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‘You were just born in the wrong era.’ That is something Vincent had heard countless times from his close ones.
And he agreed.
He knew where he could take the world should he had had the technology, but he could only do so much when the entire world tried to control and collar him. He pushed himself to the limits but ultimately was shackled by his humanity. Sadly the only solace he found was in stories where he could see men and women like him achieve what he could not.
Luckily enough however, he was given the chance to go to a world he knew allowed for almost anyone to have near limitless potential should one know how to grasp it. He simply needed to not die before reaching the peak.
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I'll be straight up honest bruh, everything was like 4-5 stars up till chapter 50, that's where everything started going downhill, bro got us attached to characters like da Vinci and Moka and just kinda gave them to other dudes, Mike to his son and Vinci to azazel MIGHT also have his other kids under his first son in thier peerage which he said he might to, if he does its just gonna go down even more, everything just had a downgrade, everything's forced and kinda bland now and characters(some)are doing some weird personality swap all the time
The protagonist was NTR'd by his own son... can you believe it? Lol its game over bruh gg [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
First of all, I LOVE THIS FANFIC! This take place at civil war meaning before canon dxd start so it's already going to be good. Romance is good so far, I do hope it's not big harem since I'm sick with it. We need more good story rather than good harem.
Honestly I should have have just listened to the critic reviews. The story is overall well put together with pretty good grammar and story development. Things are fine until chapter 49, but it isn't NTR like people are saying. It simply comes down to the author changing their mind about Moka being in the MCs harem, but the way its done feels like a massive betrayal to the readers. The author set expectations for Moka to join the MCs harem, built them up very well, but got chapter 49 and basically did a 180. Basically the author tells the readers Lith can't see Moka that way because she was a 'daughter figure', but turns around and makes Moka fall in love with her 'brother figure' in a few sentences. I get it author, you changed your mind and thats fine... but tell us how it happened. It was basically 'his son's blood tastes good too (100+ years timeskip) Moka loves his son now' ggez
Step 1: Create a waifu in story Step 2: Set her up, show her interest in MC Step 3: Do a timeskip during which waifu does 180 and goes for the son of MC Step 4: ??? Step 5: Live on with disappointment of what you have read just now Okay, to be fair, in my opinion the idea of having potential waifu change her mind for a someone is not bad at all. The issue was how it was delivered. For quite a few chapters there was a build-up showing that waifu wants to be with MC and is trying to break his 'defenses'. And then instead of showing us how she develops feelings for someone else and that she only feels familial love to MC we got a FAT TIMESKIP that just causes 180 of emotional development up to now. On top of that said waifu stays as one of the pieces of the MC instead of joining her new love which only increases giant disappointment. I do not believe that MC got NTR-d but can definitely see why some people say that.
Hmm, So . . at the end of synopsis The word "peak"** should be used instead of peek* . . . . PEAK : the point at which something is the highest, best, strongest, etc. PEEK : to take a quick glance eg. he peeked at the next chapter. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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Author has never heard of "show, don't tell." Literally every single chapter is the main character explaining what happened in his own head/as the narrator. Almost nothing actually happens in a different way. It reads less like a story and more like an info dump where the protagonist lets us know everything that happened.
Very good story so far!! Hope to see more!..................................!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.! m mmjbdbbsishdbdbakajsjslksksjsjsjsj
First of all: Don't be fooled by the chapter-count. If we consider the average length of a chapter on this platform, then this marvellous piece of fiction settles somewhere between 100 and 150 chapters at the point of this review. Writing Quality: The amount of mistakes is negligible and most of those are typos. Phrasing, dialogue and scene setting are superbly well done. Story Development: After an interesting prologue, the main character has a rather unique start into the world of DxD. He starts way before canon and the author does not rush. His pacing is well done and the time skips are reasonable with a well written recap of important happenings. If you want to know more, you should read the story, as I don't want to spoil anything. Character Design: The MC is a tad manipulative, but it never takes over the story to the point where we see schemes within schemes and plots within plots. Instead, he uses refreshing honesty where necessary, having mastered the ability to manipulate with well set kernels of truth. He is also well versed with lies and deception, as well as brute force, should it be necessary. He is rather intelligent, which actually shows in his actions, rather than just in the authors praise. Secondary main characters (as calling them supporting cast or even side characters would be rather insulting) is where the author really shines. He takes the time to flesh them out and give them personalities, that actually develop in a believable way. Sometimes, when there is a timeskip, that spans over a longer period of time, he'll skim over the development. They do act in a way fitting their characters, though, and we get small details over the course of the story, that explain the quirks and characteristics we see in them. This makes them relatable and fun to read. There wasn't a single PoV, that I truly disliked yet in this story. Updating Stability: Well, it's very nearly enough to sate my appetite for... nope, can't lie to you. It won't ever be enough. But his updates are rather stable and the chapter length is fantastic. World Background: He uses the DxD-verse as a template and borrows from other franchises in a playful and very integrative way. Nothing, that he writes into his story seems out of place, everything fits. The way he does that is honestly a bit admirable. Overall: This is the second time I've given a genuine 5-star review, I think? I'm rather picky in what to review, and most of the stories, that manage to impress me enough to post one have a little thing, that's a bit lacking. Not this one, though. Please try to get i to it, I'm rather sure you won't regret it!
