摘要
How would you feel if you were reborn against your will into a new world? To have that choice ripped away from you by one God or another? I can tell you I was pissed beyond belief at the fact I had the choice taken from me and displayed that anger rather violently.
So now I find myself in a new world, living a new life with the people who birthed me. People I do not truly care about. One of only two plus' in this is the fact my parents run a Monster Farm. The second is that I seem to have been granted a sort of System, the Progenitor System. It allows me to Create, Combine or Improve Creatures. This is limited by my Systems level, but it has kept me sane so far. Only time will tell if I will make this new life something worthwhile.
(Still a piss poor Synapsis. I'll improve it at a later date.)
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This fiction is a hobby, it will be updated only when I feel the urge to write, or the desire. My life, public and private will always take precedence so I will give no release date promises, ever.
I do not want, desire, or need those Power Stones people use to vote either. If you like the fiction you like it, if you hate it you hate it. It does not affect me one way or the other.
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I enjoyed the story until chapter 13 when it went stupidly dark and insane. It was totally out of place with no for-shadowing. Also the main character is a former marine and cop that has died once already why oh why did he give in with NO resistance at all. I'm not saying get rid of that darkspawn or whatever it is but it doesn't fit in the story with the way you put it in. It's like BLAM your mother killed you out of nowhere kind of placement when your mom just proved she loves you not but a minute before. The monster was ok, placement in story wasn't, and the goblins just smiling wanting to die is nonsense.
This novel is really interesting so far, I don't believe I've seen anything quite like it. If I have it isn't anywhere near as good as this piece of art. My only inconvenience with it is the updates, but I realize you are most likely busy or just don't want to spend all your free time on this; so it is obviously not your fault and I will not complain about it. Everything else about this story is perfect and I cannot wait for what it will turn out like. Anyways this is my opinion and I thank you for making these chapters whenever you have time. Keep up the good work! Sincerely, Your Friendly Neighborhood Reader :)
Good story,long chapter.there is no 2 year old killing bandid........good work until now..... .......... ..........asdgjgssgbnxcbnkjhvghjjjkkoljhgghjjjkhgfghjjhgvhjjjjvcxcbjjbgfgjkigfhjnbcfhjkojfffvjjhfdcbjklnvffhjjkl
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