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Cross is the last of his kind, an extinct species wiped out long ago. Blessed with a strange power, he shall make a name for himself and make everybody remember the Blood Elves once more!
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Looking at the title, I didn't even think this was a HP fanfiction. But I was quickly surprised and found it to be a good read to the point where I just couldn't stop. While I usually wouldn't give 5 stars for a fanfiction due to having a resource to write off of, I decided to say 'F*** it.' and went with it. Do know that the story follows the typical route, however its mainly seen as a side thing as the MC usually doesn't get involved. The main story tends to revolve around the hidden dealings going on around the school and mysteries concerning his race. One of my fav. characters is Carl. Curious about Carl? Then check out this fan-fiction. Overall, I recommend this story and greatly looking forward to what the author has in store for us.
First 100 chapters story was pretty good. After traveling to another plane he seemed to he able to find countless god tier items everytime he walked, then proceeds to act as an OP young master who kills people that look at his wives. He also seems to be blessed by legendary creatures due to being an elf, yet completely ignores the items they give him. He also keeps helping yun che who he calls a brother, yet not once has yun che actually helped him other than when he arrived on the profound continent. Yun ches wives make absolutely no sense, he meets a new girl every day basically and talks about how much he loves them completely ignoring the fact he has 50 other wives and countless children. Also when cross heals or gives legendary items to some random girls, they never thank him and then meet yun che once and become his wife. Even when cross saves people they still somehow fall for the weak(in comparison to cross) yun che. Cross also becomes OP way too fast, it states about him going from the start of the god realm to becoming a true god in 5 years when other people take thousands of years. His wives are made OP more than cross yet dont use their opness, eg luna, she literally got the ability to look into the future, easily read minds, and detect everything in a 500 kilometer radius. while cross has none of those abilities. Once he becomes a true god it turns out his children, which have had zero relevance to the story and have lived their whole lives inside cross internal dimension, are more talented than cross, how does that even make sense, the dude literally destroyed everything in 5 years, if he had been born in a higher realm he probably could have killed everyone When he was 10, and yet his children are somehow more talented, complete rubbish. cross also kills complete realms potentially holding millions if not billions of people, because he didnt like there leaders. makes lots of sense. It states while they were in the profound continent that luna looked into the future ans saw brotherhood or burma killing them and their family, and the only way around that is if cross trains by himself. so they leave for a higher realm which has tons of high level resources, increasing their cultivation rapidly, making them (when cross attends the god convention) stronger than cross, and even after that the brotherhood didnt appear, so they basically abandoned cross and got op, while cross using worse reasources eventually caught up, and they reunite even though the brotherhood didnt appear. Basically causing cross to live without his children and family for absolutely no reason for 5 years while also slowing him down. Going back to the profound continent where he abandoned his parents and sisters, aswell as all his friends, never mentioning them again after they arrived at the profound continent, even though he stayed their for literally 10 years, there was zero mention of his friends other than two small meetings with daphne and one of hermione. Cross literally cripples himself by using only his strings as a mace for ages even though there are countless mystical arts that he learns and never uses once, because apparenlty his self made techniques which even he admitted needing improvement are better than beings who used to be true gods before they left their inheritances behind. Cross is told to be the last blood elf, with inherited memories, and yet doesnt no half the shit when it comes to the cultivation power system, he also has an ability where only the elf god ancestor had before him, yet he never uses it after getting his own armor and mace, even though they are literally invisible op sharp strings which can instantly kill people. he just decides not to use it for zero reason. After they leave the Harry potter world he also almost never again uses the blessings of the tree of life, even though they are incredibly op. The stort itself feels more like two completely seperate storys stuffed together. one good harry potter story that could have had incredible development which sadly wasnt developed and a shitty cultivation world wuxia novel with countless young master syndrome children, that always use stereotipical quotes. The younf master also only go after cross and yun ches wife even though when they attend the tournaments there are supposedly countless beauties their, if so then why at every tournament does cross kills someone for looking at his wives, it gets ild very fast. there is also the problem were only cross and yun che find the countless random inheritance and godly items, like they will walk into a random forest, yun che will rescue a ten year ild girl about to get raped by bandits, and while he does that corss finds the goldy items that the bandits ignored for zero reason, then yun che will return 6 years later and collect the little girl he was grooming with 2 months later her becoming pregnant and yun che running of into another trap either finding another wife ans never mentioning them again, or getting himself stuck in stupid traps were all his wives think he died only for him to reapper a year later with a bunch more woman.
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let's give this book it's first review. Amazing concept, well written and overall a good fan-fic. Now all I need is more updates and chapters. Hope that this novel doesn't get dropped. That's all.
This story is pretty good but i will not give it 5 stars for a reason that mc's personality is not really stable and so are his relation with others. Like you don't know when he will explode. Other thing is his relationship with others some time he treat them as his friends and the very next chapter he would say he don't care if they live or die. The worst is part with hermione some times he says that she is like her sister and other times he would just leave her to fend off herself saying he doesn't care about anyone other than his family. Plus despite the harem tag there is no harem insight for long. Hermione is shown to love him deeply but he constantly asks her to move on or you will die alone. I don't know why there is a harem tag here may be author is thinking of ending the story with a harem idk but really the tag feels misleading i mean there is not even a little romantic development between him and any other women except luna who is the main wife.
