It would be good to do a Harry Potter version of this but to start the story very early in the world and show the progression bit by bit then when the charater reaches modern times do a golden list
There are no wolves in the U.K
The updates are slow
I would say that this book is well written however the pace is to fast. You could slow down the pace of training and explain the cost of thing like training equipment and daily expenses how much you looted
This is one of the best novels I’ve read I know you are good at fan fics as I’ve read ring maker but I suggest you write your own story and world rather than fan fics becuase your works are really great
I’m looking thinking did I make a mistake just one chapter have I been spoiled or something
The quality is poo really bad really bad really really bad
It’s a great novel up to date with the latest chapters got to say the power gains is really slow it’s written different from other books and has a good style
Are you back now for good?
Cedric is a 4th or third year based on the goblet of fire making him the same year as the twins
Hogwarts: The Unscientific Wizard (TL)
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