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hey author I really like this fic and I had an idea maybe you could put a grey knight in marvel or dc
I give stones, You give more. It is heresy to not have at least 100 chapters with an ff this good. But I understand because they are long and that makes it better. For Terra, the Imperium, the Emperor, and the Fallen.
this fic made for the fans of Warhammer 40k and as a fan....I love it FOR THE EMPEROR
It’s a fanfic that blends elements from anime, comics, and the Warhammer 40K universe. The story centers around Marcus, who dies unexpectedly and is reincarnated in the DC Universe after receiving three wishes from a goddess. His choices allow him to become incredibly powerful in his new life, with influences from the Adeptus Custodes—a faction from Warhammer 40K known for their elite warriors. The novel explores Marcus's journey and how he navigates his new reality with unlimited potential.
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A_Real_Werewolf234 Great Fanfic Keep up the great work You can do this Dc fanfic idea directly after The Adeptus Custodes(DC) DC:Mangekyo I was born into an ordinary family, lost my parents early, and lived a life of solitude in a dirty apartment. And then, I died when a plane crash landed in my bedroom. Here I am in DC with the eternal Mangekyo Sharingan. I decided I will be a villain and it will be fun. Harem Amanda Waller Harley Quinn Tala Catwoman Talia Al Ghul Killer Frost Poison Ivy Tanya Fox Christina Bell Circe Iolande Aga’po Ghia’ta Veronica Cale Dawn Golden Tsarita Bleez Lyssa Drak Zazzala Emerald Empress Lois Lane aka Superwoman (Earth 3) Blackfire Soranik Natu Mongal Maxima Grail
Hmmm... Why must Custodes? Custodes and Silence is especially Must Loyal To Emperor in their DNA. it hard to removed. i prefer MC has Primach than Custodes. and MC has Psyker ability? from where this ability come? You must know, Psyker can do magically thing in Warhammer because Physical Reality and Warp is can't separate each other, thats why Psyker can borrow Power of Warp to Physical Reality. And because Physical Reality and Warp can't separate, they influence each other, and make Chaos/Gods born. Now the Power Scaling, who stronger being in Your DC? The Presence? The Goddess? or Warp Being (Chaos)? There too many plothole. Because MC can do Psyker Ability, i doubt Warp Exist in DC. i also doubt Chaos already exist in Warp. in Small Scale (Earth) your fanfic has no plot hole, because its just show-off MC power, and people just think MC just Metahuman. but in Big Scale (Universe, Multiverse) your story have too many Flaw and Plot Hole. and your Character even don't make DC Cosmic Being react, its more weird.
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A GREAT READ. THE NOVEL IS VERY WELL WRITTEN, THE STORY IS CAPTIVING AND ADDICTIVE. IF YOU DON'T KNOW WARHAMMER LIKE ME OR IF YOU DO, IT DOESN'T MAKE A DIFFERENCE, IT'S WELL EXPLAINED. IT HAS A LOT OF POTENTIAL
It's probably one of the best (if not the best) DC fanfic ever. The writing is superb, MC is Smart & had a good base to gow as the strongest in the DC Verse, the storyline is thought out as well. I can't ask for anything else. This is just Sooo Good!!
Good writing and a good plot, but just like many authors out there, this one also decided to write multiple books at the same time, as a result, irregular updates, and bro got a big attitude problem. Just wrote a simple comment about how I hate authors who just outright abandon their books, and man, did I hurt his ego. Anyway, I'm pretty sure this review is also going to be deleted just like all those negative reviews this guy deleted. Oh, well, time to find a new one.
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It was going good but then the batman slender came out of nowhere and i just can’t stand it when fics do that
i wasn't really a Warhammer fan but this is rather well done was a little confused for a bit tho im not really Warhammer/DC fan so had to google a few things/characters
The protagonist is the worst kind of failure, the one who thinks he's superior to 80% of people just because he read "the art of war" and goes to the gym lol
Don’t know if it’s just me but the grammar feels like it’s getting worse but it’s probably just because I haven’t read this in a while
I love this one so much! I'm a sucker for 40K fics, and this one's one best i've read (so far). Even if you're not familiar with the universe, you can still enjoy this no problem at all.
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The sheer amount of heresy in this is quite ridiculous. Changing the og shadow keeper custodian armor was dumb. The writing quality took a severe down turn after the first 5 chapters. It quickly devolved into a power fic incredibly quickly. Now I wouldn’t have a problem with that if wasn’t done so poorly. This is not to mention this custodian has no loyalty to the Emperor at all. Like if you wanted to do that just make the Mc a Primarch. As a Dc fic this is as generic as it gets. As a Warhammer fic it’s not just terrible it’s just vile heresy.
