/ Anime & Comics / The Gamer Cthulhu
摘要
A mutant Gets a system lets see how he explores the Marvel world
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- 人物形象設計
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The world and story seems okay so far from what I’ve read…but you really should work on grammar and such. It’s really distracting as a reader when there are just so many errors taking me out of the story in almost every paragraph. Proof reading your chapters about three times before you upload it might help with that.
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pretty good all around 👌 hope it doesn't stop like other gold mines rerererer reererererererererererere rererererererer rerererer rerererer
The story has little content in the chapters, it bothers a lot that each chapter shows the status, it is as if it will be placed to increase the number of words, I skip them and it simply does not bother in the continuity of the story ... In itself it is a good story if you take out the status in each chapter, and add more content in the chp...