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I like how the author described the scene and how it compliments the way the character is portrayed. Even how the first chapter is written is really good, what roles the character plays is also written nicely.
Read almost 1st chapter and found your plot truly catchy, and as an writer myself I appreciate your writing skills... I want to invest my time in this.[img=Loving it]
Just started reading. It has a nicely built world as well as some cool descriptions of what is going on. It's a pretty nice novel to sink your teeth into if you aren't a fan of overly long stories.
wow, what a lovely storyline... I'm hooked to be sincere. It reminds me of a book I used to read when I was still a kid... I kinda forgot the title, but it's okay to me.
Nice concept with good quality of writing . Characterization is good. And there are some minor errors that should be corrected. Overall the content is nice.
The writing is outstanding and very consistent. Very refreshing read because of the plot. If you want to read a good novel, this is a good one to read. The characters are lovable and well-written as well.
The novel revolves around a warzone so it's natural to expect serious atmosphere in many scenes. The writing does make you engaged to it's core as it tries to emphasis on the tense situation. Plus there's a lot of world building going around so for those who are loves to travel through different worlds, this book might be your interest.
I stumbled on this novel and decided to check it out. The first chapter gets you hooked and sets you straight on what's going on with the plot. I like the way the author describes the environment and characters in the novel. The only con is the grammatical errors that ruin the reading experience a bit.
The book seems interesting and has a lot of promise, so if you feel like you need to while away time, this is the right book to keep you entertained.
In all it's a well written story. I think the strong point of the book is the pacing and world building. It's honestly a fun read too, keep going author.
Keep up the good work! Looking forward for more of your works! This is actually breathtaking the moment I've read the first few chapters and I'm quite enjoying reading this piece! [img=coins]
Great plotline. Royalty stories are quite a good catch and I'm definitely holding on to this. Don't overlook the tenses which I've realized it getting confusing. Overall, good work!
the plot is very unique and interesting! and I like the world building plus the good writing quality makes me enjoy reading this book, love it!😍
I'll keep this short and simple. As someone who is used to reading novels with 1000+ chapters, reading this one was a change. Luckily though, the novel lived up to its interesting description, the writing was good, and the plot was interesting, I have nothing to pick on really Great work author, you didn't disappoint.
The lore is astounding! The writing style is quite descriptive and elaborate, particularly about the information of the story's era and fantasy' foundation. I'm amazed!!
The language in which the stories are being written is also very lucid. I am wishing more upcoming twist and turns. The character names are quite interesting. The story is slowly developing. The plot can be easily understood from the synopsis. I believe it's an unusual unfolding. Hoping for the best! Cheers to the writer, keep it up.
It's nice to read this, so far so good, keep it up thor![img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It's pretty good overall with an intriguing plot and the writing quality. I am quite fond of the little details, which make imagining the current scene easily, and gives a touch of movement and life to the characters.
The plot and characters are very interesting and fleshed out but I find myself not able to understand the descriptions of the characters, theworld and timeline the novel is set in. And the first chapter had some problems with present and past tense usage while narrating. Anyway, I am six chapters in already and I can't wait to read more. Perhaps I would find out more about the world as I read further. Good job overall ☺️☺️
So far I've read the book until chapter 2. I liked many aspects of the book, such as the introduction to the world in the first chapter, went by pretty smoothly.
This book is awesome and interesting. The plot is unique and loved to read more......... The characters are interesting and waiting for more. Good Luck Author!!
Intresting story with good pacing. My only gripe with it is the writing clarity could be better, which isn’t a dealbreaker. Would definitely recommend giving it a shot👍
Engaging setting and world, clearly defined concepts and well-written characters. Dialogue is easy to digest and the writing is concise and to the point.
This is nicely done, the world building is a bit slow but that pales in comparison to the story. It keeps you interested with clever wording and interesting characters, only revealing enough of the plot to keep you intrigued. This is definitely something I’d continue reading in the future. Would 100% recomend!
You get decently built characters that have depth despite the fact that the first chapter just throws like 10 characters at you in the first few paragraphs. Also, Donn is a dog guys if you read this comment (found that out in chapter 2)
Im enjoying the book So Far! i Like the plot and story in still Reading book but im eXcited to see how the story turns out :D there is a gew grammer issues and its hard to tell what the characters jn the story look liKe.
nice plot this book is cool the but had few grammatical error any way it does not stop the story from being interesting .cool good luck....
It seems like there could be a gem here, but explaining could be more necessary. I'm mostly unaware of what most the characters even look like besides red hair or a muscular man. I mostly find myself asking: "What is this? What does this person look like?" and things of the like. Sometimes explanations are needed - I'm only commenting on the free chapters, maybe the author has improved later, but I was asked to look at what was available. It feels more like: "Person goes here, does this," rather than a deeper characters without fleshing out. This is just my personal opinion.
wow! what a plot ! currently hooked to it! Best of luck to the author ! everything is well described and detailed correctly .every prose and cons!
Sorry for the late review! I finally can review this book. First off, I'd like to start by saying that the author's writing is pretty good imo. The wording of the sentences can still be improved upon though it's still enjoyable enough to be negligible. The plot is solid and we get to see lots of Intervar's thoughts. Though i've only read until chapter 5, but so far so good. If I have to comment on one thing—as this is my personal preference—is the lack of dialogue and the immersion of the novel. Where is Intervar situated exactly? What is Intervar's personality? Although the narration gives enough to explain his thoughts and general location, I would have preferred dialogue to fill that gap in—still, it's just my preference.
