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Read up to the paid for chapters cause Im broke, but I enjoyed the novel pretty well up to this point. The MC isnt a complete idot and the girls actually have emotions for the most part. I also really like 7 deadly sins type stuff so its right up my ally. All in all enjoyed the read and maby can continue reading at some point in the future.
Currently have read up to the most recent chapter, as of right now 81. The story is written very well with minimal errors. Pacing seems pretty good so far. The author is very detailed when it comes to describing the world and the characters in it. The power system seems fairly flushed out so far. Very interested in keeping up with this novel. Keep up the great work author.
not going to lie I was skeptical at first but I just hit chapter 20 and I can say that I really like this setup and initial phase of this story it holds the attention and it makes me want to find out how the author plans to flush out the storyline all in all great novel give it a chance
It’s an interesting book so far. But the fact that I can’t read past chapter 110, because the chapters need fixing is something else. Especially when it’s been a month since then.
The story is unique but need some help with story development as essence should be same but with varying places and working style.
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So far a good story however chapters are being repeated with no new ones so far
I'll be honest I got baited by the picture of my goodness Elysia, I'll see and read this now and to see if she's here. I'll update my review later on after I finished reading at latest chapter.
Two chapters I paid for are still incomplete. It also seems as if the author does not know or does not care about it. This story is great, but if these two chapters are not fixed, I cannot continue to read on.