/ Fantasy / There Were Two Brothers
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Intervar, The Gravedigger, finds out his friend had hired someone to assassinate him. Reporting this information to Queen Sei, she hires a strange man who promises to protect Intervar. Unfortunately, he’ll get more than he bargained for when he finds out there’s more than what meets the eye.
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I usually give novels a five-chapter rule before reading, and here I am. I really like how this story is really original. I have not seen this type of story before. I also really like the characters and how they interact with the world around them. Good story.
Pretty interesting story. I haven't read too much of it but it seems great so far, as of like Ch2. Keep doing good with your other works if there's ever any!
its a beautiful book just started reading it and am attached already ,the writer is doing a wonderful job . Am totally sticking to this book till the end
Personally I give every novel I read a 5-10 chapter read because how can you be expected to develop a story within the first chapter? I found it quite hard to read past the third chapter because of the information overload, there are lots of kingdoms and rulers mentioned in the first chapter that it’s hard to remember who is who. Similarly I’ve noticed that sometimes the author uses the names of people with our establishing who they are which makes reading a bit more difficult. There are a few writing mistakes as well, e.g. using both he and she for hyena interchangeably. The story definitely does have potential, it’s grammar is good and the update speed is noteworthy, I just hope some minor plot holes can be fixed and things can be made clearer.
Interesting story dealing with the royal affairs and fights. The character of the MC seems interesting. I am curious to know how is the MC gonna survive and fight back. Great work author!! [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Fascinating Wonderful Interesting Awesome! This novel is great, love the writing quality and also the characters thumbs up author Good work!!!
Sorry for the late review! I finally can review this book. First off, I'd like to start by saying that the author's writing is pretty good imo. The wording of the sentences can still be improved upon though it's still enjoyable enough to be negligible. The plot is solid and we get to see lots of Intervar's thoughts. Though i've only read until chapter 5, but so far so good. If I have to comment on one thing—as this is my personal preference—is the lack of dialogue and the immersion of the novel. Where is Intervar situated exactly? What is Intervar's personality? Although the narration gives enough to explain his thoughts and general location, I would have preferred dialogue to fill that gap in—still, it's just my preference.
I'll keep this short and simple. As someone who is used to reading novels with 1000+ chapters, reading this one was a change. Luckily though, the novel lived up to its interesting description, the writing was good, and the plot was interesting, I have nothing to pick on really Great work author, you didn't disappoint.
This book is awesome and interesting. The plot is unique and loved to read more......... The characters are interesting and waiting for more. Good Luck Author!!
This is an amazing read. With fantastic characters, great plot, and just a fantastic story progression, I think this is a must for any collection. With this unique story, I can't wait to see what else the author brings. I have just one question..... What is Donn?
Pretty awesome by now, really enjoyed it and would have been overjoyed if there would have been more chapters. The writing style is pretty good too
There is a bit of information overload at the beginning of the chapter in regards to the kingdoms and rulers. The character Hyena's pronouns switch back and forth and I don't know if that was intentional so it is a little confusing. Other than that the story is very interesting and I am curious about the world so I will continue to read!
Okay wow! This is a very nice work I must say from the few chapters I just read. I like the MC and the writing quality is really a five star for me. Keep up the good work author.
I like how the author described the scene and how it compliments the way the character is portrayed. Even how the first chapter is written is really good, what roles the character plays is also written nicely.
Read almost 1st chapter and found your plot truly catchy, and as an writer myself I appreciate your writing skills... I want to invest my time in this.[img=Loving it]
Just started reading. It has a nicely built world as well as some cool descriptions of what is going on. It's a pretty nice novel to sink your teeth into if you aren't a fan of overly long stories.
wow, what a lovely storyline... I'm hooked to be sincere. It reminds me of a book I used to read when I was still a kid... I kinda forgot the title, but it's okay to me.
Nice concept with good quality of writing . Characterization is good. And there are some minor errors that should be corrected. Overall the content is nice.
The writing is outstanding and very consistent. Very refreshing read because of the plot. If you want to read a good novel, this is a good one to read. The characters are lovable and well-written as well.
Nice plot, interesting synopsis and world-building... cannot wait for more chapters! (14014014014014000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000)