a boring story nothing changes you have a Mc who care only for himself he cares only to level up is apathetic and arrogant every chapter and more and yea zero changes on plot
damn.. the character of your Mc is ...annoying the least he cares zero about his family i dont even wanna imagine the future how arrogant he gonna be
Eragon nodded. He knew he would have to spend the day working in the fields again, something he wasn't particularly excited about. After four days of intense training and feeling his body grow stronger, the idea of plowing and planting seemed almost... mundane.
The Inheritance Cycle: Getting My Wish Fulfilled (Eragon)
Book&Literature · CouchPotatoDandy
I don't like how easy he get levels like relax bro you are chapter 2 already he is 1 hour or less out and getting level like crazy
[Fatigue Resistance Level 2]… [Fatigue Resistance Level 3]… [Radiation Resistance Level 2]... [Abrasion Resistance Level 3]...
The Inheritance Cycle: Getting My Wish Fulfilled (Eragon)
Book&Literature · CouchPotatoDandy
well yea this story is not for me with all that norce mythology good luck with your story but i can see you will drop it soon !!
why?? no ,really why? what is the reason here to use vikings character names you totally desteroyed the mood of the story first of all you can not make justice to the characters .. damn ..
a somewhat good start but the writing is childish the author is lazy especially with names and there is a lot of plot holes with his story
what a useless chapter the story is dead last 10 chapters you keep put out trash small chapters just to make patreon money
sadly a mid story seems a lot like Ai the characters have no depth and the plot is full of plotholes a Mc with not all the memories 7 years was lie slice of life zero depth at training zero depth at family is there a reason he had no idea about the fox attack even if he remeber that?? he sense the obito 3 months earlier and do nothing ..not svsn tell to someone yea I..story after story ypu getting worse i was reading your stories and was focused now is like reading a generic story with , A do list and checking plot boxes
like the authow said the book is the view of others not the real story, we can take the tv as the original storie the series is amazing and i have read every book over 5 times is fresh and not just copy paste of the books ofc there are plot holes and not perfect but far of disappointing
I also didn't like that Rook's Nest wasn't a plan orchestrated by Aegon and Aemond both, and that the only reason Aegon was there was because he was too drunk. It not only made him seem useless(which I guess is fair), but most importantly it made Rhaenys look like a suicidal dumbo instead of the tenacious, expert dragonrider that she was in the books.
House of the Dragon: Baelon the Mighty
Book&Literature · PrinceOfNilfheim
hope this games end fast this whole ark is boring as heck maybe is just me but i have stop reading this story until it ends this ark
[HPxJJK] - Harry Potter and the Supremacy of Cursed Blood
Anime & Comics · MaliciousPrince