摘要
If you had to chose a power among all the powers of anime what would you choose
OF COURSE YOU WOULD CHOOSE ESCANOR SUNSHINE
i mean who wouldn't want to be as badass as escanor with his great pride ans awesomeness
follow our MC as he uses his powerful grace to rule another world and to prove that he is the strongest man in the world
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author note :
so this is my first novel and i wish for you to criticize me and show where are the faults and i promise to not drop this novel
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Great concept but trashy writing!! author please get an editor and review the chapters before posting please! Great concept but trashy writing!! author please get an editor and review the chapters before posting please! Great concept but trashy writing!! author please get an editor and review the chapters before posting please!
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Author switches between 3rd and 1st P.O.V. in the same sentence, the grammar isn't so bad that it's unreadable but it's still pretty bad. I hate that his is a harem.
Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. 😎😎
I like this story much. I also think that throwing him in the desert, the place where he can be truly at his strongest form is awesome. I am waiting for him and this story amazing things. I hope that the author doesn't disappoint us, readers. I also hope that he shows us his true pride and strength.
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if i was him i wouldn't choose for escanor i would choose for vegeta or broly or goku ....................... BUT most importantly i would choose for the most broken character THE LEGEND OF ALL ANIME THE STRONGEST UNSTOPPABE AND INVICIBLE THE MYTHICAL ANIME CHARACTER SAITAMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Noooo!! I was genuinely into this story!!!! I'm sad that the story got dropped :<< ----------------------------------------------------------------
I think it might just be me but I cant read even the first chapter because it won't load.
Although I ain't far in reading this novel but this is totally BS! Look there is a big difference between being arrogant and proud and the MC acts like a spoiled young master that is disliked in every novel. Your writing is also very bad and there were many grammar mistakes. You could look at your novel first and rewrite it if there were any mistakes then you upload it. I am already impressed that I read 7 chapters of this novel, probably because the idea of having escanor's power.
I like the story but I think that the writing is quite bad and preventing it from getting better at the ranking. I also think that until now, Eros never lost a battle or even got in a bad situation. What I want is for Eros to lose so he can learn and I also want him to fight the other sins, particularly, Pride, Wrath and greed. I think that they are the most interesting of all the sins.
The writing is very bad and I think that even some of the characters are useless and don't add anything to the story. There is also a magic system. Although the author tried to create a good way of leveling up, there is still some loopholes and illogical things. The good thing is putting another 7 deadly sins and to be frank I can't wait for the 2 prideful sins to fight each other If they do.
I like this story very much. I even changed my photo to Escanor so I can show how much I love it. I put 4 stars because aside from the writing, I think that the story is very awesome. I also like the idea of making other seven deadly sins and even another sin of Pride to fight him. I am sure that the author thinks about making Eros and The other Pride fight each other and I can't wait for that.
I like this story very much. although I am not a big fan of seven deadly sins, I still enjoy the story. I read till the end of volume 2 and I still want the author to continue. By the way, There is a little problem which talks about the Star system. In the world Info chapter, the star system is used to measure how much the warrior can skip levels while in volume one, it says that it's used to measure soul power. Thank you please continue.
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I'm impressed that I've been able to read this far, I guess I quite liked the idea of Escanor power. How should I say... the writing is terrible even for me that doesn't have problems with bad grammar. The story is lackluster and cringe The MC tries to be Escanor but just come out as a cringe copycat most of my problem with the novel is actually the MC, the others are bad but are like junk food, the MC, however, is extremely painful to see, I recommend to the author actually see how Escanor acts, he doesn't act like he has self-confidence problems, you can see how he is confident in himself and he acts that way without being humble, but he's merely stating facts instead of being on being a paper soldier, everything he says is true and that's where his confidence comes from. The MC just seems like a **** with chunnibyou and problems with his self-esteem Again I liked the idea but the execution failed