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"We need to go back and inform others of what just happened. Whatever happened has happened and can't be changed back. This involves the death of an ancient being. We won't be able to change it as it was a Nexus Event and TVA won't be able to control it. Loki, are you still at the throne?" John shouted.
Unsurprisingly, Loki appeared out of nowhere. TVA was responsible for all Nexus Events and Beings. And this was a huge Nexus event. The point of no return, just like the death of Christine in What if?
"You have commited quite the crime John. This crime according to the laws of TVA would have you pruned instantly, with no questions asked and no trial." Loki said with a smile.
"It was not me who did this. It was him. Why am I being put in the tough spot?" John asked with a sharp tone.
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When a cinephile and an otaku/weeb travels through dimensions and gets a system which can only be described as overpowered but comes with restrictions. At first he was overjoyed with the system but soon realizes that he is in a very dangerous world where his life was at risk all the time.
(There will be no change in the canon until the New York War ends)
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Awesome, can see clearly that author uses his brain unlike most others in this platform. One of the best, if not the best Marvel ff. People who say mc is pitifully weak and stop reading are missing out, tho even with Fate's power mc can be invincible but that is excusable as he has strong allies. So overall author is one of the best and the ff is great.
The mc is turning out to be completely useless . This is basically a crossover with the mc acting as a bridge. There is no need to add more characters to marvel. It's not an isekai story. The MC is weak and superficial . He brings nothing to the story and has no character development except for introducing stories and characters .
Hello all. This is my first novel. It was never my intention to write but reading so many fan fictions and getting disappointed every time kind of hurt me. So finally I took the courage and started writing this novel. I have high hopes that most people will find it good. But I understand that I wouldn't be able to make everyone happy. I would really appreciate any constructive criticisms and suggestions. And don't worry I don't have any plans of dropping it. I have tons of chapters planned out that will last for a long time. Thank you for your support. Really appreciate the love. Oh yes! Mandatory 5 stars to myself. Peace
i dont know how people give so high rate to this! every chapter has so many plot holes and a lot of things have zero logic! .. .. .... .. ..
So far it's pretty good, hopefully MC won't run off to Kamar-Taj now and ruin this perfectly good story. I look forward to how the plot develops, especially how the author will merge a new world into Marvel without them clashing and creating plot holes. If it's something like Naruto, then it is doable. There are already so many dimensions in Marvel, the Naruto world can be just another one.
The reason my rating is so low is because of his powers. His power is to basically bring a world with its people to the marvel dimension. Thought the idea is good, it is too strong without any balance or a way to counter it, meaning as soon as he reaches enough "points" he becomes unbeatable depending on what world he brings first. The way to fix this would be to instead just bring the powers of these characters for a limited time. For example, instead of bringing the whole one-punch man world, some powers of Saitama will be brought to the mc for a limited time. And I mean just his powers, dont transform into saitama, dont bring his world to this universe. Nothing like that. The reason why I say this is because "spoiler alert" when you brought the naruto world into this fanfic, you basically became way more powerful than any character on earth. Naruto or sasuke alone could destroy cities very easily. If this was your plan all along, to have an unbeatable mc in the first 5 chapters, you did well. But I can find this kind of idea in other places as well. Meaning its very mediocre.
As a newbie author with protentional to learn, I will give you straight 5 stars. Just couple of suggestions. 1. Don't make MC too OP. Believe me, it would be good at first but it will become hard to connect the MC to storyline. 2. It would be better if he could only summon the power and not characters. Letting your summon do the work may sound good at first but it disconnects MC with story.
The story is the same as a chinese Marvel fanfic, everything the system, the powers, the background of the MC being Jameson's son and having Valentina as the maid is copied. You should have given credits to the original author.
I love the concept and it's DIFFERENT. Keep writing and a cliche as all fans always write it, please🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 DON'T DROP IT.
Love the story so far, it's fun and enjoyable to read. The idea behind it is very unique. I don't usually write reviews unless the fic is really good or really bad. And this one is really good. So, give it a chance and you won't regret it.
Here is my first review for a book so let's get into it! -Writing Quality: There are almost no mistakes in grammar so I put five stars on this one. -Stability Of Updates: Each and every time you upload it is a double upload. So this is also a five-star. Story Development: Well besides from bringing Naruto and establishing Disney into Marvel nothing much has happened. So I rate this a four. Character Design: The Mc is actually pretty smart and does care for his parents So this is a three for me. World Background: You did a pretty good job establishing what the world of Marvel is like. so this is a five. Overall: Amazing book keep up the good work man!
This is super good I recommend this! The story Is good and the author doesn't make it confusing 9/10[img=recommend][img=update] Keep up the good work!
Very nice brother... keep the good work coming... don't know much about eternals as I didn't watch that movie for now but yaa I have some understanding about story....I also wanted to know that how you will add the power ups of the Marvel world.
This is awesome!! The preparation is spot on. I just wish that it would live up to the hype when the power reveal comes. Many trips up in the reveal because they made the mc too op in the preparation. Good luck!!!
When I saw that I would start reading this at 69 chapters, I was convinced... This was destiny at play. There existed no possible reality where I could simply ignore such divine intervention.
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I did not enjoy the story because the mc does not gain any personal strength,also author I understand some stories are not for everyone.
Deserve the stars✨ I've been reading up to 180+ (plus more on his patr**n) and it's entertaining. Grammar is not a problem, story development is awesome. It's a wish kind of story but the author put them well. Character design and world background is on point with my understanding as a casual yet marvel's movie enthusiast. Update stability is straight compliment and magnificent. Thumbs up for your efforts to maintain the quality vs quantity. You fellow readers should give this a try. 10 Chaps should be enough, but I warn you it wouldn't.