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Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!
4.56 (271 評分)
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After being hit by a car, Oliver wakes up only to find himself reincarnated as the 4th young master in one of the most powerful clans in the world. However, just after his birth, he is declared to be useless by his mother.
Devastated, he later realizes that he has been born into the world of a novel that he used to read. This world is plagued by war between exorcists and demons, where only the strong survive while the weak are devoured.
In such a cruel world where death is only a mile away, he, born without talent, is expected to only suffer his whole life until he hears it...
[Ding! Conditions met. Binding System has been activated.]
A system that guarantees a 10x reward...
[Ding! Target has awakened one of the 4 special eyes!]
[Obtaining 10 times the reward....]
[Host has awakened the...]
It is not only a matter of time before he can reach the top of the world and live comfortably!
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Author, please update faster! This novel is so good. Was getting sick of cultivation novels with pathetic brainless mc. Finally a novel where MC has a good brain and the system is also 10X reward system! Upload faster and I'll give you more coins.
Honest reviews are here.. [Spoiler Alert] This novel is about an MC who reincarnated into a novel world and was born in one of the most powerful families in the world.. But MC can be considered as a trash by his family due to lack of mana affinity. Hence, he was unable to become an exorcist, whose purpose was to fight against the demon.. Actually, he got his golden finger "the binding system" since he was born but unable to use it due to the way the families treat him.. He has been locked in the room and unable to meet anyone except guard, teacher, and maid.. MC, as someone who has knowledge about this novel world, the future event, and important character who plays an important role, he tries to use a binding system with his twin sister.. This novel is not like wuxia or xianxia, it give a different feeling.. It kinda nice that I found this novel.. Except for the fact that I found it too earlier.. It just has 33 chapters for now.. I feel it is not enough.. I need more.. Also, I hope there is no love between siblings.. The 10 times reward is also good.. Some novels have some things like 10,000 fold system or 1 million times rewards, but even after 10,000 fold rewards, the item/treasure just improved slightly, like one rank higher only.. But this novel is different.. The 10 times reward is really give a huge improvement, like it has evolved the treasure/pill for 10 times.. I hope it stays like this and not weakening the effect..
Fairly common tropes mash well together with unique world backgrounds, or well, not so common ones. The author does a good job at baiting readers with the usual tropes and then actually offers them an actual, proper story with some soul to it, well done
honestly the book is good, but the author lacks the ability to convey. He overexplains, repeats, drags a scene for far too long, destroys the charcters personality he built by making them say and do dumb stuff…there’s so much I can talk about. Author a message to you. Idk if it’s ur greed to pump out more chapters, but ur quality has drastically fallen after starting premium. This is how you lose fans. It’s honestly disappointing.
The premise of the story is very good but the progress of the plot is very slow so that makes the story very boring to read and there are too many cliffhangers in this book (I mean almost every chapter in this book ends up with a cliffhanger)
While I believe this story has a lot of potential, author needs to stop repeating sentences and delaying the story. Also, please stop explaining every single detail about how everyone is going to behave if something "would" happen and instead just show us things actually happening. example: how the elders would behave if the MC killed a main branch character, like bro, we get it without you saying the hypothetical scenario, so stop delaying the story and get on with it.
Only 17 chapters, but I enjoyed every single one of them. This is a five star and I can easily see this novel going big. Worth!!!
good story with a lot of filler chapters.most of the chapters are with repeating content with different wordings to increase word count. Author Hope you think about the readers who are paying for your work as well ..
I don’t know… I just think it’s boring. The premise sounded really interesting, but the execution is meh. Too many moments where the mc just acts stupid in my opinion. 10x reward power seems really op, but in the end it’s just not implemented well. Also I personally just don’t like the mc that much, he doesn’t really resonate with me. I can see why many might enjoy this novel, it’s just not for me. Slow progression, (imo) boring mc and the badly implemented 10x reward power - I really have to push myself to continue reading the chapters. The novel is just not for me.
Overall the story is good except for the fact that the author made the age of the characters be 6 years old. If you Google it, most children learn to read at 6. However, for some reason, the author made these 6 years old able to hunt demons, have complex emotions and thoughts, a 6 year old girl went down the mountain by herself, tried solving her clans financial problems, and these 6 years old children are building muscles that are strong enough to wield swords and slice people in half which is ridiculous. The protagonist is also plotting revenge against 6 year old kids which is so petty. Imagine an adult trying to get revenge on children which is ridiculous.
Too much forced plot and repeatings, plus author appearently doesn't care about what he wrote a few chapters prior and constantly changes things like how at the beginning he says the mc is born a few days after his sister but 10 chap later it turns to weeks after, and this is not the only time something like this happens. All these things just breaks the flow of the story causing readers to quit.
A great novel, the MC is neutral so far, neither good nor evil, he takes revenge on those who mess with him. Apparently, somewhat narrow-minded who does not forget grudges. The system is also interesting, returning tenfold rewards. MC is also unable to abuse the system since this will reveal his strength to the targets. MC is also intelligent and can think two steps ahead usually. There's not much to comment on as it's still going on but so far it was a 5 star experience and worth the read.
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Honestly the premise of the story was interesting but there are a number of areas that the author falls short, bringing the quality of the story down. Primarily is the over reliance on exposition/info dumps that destroy the flow of story with sometimes multiple chapters on unnecessary information that the reader is forced to skim through. This is specially obvious whenever a character is introduced or their emotions are explained. The author sometimes fails the wise saying of “show, don’t tell.” As a result I’ve been forced to scroll and skip whole chapters. Which I never regret because the info I skipped is never important or brought up again. A reader should not feel like the chapter they read was worthless, specially if they are using coins or money to read them. Second reason I dropped the story was the characters. Some of them are boring and frankly uninteresting. The biggest one being the MC himself. He just honestly feels bland and forgettable. The author is inconsistent on his mental maturity, at times acting as if he is some smart calculating man and at others making him act as if he is some below average kid. The character that’s actually interesting is the sister of the MC because she feels like an actual character with a developing personality that readers can get invested in. Everyone else in the cast is mainly forgettable. Final reason, is that sometimes the setting feels uninspired. Despite being a completely different world, it just doesn’t strike as that interesting. If anything it just feels like another copy of Japan done by an author that grew up with manga and anime. There’s nothing wrong with a setting in Japan, but either just fully make it Japan, or give a reason for their similarities. A lot of authors fail when they try make their stories be just like their favorite anime or manga, which at times I felt this story was trying to be a more higher fantasy jujutsu kaisen combined with demon slayer. I think as the author keeps writing more and bettering his craft, they can make a great story. However at this time, this story does not stand out.
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So far it's pretty interesting to read, my biggest issue is how redundant 1/3 of every chapter feels, and how short they are. Once one thing is explained in a paragraph the next one or the one after is the same explanation just worded slightly different, and makes it feel like you are more interested in hitting a word count minimum than progressing the story.
Honestly this is a good story. The Author slowly to moderately speeds up world building but that's fine. he post one story a day which is good on my book. The characters including the MC hardly get any tetails. The story overall is well made and will keep you hook till the 2×ad wall pops up on you.
I was so freaking tired of the same blablabla from the other novels that I almost missed this amazing, wonderful story. Truly different (for the better) than other novels, I can’t recommend it enough.
5 stars because it is. Different from typical settings.