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What should a man do when he is forced to replace America’s greatest Hero? Give the best damn show of his life and become the greatest Super Soldier the world has ever seen or die trying.
John was just an ordinary guy who ended up making a deal with a not-so-ordinary Guy. Now stranded in 1943, he must take on the biggest role he could have ever dreamed of, while making sure the world stays intact in the end... oh well, at least there are beautiful women.
(SI-OC in MCU AU) Marvel AU - Marvel Cinematic Universe AU - Crossover - The boys. patreon.com/EmmaCruzader
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so... i thought this was VERY GOOD. The problem is you have a chapter called voglebaum..... World mashups NEVER work. Because plot holes develop and are never solved, so if this is, instead of turning into a cool SI of marvel. Turns into a mash up of the boys and marvel.... then that's the end of this story, really cause then you basically have an immortal murder hobo who will kill all that oppose him. Also, fitting some of these characters into a world already full of mutants, inhumans, Eternals, cosmic beings, godlike aliens, etc.. is almost impossible. Messy is always the results and of course the author always drops it when it get to much a mess to solve the plot.
Looks promising, it's well written, the story is developing in an interesting direction and even though the author calls the MC a self insert, instead of the usual personalityless blank sheet we have an actual character a personality. Looking forward to the next chapter.
please don't drop this it is the only good Captain America si on this whole app
booo how dare you make a good story and then destroy it with adding the boys when not needed or wanted it was good till you wanted more "plot" when we had mutants then you changed raven and charles Xavier's fate and then you decide to add vogelbaum
Introducing Compound V to others was horrible decision. Author already introduced mutants unneccesary which never works in any ff and now this. Disappointing.
The author takes an interesting take combining two serums that would normally never come together but does so in a way that you want to see more combinations in other fics. They also keep a good pacing and don’t rush straight to the main MCU timeline and actually learn about the ongoing of their current world. The writing quality is also high with clear effort put into their work.
The writing in this fanfic is truly remarkable. The chapters are meticulously structured, maintaining a perfect balance that keeps readers hooked from start to finish. Each chapter ends in a way that leaves you eagerly anticipating the next, creating an addictive reading experience. The protagonist stands out as a fascinating character, defined by a somewhat selfish personality that adds depth and realism. His human flaws and the way he navigates through them make him incredibly relatable and compelling. Watching him interact with the world around him is one of the story's highlights, as his actions and decisions reveal layers of complexity and potential for growth. The subtle hints of character development sprinkled throughout the narrative keep readers invested in his journey, eager to see how his experiences will shape him. Setting the story during World War II is a brilliant choice that sets it apart from many other fanfics. The wartime backdrop is vividly brought to life, with battles that are both thrilling and strategically grounded. The author's attention to detail in depicting military strategies adds a layer of authenticity that enhances the overall experience. The protagonist's personal goals intertwine seamlessly with the historical setting, driving the plot forward in a way that feels both grounded and aspirational. The changes he brings about create intriguing possibilities for world-building in future chapters, leaving readers excited for what’s to come. As I write this review, the first arc has been finished on a fantastic way and I can’t wait to see where the story will go next.
Love it! This is my favourite story of yours, by far. Can't wait for more! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
I’ve been a fan of this author’s work since I’ve stumbled upon their Invincible ff several weeks ago. Quality of writing is excellent, the character is interesting and I’m excited to see how he develops on his journey, I also enjoy how the story is developing and it opens up many new options and variables that have great potential to be explored. Author, you are doing a fantastic job, once again, and I can’t wait to see where you take this story.
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this marvel/the boys crossover fanfiction is a new one for me. still early to judge, but the 20+ chapters is very promising. so waiting for more.
Surprisingly I haven't given myself a review yet, like any self-respecting egocentric author this will get 5 stars in all sections. Thanks for all the support! Give me your power stones :D