I like the premise of an unfulfilled life getting a second chance. I like that you went over a setting that not many explore. Yet for all the excitement I felt before even reading your first episode I couldn't finish it. I have read a fair amount of fanfic so I have plenty experience with Gary Stu's type of characters and while some might be bearable I have learnt that neither of them end up being the least enjoyable as the story goes on. Still I end up reading them in hopes that someone surprises me making it work. With that said, I'm astounded by your main character monologue's in the first episode. It is so unique in a way that Paula Smith's coined term is not even remotely close to describe his pathological manifestation of self worth. He is not the perfect hero, he isn't smart, he isn't a moral pantheon either and I just know that at the moment he opens his mouth this character won't be the most attractive male on earth either. Yet for some reason the author thinks MC is. I believe we are in front of something new, and that demands a new term.
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The build up over a certain relationship just to let it go left a bad taste. Should’ve listened to the comments and stayed away.
The story in itself is interesting, good writing quality compared to most story. The main problem I have is with the MC's son, since his appearance, the story have gone down a lot. It's the first time I wish for a character to die to further the MC develoment.
This review is until chapter 51. I don’t know if the FF improve after this chapter. I recommend to read until chapter 49 before read the spoiler section. Writing Quality: 4/5 Some grammar error but it fine, I can understand. (I not native English speaker so I have a lot of those mistakes) Stability of Updates: 3/5 There is no visible schedule for updates. Story Development: 4/5 It’s good, sometimes It feel a little faster and you cannot understand what is happening but overall, it fine, most of the times you will have no problems understanding what the MC is doing and how the world is moving. World Background: 4/5 It feels good, I mean, the author makes some changes to fix a character on the story, also he make some original events on the story explain why things are like this. This is the spoiler section… Character Design: 3/5 Most of the character are from the canon or another animes, so don’t expect a lot of original character. Now the problem is… on chapter 49… this is a Before and After for this FF for most of us. I suggests you read till chapter 49 before continue reading because I don’t feel it’s a bad FF. Everything until this chapter was good for this point, means a lot of character development (at least more than other ff I have read) Well… the problem is, in the story the author put 2 characters most of us love, Moka from Rosario+Vampire and Milim from Tensura, there are in the peerage of the MC and everything seems to say both of them will be on the MC’s Harem (yeah, DxD ff without harem is not a DxD ff), but its not like this. Both of them will be in the MC’s son harem… well it could be fine if it’s only Milim (she never goes seriously for the MC) but Moka has another history… When MC “found” Moka she was a baby, so one of the excuses is the MC see Moka as a daughter/sister but the story tells us that Moka was in love with the MC (one side) then MC’s son born and her feelings change like nothing… years of feelings disappears because MC’s son has some potential and good blood... it makes me feels if Moka doesn’t get on a relationship with MC’s son soon he will have a son and she will fall in love with his son because he (the MC’s grandson) has better blood. The point is not that a character we love found another love interest but the story behind it was bad, there is no explanation or development of this change only bad excuses. Also, until this chapter we know nothing of this character except that his is the MC’s son, has a good potential and good blood taste for vampires… is like a heroine from the story goes to a relationship with a mob character. I feel after chapters of development of a character in one chapter everything goes to the trash can and change without reason.
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This is a good story but the Moka love change has weakened my love the story but i will pull though and read it. I just you understand why some people hate that choice but it is your story and your choice till the next chapter Peace.
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The first half was good, but the second half is not. It’s kinda like the actual story itself is gone at this point and all the author is doing is continuing to drop other anime/media characters into this “story” to continue it. No joke every chapter we kept getting introduced to new characters now…It’s not a sustainable way to keep a story going or have it be interesting to read. The second half of this story honestly needs to be completely scrapped or rewritten because it’s just plain bad at this point.
I can't give this a great score, I was really enjoying it at first, got a few crossovers and references here and there, the character gets pretty OP super quick (I am a bit of a fan of a character who trounces their opponents), but lately its been getting worse in my opinion. For 1, we are on chapter 51 and we still haven't made it to the present day. 2, the crossovers have become super excessive, I think that the author has to have crossed over with at least 15 different universes by now. 3, there has very little action until very recently. 4, The main character has become stagnant for the most part with their powers as far as I can tell, we aren't learning about anything new they can do or seeing anything cool. 5, we HEAR about all kinds of stuff that other people are doing, training, learning new techniques, becoming cooler, but we don't get to SEE any of that and just have to take their word on it. 6, the main character hasn't gone up against anyone his equal that I can think of, he hasn't really had any challenges, he just waves his hand and people disappear essentially. Those are the things I can think of off the top of my head that I see as issues. Really I wish I could have kept reading, but the sheer number of crossovers just finally made me too uncomfortable to continue, it barely even feels like DxD anymore and it turned me off of the book.
This a dxd fanfic but mc dont have a harem so of course this automaticaly become a trash dxd fanfic. worst of all author is one of these crazy people that dont like to change a pairing even in a fanfiction so grafyia the best girl of the series continue with the 2 worst character and siscon sirzech, so the level of this fic is even worse than a wish fulfilment one for me