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Marcus had never believed that he would receive the Truck-Kun Treatment. In the end, he did not, but he instead met his end at the hand of Plane-Kun. A plane fell on his house killing him without him even knowing what did him in. That is where he met a goddess who gave him three wishes. Not knowing where he would be sent he picked what he thought would serve him forever. He chose well when he got sent into DC with unlimited potential at his finger tips.
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Warhammer inspired fanfics are so rare so here is my take. The Boosted Gear and Divine Dividing are so OP that they will serve a Demigod Custodes in DC. This will be fun.
The protagonist is the worst kind of failure, the one who thinks he's superior to 80% of people just because he read "the art of war" and goes to the gym lol
burn the heretic, the alien, and the mutant. FOR THE EMPEROR!! May power stones flow for this is one of the emerors finest
The sheer amount of heresy in this is quite ridiculous. Changing the og shadow keeper custodian armor was dumb. The writing quality took a severe down turn after the first 5 chapters. It quickly devolved into a power fic incredibly quickly. Now I wouldn’t have a problem with that if wasn’t done so poorly. This is not to mention this custodian has no loyalty to the Emperor at all. Like if you wanted to do that just make the Mc a Primarch. As a Dc fic this is as generic as it gets. As a Warhammer fic it’s not just terrible it’s just vile heresy.
Good writing and a good plot, but just like many authors out there, this one also decided to write multiple books at the same time, as a result, irregular updates, and bro got a big attitude problem. Just wrote a simple comment about how I hate authors who just outright abandon their books, and man, did I hurt his ego. Anyway, I'm pretty sure this review is also going to be deleted just like all those negative reviews this guy deleted. Oh, well, time to find a new one.
It was going good but then the batman slender came out of nowhere and i just can’t stand it when fics do that
Nice!, I'll read it will listening to Coleus Sanctus! [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
Because I’m a fan of warhammer 40k and I really like the Custodes I’m giving you a 5 star. FOR THE EMPEROR!!!! KILL THE ALL THE HERETIC XENO AND THE MUTANT
as of ch.3 It's interesting if i say so myself, can't wait for more. I suggest that people save it in their library and stock pile it if you want to enjoy this story cus it seems to be one of the fast-paced stories yet slow enough to enjoy.
You have like 3 Accounts and on every singel one have Fire that only needs to be feed, This at this Time only has 2 Chapters and already has me Hook, Line and Sinker
this fic made for the fans of Warhammer 40k and as a fan....I love it FOR THE EMPEROR
A_Real_Werewolf234 Great Fanfic Keep up the great work You can do this Dc fanfic idea directly after The Adeptus Custodes(DC) DC:Mangekyo I was born into an ordinary family, lost my parents early, and lived a life of solitude in a dirty apartment. And then, I died when a plane crash landed in my bedroom. Here I am in DC with the eternal Mangekyo Sharingan. I decided I will be a villain and it will be fun. Harem Amanda Waller Harley Quinn Tala Catwoman Talia Al Ghul Killer Frost Poison Ivy Tanya Fox Christina Bell Circe Iolande Aga’po Ghia’ta Veronica Cale Dawn Golden Tsarita Bleez Lyssa Drak Zazzala Emerald Empress Lois Lane aka Superwoman (Earth 3) Blackfire Soranik Natu Mongal Maxima Grail
Hmmm... Why must Custodes? Custodes and Silence is especially Must Loyal To Emperor in their DNA. it hard to removed. i prefer MC has Primach than Custodes. and MC has Psyker ability? from where this ability come? You must know, Psyker can do magically thing in Warhammer because Physical Reality and Warp is can't separate each other, thats why Psyker can borrow Power of Warp to Physical Reality. And because Physical Reality and Warp can't separate, they influence each other, and make Chaos/Gods born. Now the Power Scaling, who stronger being in Your DC? The Presence? The Goddess? or Warp Being (Chaos)? There too many plothole. Because MC can do Psyker Ability, i doubt Warp Exist in DC. i also doubt Chaos already exist in Warp. in Small Scale (Earth) your fanfic has no plot hole, because its just show-off MC power, and people just think MC just Metahuman. but in Big Scale (Universe, Multiverse) your story have too many Flaw and Plot Hole. and your Character even don't make DC Cosmic Being react, its more weird.
It's probably one of the best (if not the best) DC fanfic ever. The writing is superb, MC is Smart & had a good base to gow as the strongest in the DC Verse, the storyline is thought out as well. I can't ask for anything else. This is just Sooo Good!!
i wasn't really a Warhammer fan but this is rather well done was a little confused for a bit tho im not really Warhammer/DC fan so had to google a few things/characters
What is your Duty? To serve Emperor's Will. What is Emperor's Will? That we fight and die. What is Death? It is our duty. What is your Duty?