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La historia es bastante interesante empezando por sus orígenes mientras se va volviendo más fuerte en su travesía, tiene una buena gramática traducción y el desarrollo de la historia es fluido con un sentido del humor agradable, ya entrando en los mundos de cultivo dónde es comprensible para su desarrollo de poder escalonado y sólido es bastante gracioso cómo se va burlando de las típicas frases chinas de cultivo 😆 pero mientras progresa ya se ve contaminado por los típicos estereotipos xianxia 😮💨 sólo llegue al cap 152, a todo esto sigue siendo una buena lectura para pasar el tiempo
That was a SOLID ending! Usually I have to slog through the ending of cultivation novels/fics but this really wrapped the story up with all the scheming, slaughter and comedy that I was hoping to read. I feel curious of what comes after but I'm also truly satisfied with the ending written... Top 5 fics I've read. Easily.
This is a novel for fun this is novel to test your patience and stupidity tolerance the author kept trying to force the plot and he took “”low-key”” to a whole new level it went from “”low-key”” to the””MC don’ t exists in the novel”” what.a wasted story
Novela xiaxia 🤮🤮🤮🤮 Nunca entendi cosas de "cultivo" raras y me disgustan bastante , vine porque me parecia interesante un elfo es HP y después me entero de que todo son chinos cultivadores
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Really enjoyed the story and was very entertained throughout. I'm looking forward to your next one.
Honestly WOW… it’s a fantastic story much much better than I thought it would be. From the start with the planning, over cautiousness, fighting, moulding out friendships/relationships until later on in the story with character development to comedy and lots of action. All round a fantastic read one I’d definitely like to read again in the future, author truly did a great job with this book i would love to see another one like it with a different setting in the future.
To b honest, my favorite part was the harry potter part of the book. The stuff after was, different. But still cool. This is definitely a good pass time read.
Author should have added “world-jumping” tag here. I’m only browsing for Harry Potter fanfics and thought this is solely for harry potter world but discovered later that its NOT.. why don’t webnovel have more decent HP fanfics..
how should i say it it just doesn't feel like an hp fanfic its like a good premise bad badly executed kind of thing honestly it just doesn't make sense a lot of times and the main character lets just say not a fan of this type of mc
It has almost nothing to do with HP and is just a cultivation novel thats basicly everything it is. 💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤
First review I write: Loved how author wrote everything, how they hooked me right at the beginning of the story Can’t say anything about update stability other than it is finished. Character design: Amazing, the members in the harem aren’t vases and have their own little backstory and why he picked them. The MC keeps growing throughout the entire story and is sometimes emotionally supported by his harem members.
it was good for around 40 chapter main character was some one you could understand but at 42 he change to a edge lord tat kills people left and you cant even tolerant reading one more line. DROPPED
it a great concept but the author dose not know how to write well and does not fact check before posting for example he said that humans came from Neanderthals which is false.
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Ah everything was great until they go to atg. I have read only a few chapters of atg and not a fan of it. I can still follow the story at first after arrival but then they just follow Yun Che everywhere and I don't know what they're doing anymore.
Just reread this its not that good, grammar is ok but the story feels so rushed and the mc is very stupid or atleast chooses to do stupid stuff the entire hp arc feels like an intRoductury chapter which i guess it is however its not a good one, throughout the entire fic i wanted it to end it was a complete waste of time on my part
Reread it again after a few months and still love it❤❤❤ lot of ppl are saying MC act like a typical Young maszer at the end, but i think its pretty plausibale with his past character development and all the factors...i dont hate it😊 Hail the Monkey Godking
God story 10/10 wery Nice Coll Read the whole thing Now i am sad rip the 4th wall What now? Yeet im lonly
Yhis was a great read! A few grammar mistakes he/she and word repeats here and there, but over all it was entertaining. solid 9/10 would recommend this novel if they want HP fanfic with fantasy stuff!
2.8 / 5... I had to drop this fic around 27% in. First quarter was pretty good, I've read better H.P. fics, and the author casually uses the R-Slur frequently... There are frequent but mild typos, weird A.U. changes, debatable lore inconsistencies (it's a stealth A.U. so its hard to tell,) but "okay -> good" quality consistently. When the first "arc" ends, we go full wuxia and cultivation... Two things I have no interest in, and in a setting I don't know beforehand. A setting I have no interest in reading the source material for... (I think you can tell why I dropped this.)
