Just junk food. Literally its a crack fic by chap 89 where the MC magically fixes everything and everyone is a yes man. Only thing going for it is the comedy
очень все плохо... я мог понять его месть семье Хокаге. Но присоединяться к Акацуке... бред полный
I was hesitant to read because of the title . But I was surprised it’s actually pretty interesting, Despite the generic name The grammar is excellent, the mc has good character depth. The plot isn’t really new per se. But it’s still a very interesting read. Give it a chance
I am reviewing this fic because i think it's too low rated. Sure I don't think it's perfect, there are things I don't like how the MC killed a child for revenge but overall it's a pretty good read. The grammar is good, the MC's personally is nice and is quite strong while not being too OP and the side characters are all also well written. And most importantly the plot is super fun too read. The MC and black zetsu team up to absolutely destroy Hiruzen and boy is it glorious. At the time of this review this fic has 72 chapters and it only took a few hours for me to finish it and it left me wanting for more, so that's probably a good indication that this fic is great.
my guy I nearly didn't read this because you didn't say that he was a person from earth in the description
Please skip the Obito Kakashi drama I'm sure everyone watched the anime and don't really care anymore.
He killed Konohamaru, so I’m out! The fic isn’t bad, but I really like Konohamaru.
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Hi Author, I appreciate your effort, but I feel the story could use some improvement. It seems a bit rushed and inconsistent. The protagonist feels overpowered, yet they don’t use their abilities effectively. Perhaps you could focus on giving them just one or two powers and exploring those in depth. Alternatively, if they’re meant to be very powerful, consider showing them dominating their challenges in a way that feels earned. Also, please check for grammatical errors to improve readability. Keep up the hard work!
i like this one because this is the most probable path a person would take if he reincarnated in the same situation , i have read some novels where mc directly defeats everyone like itachi , danzo ,fugaku and hiruzen sarutobi and instanltly becomes hokage , it seems far fached afterall not eveybody will accept him as hokage so easily . so i liked the approach of this story.
I can't give professional ratings, but if something is readable and without a harem, then 5 stars right away.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The author here of course I'm going to give myself a 5 star review, this novel updates 3 chapters daily stay tune for that collect it in the library and give this novel 5 star review and power stone vote ---- Thank you
honestly, this is a good read. all the way up until he kills Sauske in front of Itachi. bro went from avenger to villain in a single act. killed the book for me.
Absolutely brutal story. First couple of chapters he has three different names. There is very little showing of the thought processes, and plenty inexplainable features of the system.
Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent—your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWick Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishere Or on Twitter: @tirtatare
great translation although sometimes the translation gets messed up like the name of the character many times the akatsuki called Obito by his name instead of tobi even though they don't know who he was same with the MC nagato didn't know who he was but still called his by his real name and after much later they just went with it they don't clarify when the MC told his real identity to them but overall a fun read 👍🏻
everything here is very stupid and pointless... there is too little logic in everything. and MC is one of the stupidest uchihas I've ever seen in fanfiction... most likely the stupidest uchiha I've ever seen)
it is not a bad novel. it is indeed rushed and basically a mixture of wish fullfiment but it is still an enjoyable experience
Yo me Encuentro satisfecho, con la Excepción de la velocidad al capturar a las Bestias con Cola ya que siento que esta siendo un poco apresurado
He was very interesting but when he destroyed Konoha and started enjoying life they gave him a personality that I don't like. well that's all but I have to put more words
Just junk food. Literally its a crack fic by chap 89 where the MC magically fixes everything and everyone is a yes man. Only thing going for it is the comedy
очень все плохо... я мог понять его месть семье Хокаге. Но присоединяться к Акацуке... бред полный
I was hesitant to read because of the title . But I was surprised it’s actually pretty interesting, Despite the generic name The grammar is excellent, the mc has good character depth. The plot isn’t really new per se. But it’s still a very interesting read. Give it a chance
I am reviewing this fic because i think it's too low rated. Sure I don't think it's perfect, there are things I don't like how the MC killed a child for revenge but overall it's a pretty good read. The grammar is good, the MC's personally is nice and is quite strong while not being too OP and the side characters are all also well written. And most importantly the plot is super fun too read. The MC and black zetsu team up to absolutely destroy Hiruzen and boy is it glorious. At the time of this review this fic has 72 chapters and it only took a few hours for me to finish it and it left me wanting for more, so that's probably a good indication that this fic is great.
my guy I nearly didn't read this because you didn't say that he was a person from earth in the description
Please skip the Obito Kakashi drama I'm sure everyone watched the anime and don't really care anymore.
He killed Konohamaru, so I’m out! The fic isn’t bad, but I really like Konohamaru.
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Hi Author, I appreciate your effort, but I feel the story could use some improvement. It seems a bit rushed and inconsistent. The protagonist feels overpowered, yet they don’t use their abilities effectively. Perhaps you could focus on giving them just one or two powers and exploring those in depth. Alternatively, if they’re meant to be very powerful, consider showing them dominating their challenges in a way that feels earned. Also, please check for grammatical errors to improve readability. Keep up the hard work!
i like this one because this is the most probable path a person would take if he reincarnated in the same situation , i have read some novels where mc directly defeats everyone like itachi , danzo ,fugaku and hiruzen sarutobi and instanltly becomes hokage , it seems far fached afterall not eveybody will accept him as hokage so easily . so i liked the approach of this story.
I can't give professional ratings, but if something is readable and without a harem, then 5 stars right away.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The author here of course I'm going to give myself a 5 star review, this novel updates 3 chapters daily stay tune for that collect it in the library and give this novel 5 star review and power stone vote ---- Thank you
honestly, this is a good read. all the way up until he kills Sauske in front of Itachi. bro went from avenger to villain in a single act. killed the book for me.