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作者: Doctor_Blue

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When the Universe first gained sentience; The First Firmament was born and out of boredom of the first few billion years, he created the first sentient beings and gave them the task to create and destroy life for his own enjoyment. Thus began the story of MARVEL, as known by many...
But! what if there was another...
what if the Universe gave birth to two sentient beings...
The one unknown to the Universe itself...
The other Primordial...

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As it is my first time writing fanfiction, that too about Marvel of all the topics, I am not sure how it will come out at the end; as it is not decided just yet. Now, about the MC/OC, he is more prone to sit back and observe the surroundings, than to partake in action; though it is not like he will never use fisticuffs, yet, he will still be more of a background character, most of the time, but still, an important part of the story. to put it simply, he will be more like a writer writing new characters or retconning previous ones, at least on Earth. As for, if this story is interesting or just plain boring; I would say 30-70, the former being boring and the latter being interesting... this too depends on the readers, maybe for some, it's 100% interesting or for some it's 50-50... Well, this is all I can think about, for now... maybe later I will edit in new information... until then, please enjoy...

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