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It's too difficult to understand what's going on when views are changing as mad. Author must use only 1st face, only 3rd face or both with a marker which gives readers an indication of the change in perspective. That's such a basic thing... and I don't see it here.
Almost read it if not for the fact that Bonnie is the love interest. Literally every single fanfic has her as the love interest. Overused
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overall this has been interesting I look forward to the continuation of this and hope to see this continue
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Gonna wait you get a few more chapters in. Hope it doesn't get dropped. Also hoping to finally see a only vampire mc (no hybrid, tribrid, heretic) Just a good old vampire... I didn't read yet. So don't know what's going to be.
I'm giving this novel a 5 star review cause I'm coming from your other novel and it was great, the drafts for this one was also awesome, so good luck and keep up the good stuff author.
It's too difficult to understand what's going on when views are changing as mad. Author must use only 1st face, only 3rd face or both with a marker which gives readers an indication of the change in perspective. That's such a basic thing... and I don't see it here.
Almost read it if not for the fact that Bonnie is the love interest. Literally every single fanfic has her as the love interest. Overused
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overall this has been interesting I look forward to the continuation of this and hope to see this continue
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Gonna wait you get a few more chapters in. Hope it doesn't get dropped. Also hoping to finally see a only vampire mc (no hybrid, tribrid, heretic) Just a good old vampire... I didn't read yet. So don't know what's going to be.
I'm giving this novel a 5 star review cause I'm coming from your other novel and it was great, the drafts for this one was also awesome, so good luck and keep up the good stuff author.