Rak

see the mistake i made, typing bring instead of being ? things like that are present often enough

its a good naruto fanfic. but lets call it AU fanfic cuz of the many many changes. due to this bring author second language, there are many spelling and grammer mistakes but its a good story, give it a try. author needs a better synopsis, and probably a new book itself with a cover and a better release schedule. 24 chapters in 5 months is rookie numbers. gotta pump those up. maybe thats something which can be done as a repost with better editing like some other naruto fic ive seen.

thanks

no, not really. focus changes a bit from him becoming stronger to village building overall without much romance

while the story is good, author has butchered original harry potter's character. and for someone who supposedly gave up on it all and went through veil.... he sure doesnt act depressed even once. in fact is bit psychopathic. there is heavy influence of ideas and elements from the other fanfic but its slowly changing. im willing to give it a try.

OP mc with electromagnetic powers and uses some knowledge from earth to push industrialization. this is just around chunin exams, and kazekage just died and mc has taken over as new kage. its good translation, give it try