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Jack Sparrow, A young teen living in the small city of Forks in the year 2005 finds himself waking up one day with a blue holographic panel in front of his face.
The system asks him to choose his own stats which it calls S.P.E.C.I.A.L Stats.
It cautions the young man that his choice is irreversible but he doesn't give it much mind and rashly puts his stats points in.
Follow the journey of Jack Sparrow as he experiences a whole new world and the outcome of his own rash decisions.
*DISCLAIMER*
This is a Twilight Fanfiction.
MC pairing isn't going to be told at the beginning so please don't ask for it.
This will not be a harem.
The system is a mix of Fallout New Vegas but it's also original so don't expect everything on there to be here as well.
If you don't mind those two then I wish you a great reading journey.
If you want to support me and read ten chapters ahead then check out my Patreon at:
Patreon.com/WhiteAuthor
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5/2/1/4/4 Bro gets a system but his thoughts arent protected, proceeds to get kidnapped by the cullens and then spills the beans about his system. English quality is good though, if you can tolerate that level of bs
The story leaves much to be desired. It starts very suddenly. They kidnap him, threaten him, force him, all without his consent. They leave him the only way out: to die and convert, they convert him and he feels nothing. Seriously, a little bit of hate or resentment but he lets it pass as if nothing and then becomes friends with someone from one moment to the next without further ado.
bro, I tried, I swear I tried, but it's impossible to read this bulsh*t. The supposedly increased luck of the MC only serves to know whether the coin will come up heads or tails, if it is going to add a metaphysical characteristic it at least has to be used.
A lot of questionable choices, stupid decisions, not consistent system, "mysterious" original characters with supernatural abilities, stupid charizma implementation that makes mc not able to understand others or to be understood by others. With max intelligence mc makes the worst not logical decisions possible. Stats work like multiplayer to a selected race I guess? Even though stats increased when he changed his race? The whole system sucks.
Another absolute masterpiece by WhiteAuthor. For those who have yet to read his other twilight fanfic, check it out after reading this one. Don't miss out.
Really good, you have improved in your writings,its clearly better than your other fanfic but you still have a long way, i hope to see you improve further [img=recommend]
That's not fair why does Bella get a harem but we don't?................................................................................................
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It was good start with kind of gaming system but it started going downhill from there. MC shown as dumb (somehow having high intelligence). As story goes further, it is degenerating. I think I will drop off at some point soon.
To be fair, it's much better than the previous twilight fanfic, so at least I see individual personalities, the negatives, in my opinion, are the fact that the mc isn't a reincarnation and his system is clear as day due to Edward's mind reading. In terms of development, it's mixed, I like how the plot went, but I can't see the complete veracity of it, if there are other supernatural beings, the MC system itself makes him supernatural, turning him into a vampire then becomes optional, Another point is the family reaction, especially Edward and Rosalie, Edward has a very strong attachment to the soul and believes that vampires don't have it, even if the MC isn't Bela, Edward should at least be much more irritated by the situation and not be giggling due to the mc's mental comments, Rosalie also hates being a vampire, but she is not a bad person by nature, she only got that way with Bela because she was the opposite of Jack, wanting to be a vampire, Carlisle despite appearing calm and gentle as in the original, he took the situation very lightly too, anyway... there was a great improvement in the development of the characters but there are still some parts like these that make us doubt. That said, leaving aside what seems real or not and the negative points, I enjoyed the story, letting Edward read Mc's mind would irritate me if he was a reincarnator, but he isn't and he doesn't have much to hide, the system doesn't matter much to me either, after all this is a world where there isn't an unbalanced scale of power (at least not until the author adds it), so the system isn't really very important in my opinion, it's funny how the fact of things which would normally irritate me cancel themselves out, but anyway... I like the general direction of the story and if I ignore the personality changes fooling me by saying it's an AU, I can read it calmly. The only real negative point so far is the size of the chapters, on the one hand there are daily releases, on the other hand, the chapters are very short and I need to wait three or four to get a quality read, other than that, it's a great story so far, please continue.
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Nice story best 👌 can't wait for more please keep up the good work and I'll just say I hate writing to much but I can't stop because of the 140 character limit but yeah 😀
This story is an interesting take on an Isekai twilight tale. I would recommend picking this up and adding it to your library for a good read. It's been fun so far and I am looking forward to the updates.
Initially interested but got bored real quick. Mc left the canon of twilight films pretty early on so it kind of loses the meaning of having a fic about twilight. Might as well have made it his own universe instead of twilight. Tbh i was mislead because the cover image looked similar to sharingan but to the latest chapter, no such ability. Im removing this from my library
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He tells his life has became a game system.. Cullens kidnap him, threaten him, force him, all without his consent. They leave him the only way out: to die and convert, they convert him and he feels nothing
I enjoyed the story then suddenly the mc said "kept a grudge for nothing" nah even Gandi would be angry after his
Aight if u got questions ask them here, ill asnwer any yall go that ain't super spoilers for chapters that havn't been released yet. I see a lot of reviews here that aren't correct cuz they just didnt read longer than 7 chapters , so ill answer them questions.