Leonholdt

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Leonholdt
Leonholdt
1 days ago
Replied to Aizashi

probably. seems the same level of intelligence as the author/translater.

"Indeed, the nobles of this world are not to be underestimated."

Mercenary System: I can increase innate potential !

Mercenary System: I can increase innate potential !

War · Kasuma

Leonholdt
Leonholdt
1 days ago
Commented

huh, guess the baron is doing it while Max there stays at home with his 8 men. this just had to be the paragraph I jumped to. Edit or at least go over your work once or twice. good giddy lord

"Maxime, this will only be a down payment after I've eradicated the bandit gang I'll give you 300 gold pieces."

Mercenary System: I can increase innate potential !

Mercenary System: I can increase innate potential !

War · Kasuma

Leonholdt
Leonholdt
1 days ago
Commented

so much incoherent bumbling in a story building attempt. this will have to be a no-brainer read and paragraph skipping since so much appears redundant.

"I'm a rather tolerant person, naturally, but it's a different matter when it comes to the mercenaries of the Saber-toothed Tigers," Maxime declared in a cold tone as he tightened his grip, causing the new mercenary to choke.

Mercenary System: I can increase innate potential !

Mercenary System: I can increase innate potential !

War · Kasuma

Leonholdt
Leonholdt
6 days ago
Replied to Angela_Davis_6557

It's a translated novel after all. I wouldn't ever expect "living" interactions to be a thing. it's always focused on how the MC is always right, even when they do wrong they are right. even when they are obnoxious and annoying, petty and childish (all the time in novels like this) they are saints and above reproach. comical in a way.

"Having awakened the Colorless Seed of Torch, the Spectral Shuttle has already merged. Tomorrow at eight in the morning, the first exploration of a foreign River Domain will take place," he reported while continuing to absorb and convert the Blood Qi Energy within his body.

Global Era of Star Trekking

Global Era of Star Trekking

Sci-fi · Mountain high and ground distant

Leonholdt
Leonholdt
7 days ago
Commented

the joy of random additions without process

The rest, naturally, would be training another 100 Evil Curse Spirit Monsters by Evil Speech, which were exclusive elite troops born from Death Curse Priests combined with Death Curse, just like the Frenzy Blood Spirit Monsters were.

Your Lord Has A Screw Loose?

Your Lord Has A Screw Loose?

Sci-fi · Tai Bai Water Lord

Leonholdt
Leonholdt
7 days ago
Commented

brain needs to be turned off. assigned personal names to them all, and no longer read who is who.

Shadow had risen 3 levels directly, upgrading Basic Understanding of Death, Basic Mysticism, and Basic Magic Power to the Intermediate level.

Your Lord Has A Screw Loose?

Your Lord Has A Screw Loose?

Sci-fi · Tai Bai Water Lord

Leonholdt
Leonholdt
7 days ago
Replied to Phetia

that would imply logic being used, like the other wants them to be "real" as a' fairly certain mtl translation, novel made to show and expound upon how frighteningly "intelligent" the MC is itll turn into showing robot no AI attempt reactions from people that will, obviously, detract from the story along with how he magically already did things with no context or ability, then the national pride will kick in and stomp the rest. Basically, it's a cookie cutter rendition of an interesting concept. I'd turn your brain off reading it, though

With only Demon Blood busy running around, Qin Muye didn't feel very secure. Today was the seventh day, the last day of the newbie period.

Your Lord Has A Screw Loose?

Your Lord Has A Screw Loose?

Sci-fi · Tai Bai Water Lord

Leonholdt
Leonholdt
8 days ago
Commented

says the most fearful person ever.

"Doomed for sure?" Yu Hong said calmly, "The residents of Hope City who got crushed were no different. Instead of entrusting my fate to the alliance army, to the protection of others, I'd rather rely on myself. At least even in death, I wouldn't live in fear."

Night of Despair

Night of Despair

Eastern · Get Lost

Leonholdt
Leonholdt
9 days ago
Commented

about what I'd expect from a self-righteous moron. doesn't wanna lose his "humanity" when he might be the least human

So, he just broke her limbs and finally knocked her unconscious.

Night of Despair

Night of Despair

Eastern · Get Lost

Leonholdt
Leonholdt
9 days ago
Commented

thay would require fore thought and knowledge. I wouldn't expect that much from these novels.

His cell phone had long run out of power, and he could only roughly estimate time using a sun dial he had improvised based on the shadows cast on the ground.

Night of Despair

Night of Despair

Eastern · Get Lost

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    Fantasy

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  • Ring Mancer original

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    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE R18 SYSTEM

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