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Given a second chance by a R.O.B Kenzo traded his knowledge of the Naruto story in exchange for being born a sage. Keeping his power a secret Kenzo must make his way in the unforgiving and dangerous world he has found himself in.
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I read up to Chapter 40 and I'm dissatisfied about how the story is written in the 1st point of view much like narration or diary few dialogue and interactions with other characters making the story like monotone Narration. The annoying part is the MC often handed his Made up Jutsus demanded by Hokage for preservation with some price or compensation that didn't even explain what price/ cost he receive.
At first I thought this story was great, I thought it was 5 stars because I really liked it sadly as time went by every chapter that was once good is now mediocre. Author I recommend you to read from the beginning your own story and think if you are really following a good story line or just writing for the sake of writing.
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Ahem good narrative, grammar doesn't matter to me, I like the character of the mc, good strength development, the interactions are good I guess although there is a need to improve on that.
Te da la impresión de ser naruto pero bastante diferente con una pizca de "slice of life" y hace que la historia sea más tranquila de lo normal. Perfecto si te interesa ese tipo de historias
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I’m just agreeing with another review why are you writing the story like it’s a diary?
I am giving it 5 star because its by the most satisfying naruto fic i read recently. I am not saying its the best fic out there it has flaws but it was enjoyable read and i am eagerly waiting the next chapters . Keep up the good work
This is one of the best novels I’ve read I know you are good at fan fics as I’ve read ring maker but I suggest you write your own story and world rather than fan fics becuase your works are really great
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Great story, it's fun without any of the edgier cliches most authors like to cram in to their fics. I love that it'd laid back but is more than ready to burst with action and comedy
Honestly a good solid story, it’s very unique and is one of those where the novel/character is only as smart as the author. Then the author is literally brilliant and a very good at putting it into their writing. The author is very good a writing as well(something you would expect from a top novel instead of a fanfic). The author is also good languist as in he has a large vocabulary that shines through in certain places and has good grammar. Overall I like the intelligence of the character and novel as well as the unique power system that the character builds up.
Though with this story being a experimental writing style as the author stated, reads slightly odd, I personally find it rather refreshing. With the concept of this story being even more refreshing, as a slice of life style. The main character is rather interesting and driven, overall though it may use most of the usual power grabbing tropes of other Naruto fanfictions, it does it in a way that makes sense to the character. Definitely recommend as a nice night's worth of a read as of 75 chapters.
I am someone who is quite critical and the stories I read have certain requirements and I can say about yours it is wonderful, it is honestly art
Lost interest in it pretty fast. Very cliche.