Gorloww

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Gorloww
Gorloww
2 months ago
Posted

My god how can someone willingly write something so brain dead. I could faceroll on my keyboard and something more logical than this would come out. Medieval Fantasy with child labour laws so that you force the MC into a "tragic backstory" is plain retarded. "he can't get a job until he is 15" excuse is so dumb and ignorant of both medieval times and event current times living conditions for poor people. my god I would have to write a novel to explain everything wrong about this book but let me give you the TLDR: the name should be changed to "how to correctly NOT use your infinite power"

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Gorloww
Gorloww
6 months ago
Commented

what did he expect? a ransacked room? so much filler in this book it's insane

"The room is the same as I left it in the morning" Lucius muttered with a smile.

Divine Necromancer: I Can Design My Own Summons

Divine Necromancer: I Can Design My Own Summons

Fantasy · Eternal_Soveregin

Gorloww
Gorloww
6 months ago
Replied to Karl_Queflander

same thing happened with the summoned skeletons, he summoned 6 but then they became 8...

Aidan, the envoy, and other inspectors turned around to face the six statues.

Divine Necromancer: I Can Design My Own Summons

Divine Necromancer: I Can Design My Own Summons

Fantasy · Eternal_Soveregin

Gorloww
Gorloww
6 months ago
Replied to TKRed_7425

I bet she will be part of the harem and because of that she will attract trouble from jealous men. There is a 99℅ chance she will be useless towards the middle of the story because she can't keep up with the MC. 80℅ chance she will get kidnapped and the MC has to rescue her or she will be forced into marriage. xD

"That girl you see there is named Zoe, she belongs to the branch of the Great Ice Clan.

Divine Necromancer: I Can Design My Own Summons

Divine Necromancer: I Can Design My Own Summons

Fantasy · Eternal_Soveregin

Gorloww
Gorloww
6 months ago
Replied to Fool_King

same.. it would be at least a bit bearable if he acts like that with everyone but this fixation on creating an "antagonist" that has 0 reason to be antagonistic towards the MC is just cringe I imagine there are normal people in the world that don't have divine powers, does this antagonist go out of his way to kill them when he is outside of school? his whole existence makes no sense

"You their trash, trash like you will never be able to pass the exams" Asher announced as he walked towards the gate.

Divine Necromancer: I Can Design My Own Summons

Divine Necromancer: I Can Design My Own Summons

Fantasy · Eternal_Soveregin

Gorloww
Gorloww
7 months ago
Posted

Low tier, zero effort story that doesn't even follow it's own premise and instead keeps putting characters from other more known Chinese literature into it. The main character will barely use the upgrade system for his land, in fact you will pull your hair out when you discover at chapter 300 that he can use other resources to upgrade his land but wtv. the author tired to focus on kingdom building, but knowing the MC comes from earth into a "medieval cultivation" style era, I don't understand why he keeps focusing so much on the old ways of running a dynasty which are inefficient and prone to corruption, he doesn't even try to apply modern concept and his territory basically stays in the dark ages but now with portals and potions.

Gorloww
Gorloww
7 months ago
Commented

proud of what exactly? winning at a dice game? That's like being proud of being born in a rich family, or in a 1 st world country instead of a canibal tribe in the amazon. it's not an accomplishment, it's just dumb luck. Also, why does he think he is a genius exactly? Then again every Chinese novel does this, they keep calling people born with special talents "genius" as if it was an acquired skill or something. By that logic monkeys are geniuses at walking and fish are dumb because they can't walk but horses? they are the true 1 in a million paragon of a genius worthy of being a core disciple and direct students of the sect leader. truly, horses are the heavens chosen.

Gorloww
Gorloww
7 months ago
Commented

This is exactly why I stopped reading novels with systems where the MC was just some loser in his previous life and the system just gives him OP powers and plot armor. After all if you give a big red button to launch nuclear weapons, it doesn't matter who the owner is, it might as well be a baby and it would do the same damage as a loser MC.

He was a demon due to circumstance. It just happened that he gained all this power out of nowhere. If they were in his stead, those professionals, experienced men—they would be much more capable than himself already.

Mind Demon's Path of Domination

Mind Demon's Path of Domination

Fantasy · CoughBlood

Gorloww
Gorloww
7 months ago
Replied to The_Guren_sama

Yeah, I forgot this was an academy novel tbh, the author is unnecessarily verbose to describe things that don't happen or the multiple povs about the same incident. I mean this whole chapter was just basically, MC woke up, MC didn't capture anything, MC found nadia, Nadia is fighting two demons. that's it and it took a whole chapter to say this. the fact that he wastes paragraphs to say that the MC hasn't captures anything is frustrating. I can write a whole book about things that don't happen. Mike didn't achieve godhood in his first 12 years of life. Julie failed to reach her quota in the first 3 hours of her shift at the red light district. Susan didn't find the pasta in silence four of the supermarket. The demon king didn't have the erotic dream he was wishing for in his previous sleep session. I could expand any of these topics and write about how each character feels and even offer different POVs, but for the love of all that is sacred that would be a waste of time in writing and reading.

Gorloww
Gorloww
7 months ago
Commented

if nothing happens next chapter I will be dropping this, I'm tired of paying for chapters that have nothing in them.