/ Anime & Comics / Werewolf Lord through the multiverse
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MC dies and reincarnates in Twilight with a mission from ROB. Destroy the volturi. If he completes his mission, he can travel to the worlds he actually wants to travel to.
This is my first fan-fiction, so constructive critisism is welcome.
There will be NO harem, so don't ask for it.
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Pleasantly surprised by the quality of this novel, I don't really like Twilight much but still gave it a shot and I was not disappointed. Great read! Give it a go.
nice different start to the other twilight fics looking forward to what happens in the future. any clue on the release schedule? .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is a thoroughly interesting and engaging story. The world of twilight has never been more interesting to me. The MC is overpowered, but isnt a total ass, or somekind of unrealistic character. Hes a powerful werewolf and a spartan warrior and is honest, kind and respectable to those who treat him the same, but woe to those he calls his enemies or those who threaten his family. I i usually hate when Fanfics try to forcibly change things in the story without thinking them through, but this managed to do it in the best way possible all while progressing perfectly as a story. The original story Of twilight is changed, but it never feels forced or ridiculous, it flows naturally. The characters from both Twilght and Danmachi are done jusitice and the story only seems to be getting all the more interesting with the new power system. The plot did seem slightly off at times, but it always came around. The comedy is on point and the grammar issues are nonexistent, or atleast unnoticable. The sex scene came out of nowhere and felt out of place and werid at first, but was not something unwanted, nor unapreciated. The fact we never really find out what happens to Irina bothered me for abit though. All in all a truly engaging and wonderful read. I truly recomend it. And to the author- Thank you for writing this story.
The MC is basically mind controlled to love someone, and then happily goes along with it. So this is like the opposite of a harem novel but to the extreme as the MC is just simp with major oneitis, and the romance is literally forced.
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I like how femris acts but I with the updating was faster the story was Great. But I don't get are the any more werewolf packs. Will he train the werewolf in combat.
I will only tell you what i did not like: - it is rushed - there is not the best conversation between characters - relationship is made over minutes and is not explored almost ignored, it simply just exists (too little fenrir x alice moments) - you kept pushing for godzila to be there just to be there - events feels like diary, i just could not immerse myself in this - you kept adding new enemies that should not even be there Even though i would usualy not continue reading story like this but this one is somehow different. Maybe because of my opinion that this was not writen be somebody that know how to write profesionaly (sorry) and the feel i get by reading, i just somehow looked over these flaws. Concept and my interest in how the story will continue kept me from leaving. In the end, was entertained.
A very enjoyable read. I truly recommend it. ............... ................................. ......................................................... ........................................................................... ......................... ...................... ................ .......
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Great novel. I really hope the author doesn't drop it because I would love to read more of it. Author, if your reading this, keep up the good work!😁
Good novel i like it. Very very like it.. thanks!!! AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Good
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Love where the story is going and his powers. Do you have any ideas on what worlds he’ll be visiting in the future? And if so would his body adapt to allow him to learn powers from those worlds for him and Alice? like magic in fairy tail and haki in one piece. Just an idea but maybe keep with the theme of having to complete a goal in each world he goes to like defeat archnologia and in fairy tail and Corrupt parts of the world government In one piece before he can move on to the next world but also allow him to be able to return to previous worlds he visited and completed his mission goal on whenever he wants and the current world He has a mission on will enter stasis until he comes back why time will work normally for previous worlds he visited and completed his goal on no matter where he is.
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brilliant story.......................................................... ........................................................
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Hi, author here, shamelessly giving myself 5 stars. This is my first story ever so please be kind. That aside, hope you enjoy my story. Author out.