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摘要
As a young Peter Quill slowly starves to death in a prison cell on Yondu’s Ravager ship, another soul appears and merges with his body, causing the two souls to mix and become one.
A child who lost his mother to cancer and was abducted by space pirates in the very same night…
A middle-aged man from another universe with all sorts of future knowledge packed into his head…
Both trapped in a much darker version of the MCU. Oh! And it’s Star Wars as well!
Male Lead/Main Character: Peter Quill or Star-Lord
Female Lead/Love Interest(s): ????? (A/N: I was thinking of having two partners for Peter since Star-Lord is known to be promiscuous, but we’ll see. IDK yet.)
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Author your books are good. Great plot and character development. Good writing with hardly any errors. It's why I love your works and why I'm glad you came back to webnovel. I can't wait to see where this one goes.
Another absolute banger from AlienWarlord.The authors ability to pace a story leaves every chapter feeling like another well placed facet in a grand gem.
So I've been following this author for a while, he has decent writing skills. it's actually enjoyable to read his work. Unfortunately most of the time the mc turns into a Gary sue who does no wrong. A basic example is anytime there is a Jedi or a person who disagrees with the main characters viewpoint they won't even really be named, they'll just be bunched up like NPCs when mentioned. Things will always work out for the main character, the MC will boldly state something that isn't socially normal. Like he will be against other characters believes, like the Jedi. he will challenge said believes and they just.. take it? Even when the main character is in the right, that's it? In real life it's more complicated. But in here if someone gets actually upset it's usually just a background character that isn't even named and if they are named they just get face slapped. Its not a bad fanfic but everything is extremely convenient.
Chapter 80 marks the downfall of the novel for me... He goes to earth, somehow manages to sense natasha's plea for help from miles away, comes across guards that are righfully doing their job to apprehend an assassin(natasha) who killed their employer and then MC kills them, thats a sith tendency not a jedi or even so called grey jedi characteristics... This chapter was such a mindless forced plot by the author that am speechless, In the battle against hutts, he killed 100s of troops from hutt side which was made up of slave capturing troops, killing them was the work of a grey jedi... But in natasha's case, he killed the guards just because he could and took the side that was legally, morally and otherwise in any matter wrong, he would have not done that according to what MCs character setting had been emphasized till chapter 80, atleast he would have tried to use force to let the guards drop the issue and back off... I just lost interest reading anymore after that, MCs character break and forced plot of meeting Natasha, first time coming to earth broke any immersion into the novel and the logic flow that the novel was following before this... Right now the novel and its plot is obsolete to me, so dropping this novel at chapter 80. P.S.- Prior to chqpter 80, this novel was one of the best fanfic related to star wars and MCU, after chapter 80, it became just one of the many novels out there, just Meh!
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MC is a r*t*rded manchild with the battle IQ of a toddler. All good except for the character design and story development.
No idea how this story got such a high rating. It has the typical AI generated sentences that make it annoying to read over time. The MC is a joke (as of chapter 20) and has a weird split personality.
Honestly the story is pretty good but the mc makes me so mad its like nothing he does has any repercussions and everyone just goes along with what he says. Even when he does something wrong and he does get a “punishment” it’s always something that he mostly likes to do or something that is severely light for what he did. But overall liked everything else
it's a webnovel fanfict, things that make no sense happen for no other reason than plot. min maxed to be cringey. the mc is a psychopathic serial killer who looks for reasons to kill people even when there's no benefit or reason. kills thousands of innocents then rants about how evil ravagers/bandits are.
AUTHOR I Am a FAN OF YOUR WORK and LOVE YOUR SPIDERMAN NOVEL SO I WILL LOVE THIS TOO...but I hope you can make a mass-effect novel centered around Liara with this same plot story. thank you for your novel's awesome stories.
Plz let him have 2 girls, Since most of the reading about only 1 Female lead gets boring. So, ya let him have 2 girls. Also, I am fan of your spider-man novel, and have high hopes for this as well, good luck.
To start of, the world background is simple, it's understandable, but it could have been so vast. Daily update so obviously its good. Main character is very annoying to me, its like the lowpoint of the whole thing. There are some questionable choices, feels like forced (or fated) plotlines instead of progression (it differs for every reader opinion). The author knows what they want to tell and how to do it
this novel isn't bad except 2 glaring issues. 1 every female character is weak willed woman who after he helps them immediately becomes a blushing mess that has fallen in love with him. the 2nd my biggest thing I don't like with the character having the mind of a 40 year old man has seduced mostly minors like 90% minors the youngest being probably 7 and while he says he likes older characters every single chance he has gotten he turns them down but doesn't to the minor characters and even flirts with them with each having nearly the same personality.
a lot of cringe stuff. ...............................................................................................................................
Writing quality is good, so is the update stability and world background absolutely no complaints. The story development and character design make me want to slam a scooter into my shin. The MC is a morally flip flop of a character who decides when and where to show mercy and only goes out of his way to redeem people if they are named characters or female.
The hero has character problems... at one moment he is a "Hero" at another he kills the military who were working to catch the criminal... because one of the Marvel heroes beat the black widow
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I like it, the meme references were quite enjoyable. The stories are just badly woven. This Peter is also an amalgamation of bad qualities, he kept preaching about ones beliefs yet he has none. It just really get tiring when author bashes every Star Wars element then fanboy on MCU at the same time. This is basically Dr. Strange at this point.
This has been a disappointing novel compared to the authors other novels second only to the voldemort one. . . . .. .. ... . . .
It's not in the tags, but it's harem. Literally with every female MC meets, they fall for him.