Just reread this its not that good, grammar is ok but the story feels so rushed and the mc is very stupid or atleast chooses to do stupid stuff the entire hp arc feels like an intRoductury chapter which i guess it is however its not a good one, throughout the entire fic i wanted it to end it was a complete waste of time on my part
This novel is great if you only count the first 70 chapters because after that the only thing it turns into is the mc following scum che around in the atg world watching him pick up women while the mc follows him like a lost puppy so the story is straight garbage after 70 chapters mc is like a hormonal Middle Aged woman who just has mental out bursts for no reason
It has almost nothing to do with HP and is just a cultivation novel thats basicly everything it is. 💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤
I love this story, it's different from other HP fanfics and it has a mystery element to it. (Im on chapter 21 so far and can say that this is one of the best HP fanfics on this app)
HP arc is great but with the start of the ATG arc it slowly but steadily goes from 5 stars to by ch 115 all the way down to 2.5 stars. it's still worth a read for the HP arc.
it was good for around 40 chapter main character was some one you could understand but at 42 he change to a edge lord tat kills people left and you cant even tolerant reading one more line. DROPPED
I dont normally write reviews and I doubt the author will see this but. I felt I had to make a review because this was by far the best book I read your a great author with unlimited potential keep up the good work but don't over work yourself your health comes first thank you for writing this book ill definitely be reading any others that come out or that has come out thank you for your time
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Everything was Good(I was interested in Harry Potter arc because its creativity thought) BUT it became Downhill because mc personality at new world(or do you want to make a plot where he regret his action later on because of his arrogance? I smell some kind of sacrifice... Meh)... And how the f they(MC with those ATG people) became so close after a few chapter(maybe its only a 2/3 days I forget), they seem like a long lost family. They interaction like a sh*t(Is that comedy part? I don't think so). Waiting for redemption... It has potential thought..
Honestly, this fanfic/novel is really, really good. It's incredibly interesting and nice to read. The author's writing quality is great, I honestly never noticed any sentences that seemed weird or just wrong. His update stability is perfect, 3 chapters or something a day, really great. Even I didn't manage to keep up a motivation to write as much the closer I got to the end of my spark of motivation. From my own experience, I know that you can write 10k words a day if you put in the effort, but you need to love writing. The story development was great and definitely interesting. I won't say much about it, you just need to read tbh. The mc is strong, but there's still something left to strive for, some underlying threat. As for the characters: they all feel alive and have their own actual personalities. That's what I feel like at least. Either way, the author ONCE AGAIN forced the development of a harem by making the female lead seem alright with sharing her man with another. This ultimately made me drop this, which is a true shame, this novel is perfect. If you are okay with sharing your loved one with others, then by all means, read this novel, it's perfect for you. If you, however, think that it's not right to share the one you love with someone else, then this is not for you, please do not start reading this, you might not want to stop reading later on. I only need to see a harem tag on a novel and know that it's not worth my time. In future novels and fanfics of this author, I'll have to be careful. It's been the second time that this author only added the harem tag later on in the story, so you never know whether you should start reading or not. Just from writing quality and story, hell yes, definitely reading, but the single word "harem" already makes all this effort put into this completely worthless in my eyes. A harem destroys a story and makes it unreadable. But that's just me, I know many people think differently. Anyway, truly, if you are okay with harems or even want them, then please read this. It all comes down to whether you like harems or not. The story is great and I hope the author doesn't delete this. I don't think I've said anything wrong to offend anyone here. Not that I truly cared if I offended anyone, but lmao I guess.
An amazing story with an interesting take on the Harry Potter world blending various concepts from other stories. I enjoy the comedy between the characters with my favourite being the MC cross green grass and his numerous magical beasts that make any magi zoologist jealous. The romance between the mc and best girl Luna is also a welcome change of pace to other pics who say **** it Harem to increase pureblood population. also love how this is a dark lord Dumbledore fic and how he analyses each of his actions methodically as he goes form year to year. For people who complain that its too short or he's going to fast I would suggest rating the authors other works first.
This fanfic is incredibly amazing !!! It's been a long time since I read something that makes my heart race and makes me anxious for the next chapter !!! Every novel has some problems, but this one is so interesting and involved me so deeply in reading that I couldn't find any. It is so rare that I find such a jewel that I am even feeling euphoric !!! If you have a patreon I absolutely don't mind signing up, if the price is right.
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That was a SOLID ending! Usually I have to slog through the ending of cultivation novels/fics but this really wrapped the story up with all the scheming, slaughter and comedy that I was hoping to read. I feel curious of what comes after but I'm also truly satisfied with the ending written... Top 5 fics I've read. Easily.
why's fanfics that I don't want to read always have a tons of chapters, while a fanfics that i really like always dropped?