摘要
It is enough just to be in the wrong place at the wrong time. Whether a series of accidents, or a coincidence, but now I have to be reborn in a completely different world.
A forced entity that controls the flows of souls in one of the branches of the worlds, contrary to its desire and dislikes for "anomalies", is obliged to give out powers and bonuses - these are the rules.
What will life be like for someone who was not destined to survive?
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this is a great novel. the MC is not an idiot who follows harry around. the plot is great and the MC character is something I've been waiting for, for a very long time. it's also kinda fast paced which is very cool. the only problem is the grammer which is also being fixed with updates on the previous chapters. so I'd say if ur looking for a harry potter fanfic where the MC is smart and not suicidal read this.
I have read lots of Harry Potter Fanfic, and I think for one that this is good, mostly because of the honesty of the characters and their genuity. The MC has a lot of potential but also a lot of character, problem. But that's the point, he's not perfect but he is an interesting character. I love your Hermione and Walburga. Thank you for those wonderful characters that. This is an incredibly interesting book. I think you should try this if you haven't yet.
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Nice novel. If only the MC wouldn't go to such unreasonable and dumb lengths to satisfy his own goals(?) this novel would be great. Now you might be thinking from my first statement, that the MC is a person who would kill a person to achieve his goal. That's not what I meant. He would do something stupid or annoying to satisfy himself. Case 1 is presented in Ollivanders, he came back there after getting his wand to see his mother. Which in turn alerted Malfoy Senior of his existence. For some reason it seemed like love at first sight to him after being pushed out of her womb and being immediately disowned by his father, and his mother who was confunded? into accepting it. You think his father would just sit around and watch his spawn toddle around without bothering him? Just reading that chapter was annoying on a whole new level. You'd think a mature and rational person was reincarnated, but nope! Just a typical savant. Case 2: He joins Hogwarts, and there's no mention of the Room of Requirement (RoR). He makes a point that there's no place where he can escape Dumble's sights, but why would the headmaster even bother with him when Potter and Weasley are around? Author doesn't address it. RoR = Possible mental defenses, wealth, and more. Case 3: His philosophical debates on morals/ethics/world views with an 11 year old girl, and later another senior student. Blah Blah Blah Muggleborn students aren't treated right, the world is violent, magic. Ok, you didn't need to start a lecture to an 11 year old, no matter how smart she is. It was a senseless waste of time, instead of a lecture, just let her know in terms an 11 year old would understand. Case 4: From what I am getting here, a reincarnated grown man becomes a Malfoy, is disowned because he's thought to be a squib, and now he is seemingly hype focused on his birth mother, even implying to the readers that she is closer to him than the adoptive parents that have raised him for years? Where's the logic in this? Case 5: Should have put this earlier, but he confides hermione into his "little secret" of being a pureblood but classified as a muggleborn. He's really smart, like he was never an 11 year old in his past life or ever met another 11 year old who can keep a secret? Author has a thing for Hermione. Case 6: What was the point putting him in Ghouse? Why not Ravenclaw, since he likes to study? Overall your MC acts like a smartass with dumb reasons. I know he has some knowledge on the canon, since he mentions things that he shouldn't know several times? I am and C23 and am already frustrated.
This book started out okay in the first two chapters, but afterwards it feels like the author stopped caring about proper grammar and English. If this had been everything I might’ve tried to keep reading, but so many explanations and chapters were either rushed or unintelligible to the point where I couldn’t understand what I was reading. The book has a good concept, but I think it needs a major overhaul before I’d give it another chance.
I must say that it's extremely well written and has barely any grammar issues which is rather rare on this platform. The only issue I have with this story is that it is incredibly dull and lacks passion. It just feels like reading text instead of being in a story. The main two characters, Max and Hermione both feel very unemotional and unenthusiastic towards mostly everything. The pacing is extremely fast which is good since we've all read the same events that take place in Hogwarts a dozen times at the very least. I suppose the take of the author on the Harry Potter world is just too realistic which makes it lack passion and excitement.
I realty did not like mentality, personality and naivety of the MC. Reincarnated, knows full well everything which is going to happen, yet did not take the slightest of advantage of this. Controlled like a puppet. Nerd to to the extreme. Trying to be cool and mysterious yet he is nothing but a kid with full knowledge of the cannon and idiocy of a troll. With all these points still not OP on anything. I do not recommend this. Unless you like to kill your time with something.. Not even that..
Interesting read, the MC does not try to involve himself into 'adventure' with protagonist But really, with just the duo of Harry & Ron, how did they even succeed the trials in book 1, in the first place the one who knows about the Devil's Snare is only Hermione
Good story! Please more chapters! ..........................................................................................................
a lot of the writing either doesn't make sense or gets cringy and I don't know how other reviewers aren't commenting about it. I could only get to chapter 9. if it gets better later on then tell me but it stops for me here
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The best I can describe this fic is as above average. The Canon part is similar just that mc doesn't care about harry. mc only spends time with hermoine. which is kind of boring. the part where mc spends time away from hogwartz and when actually original plot happens, I found that cringy, a bit forced and boring as hell. i wanted to skip as fast as I could and wanted canon part again. there are many nitpicks, but in the end, I found this fic boring. just can't get invested in it. though gotta commend author's update stability. and chapter 7 is one of the cringiest and forced chapters I have ever read. I'm dropping it, but good luck with the story.
Damn, I love this story! It's so good, please MORE! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I have red a ton of Hp ff up to now. This in my opinion is the best one from a quality standpoint and how much it impresses me. From an enjoyment standpoint it looses out against Stuffed into potter (liked the female characters) and Dark Lord Dumbledore (sometimes a bit weak, but made me laugh and grin like a madman a lot).
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This is a realy grounded and solid ff where most things make sense, the mc is smart and the story is good so far. Im realy happy with this one.
Story wise I only got to chapter 20, I understand English isn’t your first language and that’s fine. It’s not my first either, but the plot points and character explanation is plain. There’s no world building, only plain expository text. Like “the Hogwarts building” or the “city of London” don’t get me wrong you did a good job in diagon alley. But you didn’t go into complete details. And the scene of which a mother forgets her son’s face, yet the father remembers it. It but odd really. In the end I’ve decided to drop it. Chapter 20 is way to confusing, random appearance of “creatures” and boredom have left no where to go. So I’m dropping it.
Great! Great! I love how they all felt alive. it's just a pity that you can not explore the filial part of life in this novel as the tag of 'Thrown Bastard' remained it his head and he can not get over it. I just also suggest to make the dialogue more proper it's hard to read it when you don't know where to suddenly stop and you need to read couple back to make some sense to it. Good Job! Thank you! Don't Drop it!