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章節 1: CHAPTER 1 finally the time has come

he opens his eyes and wake up and finds himself in a white space and his head hurting like hell. He failed to remember what last happened and said:

"argh wasn't I in a restaurant or something I don't remember anything".

After some time. The pain in his disappeared and he then remembered what happened and said:

" Ah yes I was walking out from a restaurant after dining with my friends and because I was hurrying to read the latest chapter of One Piece and somehow I fell in a big hole and I don't remember anything after that ".

At that time He noticed in front of Him a black door with red flowers on its front and on it, there were some engraved words that say:

" to whoever reach this door congratulations because you will have the chance to go to a magical world ".

as he read the words I think of how I got here and when he remembered what happened I began laughing and said:

" hhhhhhhhh who thought that I will fall into a space-time dimension in the middle of the road, well it doesn't matter because this door will fulfil my wishes. I will be able to go to a magical world and have everything".

He continues reading the words in the door:

" the world this door leads to is a brutal world where strength is everything if you don't have power you will die that's why this door will give you 3 wishes and that by touching the door the moment your wishes are fulfilled the door will automatically be sent you to the other world good luck and may you reach the epic of the world ".

He completes reading the words and begin thinking about his wishes and imagined having the Sharingan or something like devil fruit from One Piece because as an otaku it's a dream to have those kinds of powers but then he decides against it because it will be a cliche.

[ AN: yeah a big old cliche ].

he then remembered how he loves the seven deadly sins manga and especially the lion Sin Lord Escanor. He smiles, touches the door and says:

" my first wish is to have the grace power of sunshine, The strongest of all graces".

and then the door shined and some words began appearing.

"your first wish has been fulfilled choose your second wish"

After that, he begins feeling a kind of power inside him burning and changing him. His body size became bigger and more muscular and at that moment he couldn't contain himself anymore and was excited and also happy and said:

" hhhhhhhhhhhhhhh finally I have now the power of the sun lord I will be able to use that awesome power now I am the new lion sin of pride nobody will be able to stop me "

after that, he thought a little and said:

"My second wish is to have a cultivation technique that will not only support the sunshine grace and make the human body contain the grace but also makes the grace evolve and grow to surpass everything".

And immediately words appeared on the door

"the second wish granted state your third and final wish "

He started pondering about his final wish as he thought

(I already eliminated the weakness of the grace killing me because the human body can't be a vessel for Sunshine but the only remaining problem is the night form. The third wish must give me the ability to use sunshine even when the night.

As for the cultivation technique it's already engraved in my mind and it will strengthen my body and so it can contain the grace without side effects and also evolve).

He finished thinking, He touched the door and said "

my wish is to have a sun-core inside me that will make me able to store the magic power inside me so I can use the sunshine in the night ".

as I say my final wish the door started opening and I hear the words in my head that said:

" your wishes have been granted you will be teleported to a random place in Sarna world good luck ".

and then he began feeling an attraction power taking him to the world and while that happens he smiles and says:

" Sarna World, you will see a new Power, The Sun lord the lion sin of pride Eros, The strongest man in your world. the time has come ".

after that, Eros entered the door and walked through the light of the black door. It closed again and the white space was quite again without any sound.


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the first chapter please comment and share your thoughts.

I have started correcting the chapters and I won't release any chapter until I make all the previous chapters good.

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