ShadowAmeratsu

ShadowAmeratsu

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I enjoy writing things for others to enjoy :)

2020-11-12 加入 Global
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ShadowAmeratsu
ShadowAmeratsu
1 months ago
Replied to ShadowAmeratsu

http://wbnv.in/a/9dicg64

ShadowAmeratsu
ShadowAmeratsu
1 years ago
Posted

The novel has an impressive plot, with huge room to have the characters roam, but the pilot chapter seemed to lack emotion. It had great detail and amazing descriptions, but when it came to providing emotions or human body language, it didn't seem the best. I hope that it improves as it goes along, but I'm optimistic of its future :)

ShadowAmeratsu
ShadowAmeratsu
1 years ago
Commented

He's no longer a stickman!

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ShadowAmeratsu
ShadowAmeratsu
1 years ago
Replied to DaoistHolySwitch

Thank for the review, but for most people, they found it pretty easy to read. It may just be personal preference or something similar that's preventing you from getting into the flow, and that's completely natural. I hope you have a good 2023 :)

ShadowAmeratsu
ShadowAmeratsu
1 years ago
Replied to TheWanderingBard

Thank you so much for this awesome review!

ShadowAmeratsu
ShadowAmeratsu
1 years ago
Posted

Quite impressive literature skills from the author, which honestly astonished me when they told me that they had only started writing since the New Year. Genuinely interested in how the story progresses with it's incredible use of metaphors and hidden symbolism.

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ShadowAmeratsu
ShadowAmeratsu
1 years ago
Posted

This is quite a good novel with a great plot that can be expanded upon further once more time is put into it! I would suggest getting an editor to look over your work and correct a few spelling mistakes, just to make it so anyone can sit down and read this without trying to decipher what's being said :)

ShadowAmeratsu
ShadowAmeratsu
1 years ago
Replied to Naescent

Thank you very much! I really hope you keep enjoying the novel as it progresses!

ShadowAmeratsu
ShadowAmeratsu
1 years ago
Commented

Popping* might wanna correct this one in particular

ShadowAmeratsu
ShadowAmeratsu
1 years ago
Replied to Junethephatcat

I can absolutely do that! Thank you very much for showing me what can be improved, as I'd love to make this the best novel I've ever written :)

  • Skelengel: Retold original

    Skelengel: Retold

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION SYSTEM SUPERPOWERS ISEKAI NONHUMAN

    Skeletal Body, He Has A Mind, Uncontrolled, Yet He Still Remains.

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  • The System Of Silence - Silence Is My Only Salvation original

    The System Of Silence - Silence Is My Only Salvation

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE SYSTEM SUPERPOWERS OVERPOWERED

    The Wordless Warrior. Excerpt 1, taken from inside the book's cover. "To the one who reads this book, heed my warning well. If you do not read this correctly, your life may turn into hell. To gain this power, the power of violence, you must give up your voice, and live in silence. The gains you earn will be far beyond any other, and you may finally be able to surprise your own blood mother. So use this system, if you dare try. It will show you how high, the human race can fly." [Word Count Per Chapter: Approximately One Thousand] [Chapter Releases Every: Whenever I Write One] Discord Server: https://discord.gg/Xv8yGCF8uA Personal Discord Acc: Nesquik#7104 (If you have any suggestions for the novel that you believe would really be interesting to add to the novel :]) [I do in fact own the art, and it was made by Anoniiyy on Instagram!] [https://www.instagram.com/anoniiyy/]

    27 Chs 13 收藏

  • The Trollge Containment Files [Not Updating] original

    The Trollge Containment Files [Not Updating]

    Horror MAGIC SUPERPOWERS NONHUMAN KILLER SUPERNATURAL MULTIPLELEADS

    [This Novel Contains Dark Themes Such As Suicide And Suicide Causation. If You Are Not Prepared For It, Do Not Read This Novel.] The Trollge Containment Files. Access to the Files containing protected documents related to the Trollge Incidents. The information stored in these documents are related to the Trollge Incidents that take place throughout the world. While reading this, you'll be looking through the personal life of those the TCF have encountered. At the end of the document, if the document does not explicitly state its containment, assume that it has been contained by the TCF. However, if it says that the suspect is freed, and out in the wild, you must take all precautions necessary to protect yourself from the escaped Trollge. The TCF stands for Trollge Containment Foundation, a society of soldiers and scientists dedicated to securing and containing the Trollges. [Terminology] {Threat Level: How strong or dangerous a Trollge is if you must fight it.} {Danger Level: How likely a Trollge is to attack you upon encounter.} {Incident: Incident is the term used to describe something or someone that is seen or documented to have abilities unobtainable by the normal human, such as an inhuman body, gravikinesis or even full control of another's body.} [Upload Schedule: Erratic. It depends on how busy I am irl, since I write this in the spare time I have.] Any art used here that does not belong to me shall be thoroughly credited. Current cover belongs to me, but I did not make it. It was made for me, and it depicts Incident One. DM me on Discord! My user is: Nesquik#7104 All the characters here are owned by me unless stated otherwise in the novel. For commercial use, please message me on discord so that we may discuss a business deal.

