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摘要
This is the story of an ordinary person kcking the bucket in his world and then, after having a brief encounter with a shady ROB masquerading as a company, he finds himself in the MCU. His arrival in that particular universe was not without bumps. As a direct consequence of the bumpy ride, he found himself being shackled with a unique condition.
This is the story of Axle Riddle, an incomplete Avatar of the Sage Force.
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(From 61. ch.) The story is enjoyable, slow, restricted and curious. Although there seem to be many restrictions on their mental powers, the power catalog is currently satisfactory and I hope they will research and develop this discipline in the future. The main character is nice and still fully maintains his secret identity, which is one of my favorite features. It is also nice that he discovers his powers and his powers increase, but damn the story is so slow. I wish he had gained his powers in episode 61 in 2013 so that he could at least be free. But I am sure that reading the story after 2013 will be super enjoyable, so don't give up. And I hope at least F4 is added to the story because it would be great to see Doom vs Axle. It would also be a nice and creative disadvantage for geniuses like Stark-Doom-Richards to produce EMP devices that disperse psychic energies, just like he can't use his full power to distant targets and find creative solutions.
This is great so far. Nothing groundbreaking for an MCU story atm, but it's very solid. I like how the story has progressed, the author is not afraid to let their mc just be a good guy and put forward some effort to make the world a better place, (This is honestly a bit rare in my findings). So far there's a very good update schedule, I hope the author is able to keep it up because I'm excited to see where this story goes!
Really great fanfic, definitely worth the read. leagues better than the avg mcu fanfic you'll find on here.
very underrated fanfic I recommend this to anyone who is interested in marvel
Not bad. But the Sage Force, without wisdom, knowledge is like a fake, a shadow of itself. And here it is literally in the title, it looks like a deception. The plot itself is pretty bad. The hero essentially just revels in his power. But as a character/personality, as a personal story is in its infancy. There is a lack of communication and normal healthy social dynamics here.