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Marvel: Incursio

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作者: Donnuuu

4.4 (10 評分)

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"Marvel: Incursio"

Liam is reincarnated into the marvel universe where he gains the evolving armor: Incursio.
Aiming to not get killed, he starts his journey to strength.

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4.4

  • 寫作品質
  • 更新的穩定性
  • 故事發展
  • 人物形象設計
  • 世界背景

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Donnuuu
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Author's Shameless 5 Star Review. A few points about the story: - The first few chapters are in the works of being updated since my writing style has improved by leaps thanks to all the feedback I have gotten. -I put a lot of effort into showing how Liam gains powers and to show that they are earned. I don't want to make it a fanfiction where he becomes god on the first step. -The story isn't purely about Incursio, Liam spends a significant amount of time at the sanctum, learning magic. (Of course this has something to do with Incursio but I won't spoiler my plans.) I hope you enjoy reading it and please leave as much feedback so I can improve my writing. I plan to continue making fanfictions and novels after this so its a great help.

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Usiel
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It is written well. MC on the other hand is a cringe hero wannabe. The story has about %30 fillers with MC fighting some yakuza and killing dozens to be the -hero- He is naive and fool of the highest order. Shield agents shoots him and his answer is stealing coulson's captain cards. So Naive, idiot and childish. 40 chapters and he is now with kamar-taj. Generally it's bland to be honest. Good luck to the author.

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LEGENDARYDRAGON

The Story is very entertaining and very good written but I always have the feeling that most of all in the first 25 chapters that the chapter are to short Like very short otherwise it’s good

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AryNau

Good job on hitting 1 million, good luck for the future.😆😆

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ZainSad
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The story is interesting, but the pace is a bit slow – which I actually don’t mind. He learns magic and becomes stronger and stronger, which I also really like. So far, he doesn’t have a girlfriend or anything like that, but I’m curious to see how things will develop. So far, I really enjoy the fanfiction. Please keep writing, and thank you for uploading daily – it’s truly impressive! I look forward to reading a new episode every day.

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Grimartifact

I wasn't sure about this at first, but I'm glad I stuck with this. excited for more, please, more my greed, knows no bounds

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huH2
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I still didn't read it but my expectation for this one is high and i hope ur not gonna make him follow orders on someone make him vigilante like how night raids are that's all

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ahmed_waleed_1200

thanks for you continue hard working and hope you keep up this way and always take care of yourself and hope you stay healthy always and we all I think will try to support you in everyway possible and thanks really for your hard work

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captainfatbelly

the fights in this book are immaculate especially the one in the newest chapter goated book

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