    12 Chs 6 收藏

  • Skelengel; Tales Of The Boundless One [Not Updating] original

    Skelengel; Tales Of The Boundless One [Not Updating]

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION SYSTEM DARK OVERPOWERED TRANSMIGRATION ISEKAI LEVELUP IMMORTAL

    When the universe creates a person, they are bestowed with certain traits that we, as mere humans, are aware of. Sportiness, the ability to work with computers, and creativity are all things we may obtain at creation. However, some of those talents extend far past the mortal realm of flesh and blood. They go all the way to your very soul, and these are the ones that we cannot see. These few are destined to become Boundless. And it just so happens that one was designated to die on the fateful day a new god took sight over the earth. This is the tale of Aaron Stone, the once businessman turned planetary traverser. Aided by himself and his potential, he plans to live out his life with peace of mind. However, the universe has it out for him, and it won't let him ever have true peace. However, someone from behind the shadows controls everything, and they have quite a distaste for Aaron Stone. They will try to make his life a living hell. Everything you read here is an account of something going on in the vast universe. Hell, who knows... It may even be YOU who takes his place in the future. [Chapter Length: Above 1k words] [Upload Time: Once a day, if I can. My life has gotten increasingly busy over the past year, so I may have to put novelwriting to the side for a bit. L] If you want a book with a main character who goes around helping every little person, this book isn't for you. It involves death and some gory details, among other things. People and friends will die. These are all part of the universe. [Volume 1: The Awakening Of Boundlessness: Completed] [Volume 2: The Quest For Higher Boundlessness: Completed] [Volume 3: The Fires Of Boundless Supremacy: On-Going] WARNING! Different novel mechanics will be placed into this book, so there will probably be some confusion in ability specifics and other details. Simply leave a comment, or message me on the discord server below, and I can clear up some of the details :) Also, because of the idea of adding multiple different mechanics, there will hopefully be something that suits everyone in this book :) AUTHORS NOTE! Thank you for taking the time to read through this synopsis. It means a lot to me that you even bothered to read this. If you plan to read this book, I will say that, as of me writing this at chapter 320, it gets much better the further you go! Thank you for thinking about reading it, and I hope you will enjoy it! The book is also completely free to read, and I want it to stay that way! I just want people to be able to read and enjoy my stuff! I'm just gonna put the discord link here if you want to access it. You should join if you wanna just talk about the book to the creator and others! We got a general chat, memes, and other things. I hope we will see you there! https://discord.gg/gcrbtk8M63 Also, I have a YouTube Channel! I'm not going to tell you to sub, but it would really be appreciated! https://youtube.com/channel/UCrURywBu-fDA5KQaDPc3GOg [Also, just letting you know, I do actually own the cover :)] [It was made by @chook-in-a-jar on Instagram! Go follow them there!] This book is copyrighted material of ShadowAmeratsu, and cannot be used/altered for any projects without the author's permission.

    323 Chs 124 收藏

  • Reincarnated as a... Worm? [Not Updating] original

    Reincarnated as a... Worm? [Not Updating]

    Fantasy REINCARNATION SYSTEM

    Wait... I'm a what!? Join James, the world's unluckiest man, as he goes through what happened after he died. Being a worm? No problem! Being the weakest monster? Not a problem at all! Watch, as his luck turn from bad, to good, in the blink of an eye, like a scale going from good to bad. All for what? To meet the person who brought him here. Hey, if you like the book, please, leave a positive review. Last time i wrote a book, it got slightly popular, but it felt like I was writing for a bunch of robots. Please, it helps keep me motivated.

    3 Chs 5 收藏

  • The Magical Demon [Not Updating] original

    The Magical Demon [Not Updating]

    Action MAGIC OVERPOWERED DEVIL

    Not to be replicated in any shape or form without the author's permission. Archfiend. A term for a powerful demon. This one, well, he was powerful, but not in the way of the others. Most demons have no abilities, except for special traits and some increased stats, but this one seemed to be able to produce anything. He called this system "Magic". This is the story of Nibiru, a magical demon with the power to do anything, within reason. This is my first time writing a book. If you are looking for an overpowered MC story, then this is one for you. I made this because I wanted to be able to do whatever I wanted, with nobody in real life hindering me. I hope you enjoy the book :)

    30 Chs 25 收藏