摘要
Jaden has spent his entire life in Coruscants underworld, he has lived on level 1313 for as long as he can remember and has tried getting out for just as long. But things aren't so easy for people like him, to escape your crappy life you need credits.
One day a Job goes badly for Jaden and he ends up injured in a part of the level he'd never been to before, however as luck would have it there were two dead Jedi just begging to be looted. Using the Jedi's outfits and weapons to get passed the republic checkpoint and to the surface, things go badly once more as before his Ship Lands all available troops are called to assist with the Civil war that had just broken out on Jabiim. Confused for a Jedi he is taken to a Ventaur class destroyer and enlisted into the clone wars.
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I really love this fan fic, The MC makes the series set. Feel like you as An author has really thought out. The MC is a good guy, but not in a way that feels forced or overly righteous. It's like if a good guy was born in a bad place, with the chance to do something right. And I can't wait for the reveal of when everyone finds out he's not actually a jedi.
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A very promising concept, there are clear signs of inexperience in the plot but they are minor. I hope the author knows that it is impossible to use the light and dark sides at the same time, this leads to madness and death
Emotion, yet peace. Ignorance, yet knowledge. Passion, yet serenity. Chaos, yet harmony. Death, yet the Force. "Part of me you are, yes. But power over me you have not. Through patience and training, it is I who control you." ―Yoda, to the shadow of his soul
This has a lot of potential. I’m really enjoying the character and the story’s concept. Looking forward to how the mc develops and changes possibly becoming more responsible and taking a voluntary role in the war for the greater good
More please, I've been having so much fun reading this~ This shit is dope. FEED ME!
Well, I will say it the simplest way possible. You know it's a good story when you check the reviews hoping that he stole it from somewhere, so you can continue reading (it's not 😔)
Some slight spelling mistakes, otherwise it’s a very promising fanfic. I’m rather excited for future chapters!
The only thing I don't like about this book is having to wait for the ext chapter to be released, other then that, one of the best things I have read
A masterpiece. The protagonist gives me vibes similar to Commissar Ciaphas Cain, as if he were a character who constantly faces danger but always manages to come out on top in a clever and almost effortless way, much like Cain.
a really great read, the Grammer is excellent, and the character interactions are top quality, I would recommend it if you want a good engaging read. although I do wish the author would update it more often. Either way, it's still a really great fanfic.
Hope he stops trying to run back to his sad life and sees the bigger picture of his fortunate circumstances 😢 🙏 😔... He's been getting annoyingly idiotic!!!
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interesting... review will change in the future when there are more chapters to decide
I definitely hope you continue this beautifully written Story I absolutely love how you make the Padawans who are still learning humanized and have difficulties being in control of their emotions on top of being Teenagers and Children in a Galactic War.
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It has everything you would want in a fanfiction, I need to invokes obsession. can't wait for the next chapter
Don't you ever stop writing. With everything about star wars crumbling right before our eyes, this is a light in the dark. A story that is different and doesn't tarnish what has been created by George Lucas and something that lives so dearly in the hearts of many people. This is absolutely great, and chapter 19 confirmed my feelings toward it. Thank you