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The novel's premise is good but the way the author keeps repeating and stretches an arc is insane Just from chapter 250+ until the current chapter that is not locked behind a paywall - 272 One battle, one fucking battle stretched to fucking over 20+ chapters Author keeps describing and repeating words of how scared they are, what they feel and things like that which could be all explained in a few chapters not over 20 Extreme coin-grabbing/cash-grabbing tactics right there All those explanations just for it to be barely relevant to the plot. Not only that, the chapters are short as hell. It literally took 2 short as hell chapters to explain how an enemy of an mc was scared like what?
Highly underrated novel, it should be higher in popularity. You got your classic troupe in the beginning but his ability to bond with anyone and change it at will with just a touch and get 10× their powers is unique. The author has come up with a plot that's so far is uniquely original as well. I can't go into too much detail without spoiling but give it a shot. Review as of ch. 283
till which chapter will he keep hiding his powers? it's so stupid tbh losing from that bella girl just cuz her sister's gonna get sad ahhhh too stupid fr and it's almost chapter 200 and he is still 9? nah it's to bad....don't recommend it.
Bro...please update 2 chaps a day and the novel is soooooo slow paced please write faster.
Honestly it started so well. and interesting world building i mean little slow and not super well thought out but still interesting. then it got so bad this whole devil world shit had been going on for so long i completely forgot about the other shit but i digress i dont know if its like a first time writing something like this but honestly its got good bones you just need to focus on the detail and pacing more
The world background and the story is definitely unique, i feel great. But it feels like dragging work in the writing area, it would be good to keep its flow in a stable way.
It's shit thats what it is. The author mixed together [Chinese+Korean] mc= This mc. He does not get any 10 X reward within even the current the inky time it did was for his eyes and after he gave her something(It never triggers again before this even though mc/elder/npc say that she is getting things constantly from the family)and that's it while in conversation everyone says that the person mc bound to is increasing her powers everyday yet mc does not get anything no reward na da then their is the forced plot part so its shit
The chapter schedule could be better, that would be great indeed. The only issue is pacing which is very slow ngl.
It wasn't that bad as people said, I stopped at chapter 50. It's still very entertaining to read, however I do agree everything just drags on so it kinda feel like author is repetiting contents. Other than that, the novel is still enjoyable.
Bad. Just bad, I've read up to 50 chapter, I can say that you can ignore half of that 50 and still won't really miss anything in the story. chapters were mostly fillers and lack substance, also theres's more holes than plot, haha lmao. I'm done with this, as early as 20 chapter ahead, it's torture to read.
Reasons: MC doesn't want to change the plot and keep it the way it is. He prefers to keep his character as an extra and stay low key. Doesn't fight back grts beaten black and blue, doesn't kill when he has the chance. Known as the weakest of the clan, the useless son and prefers thag way. Doesn't seem to have a plan to change that. . That's enough for me I guess.
I was expecting more but was disappointed. The setting seems alright but the characters isn't really doing it for me. They just aren't that charming to me, just so irritating to read.
Overall, it's a great story and a hidden gem. There are a few flaws, but nothing major that you can't overlook. You might not even notice them. However, don't expect regular updates every day. That's why the ranking is so low. I know what the author is trying to do (I'm in his Discord channel), but he's doing it the wrong way. 🤷♂️ Anyway good luck fellow readers Author, keep up the good work and post more chapters. Thanks
Congratulations, Author, for winning the WSA 2024! 🎉👏 Wishing you great success with your novel. By the way, could you please update us on the book? The updates have been a bit slow lately. 😊🐌
can't belive you won win win with a bunch of fake reviews while deleting all bad reviews including mine but hey at least you won a bag
Congratulations on winning the WSA 2024....and i am starting ur novel right here and right now...:]
novel was good so far everything is perfect but i just don't like this slow update on the chapter and need atleast two chapter a day [img=gift]
The book has a good potential, but plot turns too light. In fact, there's barely any plot. Author was intentionally dragging scenes for far too long. (Like in ch 90 or 91 where Ophelia just stared at him for the whole chapter or ch 136-137 where all that happen is talk about the Alison's bad cooking.) The author really does one step per chapter. In short, there's barely any content per chapter. Imagine paying for 1k-1.5k words chapter just to read a chapter where Oliver takes one step, repeatedly explain stuff in slightly different wording, and the rest are just over explaining monologue that doesn't even add to the story/plot at all. Although I only read up to 140ish chapter, beside it being a paid chapter, I don't feel like reading something like this was worth the time at all. I suggest stop dragging the story, stop over explaining stuff (you're cheating the word count), and reduce the irrelevant scene/monologue (again, you're cheating the word count and is making the book BORING.)
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The setting is interesting but the auther lacks the ability to properly convey it. The grammer is sloppy and the sentences can be long and confusing making for a hard read at times. The characters motivations are also hard to follow. They often times act in contrast to their established believes and goals making it hard to relate to them. Overall i can say this novel is not for me. It is extremely edgy to the point of cringe and the writing quality is something i just can't get over. Dropped
I dropped it to chapter 20 after trying really hard to read it. It's cool how the author develops Nadia's inner feelings and makes a decent fight sequence, but everything else seems like he doesn't care. The MC system is not well described. The plot is always very convenient and often illogical. MC repeatedly does and thinks illogical things as a mere plot device that doesn't even bother to make sense within its own rules. Obs: Before anyone says, I'm not interested in reading to see if the work theoretically turns out decent in chapter 99 or 200, it's boring now and I'm not going to torture myself like that.
ur novel chapter updates are decreasing day by day , it will be more interesting if we get atleast 7 chapters per week
The novel's premise is good but the way the author keeps repeating and stretches an arc is insane Just from chapter 250+ until the current chapter that is not locked behind a paywall - 272 One battle, one fucking battle stretched to fucking over 20+ chapters Author keeps describing and repeating words of how scared they are, what they feel and things like that which could be all explained in a few chapters not over 20 Extreme coin-grabbing/cash-grabbing tactics right there All those explanations just for it to be barely relevant to the plot. Not only that, the chapters are short as hell. It literally took 2 short as hell chapters to explain how an enemy of an mc was scared like what?