La historia es bastante interesante empezando por sus orígenes mientras se va volviendo más fuerte en su travesía, tiene una buena gramática traducción y el desarrollo de la historia es fluido con un sentido del humor agradable, ya entrando en los mundos de cultivo dónde es comprensible para su desarrollo de poder escalonado y sólido es bastante gracioso cómo se va burlando de las típicas frases chinas de cultivo 😆 pero mientras progresa ya se ve contaminado por los típicos estereotipos xianxia 😮💨 sólo llegue al cap 152, a todo esto sigue siendo una buena lectura para pasar el tiempo
That was a SOLID ending! Usually I have to slog through the ending of cultivation novels/fics but this really wrapped the story up with all the scheming, slaughter and comedy that I was hoping to read. I feel curious of what comes after but I'm also truly satisfied with the ending written... Top 5 fics I've read. Easily.
This is a novel for fun this is novel to test your patience and stupidity tolerance the author kept trying to force the plot and he took “”low-key”” to a whole new level it went from “”low-key”” to the””MC don’ t exists in the novel”” what.a wasted story
Novela xiaxia 🤮🤮🤮🤮 Nunca entendi cosas de "cultivo" raras y me disgustan bastante , vine porque me parecia interesante un elfo es HP y después me entero de que todo son chinos cultivadores
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Really enjoyed the story and was very entertained throughout. I'm looking forward to your next one.
Honestly WOW… it’s a fantastic story much much better than I thought it would be. From the start with the planning, over cautiousness, fighting, moulding out friendships/relationships until later on in the story with character development to comedy and lots of action. All round a fantastic read one I’d definitely like to read again in the future, author truly did a great job with this book i would love to see another one like it with a different setting in the future.
To b honest, my favorite part was the harry potter part of the book. The stuff after was, different. But still cool. This is definitely a good pass time read.
Author should have added “world-jumping” tag here. I’m only browsing for Harry Potter fanfics and thought this is solely for harry potter world but discovered later that its NOT.. why don’t webnovel have more decent HP fanfics..
how should i say it it just doesn't feel like an hp fanfic its like a good premise bad badly executed kind of thing honestly it just doesn't make sense a lot of times and the main character lets just say not a fan of this type of mc
It has almost nothing to do with HP and is just a cultivation novel thats basicly everything it is. 💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤💤
First review I write: Loved how author wrote everything, how they hooked me right at the beginning of the story Can’t say anything about update stability other than it is finished. Character design: Amazing, the members in the harem aren’t vases and have their own little backstory and why he picked them. The MC keeps growing throughout the entire story and is sometimes emotionally supported by his harem members.
it was good for around 40 chapter main character was some one you could understand but at 42 he change to a edge lord tat kills people left and you cant even tolerant reading one more line. DROPPED
it a great concept but the author dose not know how to write well and does not fact check before posting for example he said that humans came from Neanderthals which is false.
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Ah everything was great until they go to atg. I have read only a few chapters of atg and not a fan of it. I can still follow the story at first after arrival but then they just follow Yun Che everywhere and I don't know what they're doing anymore.
Just reread this its not that good, grammar is ok but the story feels so rushed and the mc is very stupid or atleast chooses to do stupid stuff the entire hp arc feels like an intRoductury chapter which i guess it is however its not a good one, throughout the entire fic i wanted it to end it was a complete waste of time on my part
Reread it again after a few months and still love it❤❤❤ lot of ppl are saying MC act like a typical Young maszer at the end, but i think its pretty plausibale with his past character development and all the factors...i dont hate it😊 Hail the Monkey Godking
God story 10/10 wery Nice Coll Read the whole thing Now i am sad rip the 4th wall What now? Yeet im lonly
Yhis was a great read! A few grammar mistakes he/she and word repeats here and there, but over all it was entertaining. solid 9/10 would recommend this novel if they want HP fanfic with fantasy stuff!
2.8 / 5... I had to drop this fic around 27% in. First quarter was pretty good, I've read better H.P. fics, and the author casually uses the R-Slur frequently... There are frequent but mild typos, weird A.U. changes, debatable lore inconsistencies (it's a stealth A.U. so its hard to tell,) but "okay -> good" quality consistently. When the first "arc" ends, we go full wuxia and cultivation... Two things I have no interest in, and in a setting I don't know beforehand. A setting I have no interest in reading the source material for... (I think you can tell why I dropped this.)