/ TV / TVD: Beyond the pale moon
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Meet the third Salvatore of the Salvatore brothers. Thomas ‘Tommy’ or ‘Tom’ is back in the town of Mystic falls, to meet his brother Stefan. But is that all the reason why he’s here. Find more in this fanfic.
Ps: I own nothing but the oc. English is my second language and I’ve tried my best to keep the spelling error to the minimum, but if you find some let me know.
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Gonna wait you get a few more chapters in. Hope it doesn't get dropped. Also hoping to finally see a only vampire mc (no hybrid, tribrid, heretic) Just a good old vampire... I didn't read yet. So don't know what's going to be.
Almost read it if not for the fact that Bonnie is the love interest. Literally every single fanfic has her as the love interest. Overused
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overall this has been interesting I look forward to the continuation of this and hope to see this continue
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It's too difficult to understand what's going on when views are changing as mad. Author must use only 1st face, only 3rd face or both with a marker which gives readers an indication of the change in perspective. That's such a basic thing... and I don't see it here.
I'm giving this novel a 5 star review cause I'm coming from your other novel and it was great, the drafts for this one was also awesome, so good luck and keep up the good stuff author.