Highly underrated novel, it should be higher in popularity. You got your classic troupe in the beginning but his ability to bond with anyone and change it at will with just a touch and get 10× their powers is unique. The author has come up with a plot that's so far is uniquely original as well. I can't go into too much detail without spoiling but give it a shot. Review as of ch. 283
till which chapter will he keep hiding his powers? it's so stupid tbh losing from that bella girl just cuz her sister's gonna get sad ahhhh too stupid fr and it's almost chapter 200 and he is still 9? nah it's to bad....don't recommend it.
Bro...please update 2 chaps a day and the novel is soooooo slow paced please write faster.
Honestly it started so well. and interesting world building i mean little slow and not super well thought out but still interesting. then it got so bad this whole devil world shit had been going on for so long i completely forgot about the other shit but i digress i dont know if its like a first time writing something like this but honestly its got good bones you just need to focus on the detail and pacing more
The world background and the story is definitely unique, i feel great. But it feels like dragging work in the writing area, it would be good to keep its flow in a stable way.
It's shit thats what it is. The author mixed together [Chinese+Korean] mc= This mc. He does not get any 10 X reward within even the current the inky time it did was for his eyes and after he gave her something(It never triggers again before this even though mc/elder/npc say that she is getting things constantly from the family)and that's it while in conversation everyone says that the person mc bound to is increasing her powers everyday yet mc does not get anything no reward na da then their is the forced plot part so its shit
The chapter schedule could be better, that would be great indeed. The only issue is pacing which is very slow ngl.
It wasn't that bad as people said, I stopped at chapter 50. It's still very entertaining to read, however I do agree everything just drags on so it kinda feel like author is repetiting contents. Other than that, the novel is still enjoyable.
Bad. Just bad, I've read up to 50 chapter, I can say that you can ignore half of that 50 and still won't really miss anything in the story. chapters were mostly fillers and lack substance, also theres's more holes than plot, haha lmao. I'm done with this, as early as 20 chapter ahead, it's torture to read.
Reasons: MC doesn't want to change the plot and keep it the way it is. He prefers to keep his character as an extra and stay low key. Doesn't fight back grts beaten black and blue, doesn't kill when he has the chance. Known as the weakest of the clan, the useless son and prefers thag way. Doesn't seem to have a plan to change that. . That's enough for me I guess.
I was expecting more but was disappointed. The setting seems alright but the characters isn't really doing it for me. They just aren't that charming to me, just so irritating to read.
Overall, it's a great story and a hidden gem. There are a few flaws, but nothing major that you can't overlook. You might not even notice them. However, don't expect regular updates every day. That's why the ranking is so low. I know what the author is trying to do (I'm in his Discord channel), but he's doing it the wrong way. 🤷♂️ Anyway good luck fellow readers Author, keep up the good work and post more chapters. Thanks
Congratulations, Author, for winning the WSA 2024! 🎉👏 Wishing you great success with your novel. By the way, could you please update us on the book? The updates have been a bit slow lately. 😊🐌
can't belive you won win win with a bunch of fake reviews while deleting all bad reviews including mine but hey at least you won a bag
Congratulations on winning the WSA 2024....and i am starting ur novel right here and right now...:]
novel was good so far everything is perfect but i just don't like this slow update on the chapter and need atleast two chapter a day [img=gift]
The book has a good potential, but plot turns too light. In fact, there's barely any plot. Author was intentionally dragging scenes for far too long. (Like in ch 90 or 91 where Ophelia just stared at him for the whole chapter or ch 136-137 where all that happen is talk about the Alison's bad cooking.) The author really does one step per chapter. In short, there's barely any content per chapter. Imagine paying for 1k-1.5k words chapter just to read a chapter where Oliver takes one step, repeatedly explain stuff in slightly different wording, and the rest are just over explaining monologue that doesn't even add to the story/plot at all. Although I only read up to 140ish chapter, beside it being a paid chapter, I don't feel like reading something like this was worth the time at all. I suggest stop dragging the story, stop over explaining stuff (you're cheating the word count), and reduce the irrelevant scene/monologue (again, you're cheating the word count and is making the book BORING.)
揭示劇透 The setting is interesting but the auther lacks the ability to properly convey it. The grammer is sloppy and the sentences can be long and confusing making for a hard read at times. The characters motivations are also hard to follow. They often times act in contrast to their established believes and goals making it hard to relate to them. Overall i can say this novel is not for me. It is extremely edgy to the point of cringe and the writing quality is something i just can't get over. Dropped
I dropped it to chapter 20 after trying really hard to read it. It's cool how the author develops Nadia's inner feelings and makes a decent fight sequence, but everything else seems like he doesn't care. The MC system is not well described. The plot is always very convenient and often illogical. MC repeatedly does and thinks illogical things as a mere plot device that doesn't even bother to make sense within its own rules. Obs: Before anyone says, I'm not interested in reading to see if the work theoretically turns out decent in chapter 99 or 200, it's boring now and I'm not going to torture myself like that.
ur novel chapter updates are decreasing day by day , it will be more interesting if we get atleast 7 chapters per week
5 stars because it is. Different from typical settings.