PegasiJ

ITS NOT A TRANSLATION EITHER!!!!!

Whilst the game of League may bring pain and suffering the show, trailers and lore are the opposite. Glad someone is doing a fanfic even with all of the factors to consider. He also be collecting all the baddies as well so that’s a plus :P

I’m officially done with this series. I purchased over 30 chapters for £5 on Patreon (good deal tbf), expecting some exciting developments, but I’ve been thoroughly disappointed. For ten chapters, absolutely nothing happens, and what’s worse, the MC becomes increasingly idiotic and unlikable with each paragraph. There’s no character development to speak of. The MC is constantly led around by his dick, refusing to learn from any of his mistakes. He keeps making empty promises like, “this is the last time,” yet his behaviour never changes. It’s embarrassing to watch him simp for multiple girls who’s so obsessed with another guy that she even threatens him with a gun. The kicker is he already has one of the best girls to himself- Instead of standing up for himself, he continues to chase after both girls that pine after someone else, trying to “win them over. when they clearly fancy the other bloke” Where’s the self-respect in that? He permanently lets everyone off the hook like a total pushover. It’s frustrating to see him act like a bitch when the writing tries hard to portray him as a 'giga chad', Multiple people even threatens to kill him, and what does he do? He lets them off time and time again and this time even heals her and act like everything is fine. When he finally has a chance with Clarke, she admits she wants to sleep with Finn but then backs out for some contrived ‘plot’ reasons. The MC just rolls with it, showing no real growth and just how much lack of self respect he has for himself. At this point, Finn seems like the true main character. He’s getting away with so much while the MC just simps around, barely using his powers and hiding behind poisons when he’s supposed to be the leader of the camp. The two main girls the MC is chasing are clearly pining after Finn instead, and have saved him and said to kill for him numerous times but completely flip when it's the MC's turn. Overall, this series has turned into a frustrating experience. t’s hard to root for someone who lets himself be walked all over.