I like how the author described the scene and how it compliments the way the character is portrayed. Even how the first chapter is written is really good, what roles the character plays is also written nicely.
Read almost 1st chapter and found your plot truly catchy, and as an writer myself I appreciate your writing skills... I want to invest my time in this.[img=Loving it]
Just started reading. It has a nicely built world as well as some cool descriptions of what is going on. It's a pretty nice novel to sink your teeth into if you aren't a fan of overly long stories.
wow, what a lovely storyline... I'm hooked to be sincere. It reminds me of a book I used to read when I was still a kid... I kinda forgot the title, but it's okay to me.
Nice concept with good quality of writing . Characterization is good. And there are some minor errors that should be corrected. Overall the content is nice.
The writing is outstanding and very consistent. Very refreshing read because of the plot. If you want to read a good novel, this is a good one to read. The characters are lovable and well-written as well.
The novel revolves around a warzone so it's natural to expect serious atmosphere in many scenes. The writing does make you engaged to it's core as it tries to emphasis on the tense situation. Plus there's a lot of world building going around so for those who are loves to travel through different worlds, this book might be your interest.
I stumbled on this novel and decided to check it out. The first chapter gets you hooked and sets you straight on what's going on with the plot. I like the way the author describes the environment and characters in the novel. The only con is the grammatical errors that ruin the reading experience a bit.
The book seems interesting and has a lot of promise, so if you feel like you need to while away time, this is the right book to keep you entertained.
In all it's a well written story. I think the strong point of the book is the pacing and world building. It's honestly a fun read too, keep going author.
Keep up the good work! Looking forward for more of your works! This is actually breathtaking the moment I've read the first few chapters and I'm quite enjoying reading this piece! [img=coins]
Great plotline. Royalty stories are quite a good catch and I'm definitely holding on to this. Don't overlook the tenses which I've realized it getting confusing. Overall, good work!
the plot is very unique and interesting! and I like the world building plus the good writing quality makes me enjoy reading this book, love it!😍
I'll keep this short and simple. As someone who is used to reading novels with 1000+ chapters, reading this one was a change. Luckily though, the novel lived up to its interesting description, the writing was good, and the plot was interesting, I have nothing to pick on really Great work author, you didn't disappoint.
The lore is astounding! The writing style is quite descriptive and elaborate, particularly about the information of the story's era and fantasy' foundation. I'm amazed!!
The language in which the stories are being written is also very lucid. I am wishing more upcoming twist and turns. The character names are quite interesting. The story is slowly developing. The plot can be easily understood from the synopsis. I believe it's an unusual unfolding. Hoping for the best! Cheers to the writer, keep it up.
It's nice to read this, so far so good, keep it up thor![img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It's pretty good overall with an intriguing plot and the writing quality. I am quite fond of the little details, which make imagining the current scene easily, and gives a touch of movement and life to the characters.
The plot and characters are very interesting and fleshed out but I find myself not able to understand the descriptions of the characters, theworld and timeline the novel is set in. And the first chapter had some problems with present and past tense usage while narrating. Anyway, I am six chapters in already and I can't wait to read more. Perhaps I would find out more about the world as I read further. Good job overall ☺️☺️
So far I've read the book until chapter 2. I liked many aspects of the book, such as the introduction to the world in the first chapter, went by pretty smoothly.
This book is awesome and interesting. The plot is unique and loved to read more......... The characters are interesting and waiting for more. Good Luck Author!!
Intresting story with good pacing. My only gripe with it is the writing clarity could be better, which isn’t a dealbreaker. Would definitely recommend giving it a shot👍
Engaging setting and world, clearly defined concepts and well-written characters. Dialogue is easy to digest and the writing is concise and to the point.
This is nicely done, the world building is a bit slow but that pales in comparison to the story. It keeps you interested with clever wording and interesting characters, only revealing enough of the plot to keep you intrigued. This is definitely something I’d continue reading in the future. Would 100% recomend!
You get decently built characters that have depth despite the fact that the first chapter just throws like 10 characters at you in the first few paragraphs. Also, Donn is a dog guys if you read this comment (found that out in chapter 2)
Im enjoying the book So Far! i Like the plot and story in still Reading book but im eXcited to see how the story turns out :D there is a gew grammer issues and its hard to tell what the characters jn the story look liKe.
nice plot this book is cool the but had few grammatical error any way it does not stop the story from being interesting .cool good luck....
It seems like there could be a gem here, but explaining could be more necessary. I'm mostly unaware of what most the characters even look like besides red hair or a muscular man. I mostly find myself asking: "What is this? What does this person look like?" and things of the like. Sometimes explanations are needed - I'm only commenting on the free chapters, maybe the author has improved later, but I was asked to look at what was available. It feels more like: "Person goes here, does this," rather than a deeper characters without fleshing out. This is just my personal opinion.
wow! what a plot ! currently hooked to it! Best of luck to the author ! everything is well described and detailed correctly .every prose and cons!
Sorry for the late review! I finally can review this book. First off, I'd like to start by saying that the author's writing is pretty good imo. The wording of the sentences can still be improved upon though it's still enjoyable enough to be negligible. The plot is solid and we get to see lots of Intervar's thoughts. Though i've only read until chapter 5, but so far so good. If I have to comment on one thing—as this is my personal preference—is the lack of dialogue and the immersion of the novel. Where is Intervar situated exactly? What is Intervar's personality? Although the narration gives enough to explain his thoughts and general location, I would have preferred dialogue to fill that gap in—still, it's just my preference.