Good, but not for me cause harem. For the people who do not care it is certainly worth a shot.
I would normally wait for novels to have at least 50 chapters before starting them. However, this story seemed too interesting to wait. I regret nothing. It is as interesting as it looked
id love to get into this fanfic but I know very little about well what ever game it's based on so I'll just give you 4 stars based off recommendations
hey author I really like this fic and I had an idea maybe you could put a grey knight in marvel or dc
I give stones, You give more. It is heresy to not have at least 100 chapters with an ff this good. But I understand because they are long and that makes it better. For Terra, the Imperium, the Emperor, and the Fallen.
this fic made for the fans of Warhammer 40k and as a fan....I love it FOR THE EMPEROR
It’s a fanfic that blends elements from anime, comics, and the Warhammer 40K universe. The story centers around Marcus, who dies unexpectedly and is reincarnated in the DC Universe after receiving three wishes from a goddess. His choices allow him to become incredibly powerful in his new life, with influences from the Adeptus Custodes—a faction from Warhammer 40K known for their elite warriors. The novel explores Marcus's journey and how he navigates his new reality with unlimited potential.
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A_Real_Werewolf234 Great Fanfic Keep up the great work You can do this Dc fanfic idea directly after The Adeptus Custodes(DC) DC:Mangekyo I was born into an ordinary family, lost my parents early, and lived a life of solitude in a dirty apartment. And then, I died when a plane crash landed in my bedroom. Here I am in DC with the eternal Mangekyo Sharingan. I decided I will be a villain and it will be fun. Harem Amanda Waller Harley Quinn Tala Catwoman Talia Al Ghul Killer Frost Poison Ivy Tanya Fox Christina Bell Circe Iolande Aga’po Ghia’ta Veronica Cale Dawn Golden Tsarita Bleez Lyssa Drak Zazzala Emerald Empress Lois Lane aka Superwoman (Earth 3) Blackfire Soranik Natu Mongal Maxima Grail
Hmmm... Why must Custodes? Custodes and Silence is especially Must Loyal To Emperor in their DNA. it hard to removed. i prefer MC has Primach than Custodes. and MC has Psyker ability? from where this ability come? You must know, Psyker can do magically thing in Warhammer because Physical Reality and Warp is can't separate each other, thats why Psyker can borrow Power of Warp to Physical Reality. And because Physical Reality and Warp can't separate, they influence each other, and make Chaos/Gods born. Now the Power Scaling, who stronger being in Your DC? The Presence? The Goddess? or Warp Being (Chaos)? There too many plothole. Because MC can do Psyker Ability, i doubt Warp Exist in DC. i also doubt Chaos already exist in Warp. in Small Scale (Earth) your fanfic has no plot hole, because its just show-off MC power, and people just think MC just Metahuman. but in Big Scale (Universe, Multiverse) your story have too many Flaw and Plot Hole. and your Character even don't make DC Cosmic Being react, its more weird.
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A GREAT READ. THE NOVEL IS VERY WELL WRITTEN, THE STORY IS CAPTIVING AND ADDICTIVE. IF YOU DON'T KNOW WARHAMMER LIKE ME OR IF YOU DO, IT DOESN'T MAKE A DIFFERENCE, IT'S WELL EXPLAINED. IT HAS A LOT OF POTENTIAL
It's probably one of the best (if not the best) DC fanfic ever. The writing is superb, MC is Smart & had a good base to gow as the strongest in the DC Verse, the storyline is thought out as well. I can't ask for anything else. This is just Sooo Good!!
Good writing and a good plot, but just like many authors out there, this one also decided to write multiple books at the same time, as a result, irregular updates, and bro got a big attitude problem. Just wrote a simple comment about how I hate authors who just outright abandon their books, and man, did I hurt his ego. Anyway, I'm pretty sure this review is also going to be deleted just like all those negative reviews this guy deleted. Oh, well, time to find a new one.
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It was going good but then the batman slender came out of nowhere and i just can’t stand it when fics do that
i wasn't really a Warhammer fan but this is rather well done was a little confused for a bit tho im not really Warhammer/DC fan so had to google a few things/characters
The protagonist is the worst kind of failure, the one who thinks he's superior to 80% of people just because he read "the art of war" and goes to the gym lol
Don’t know if it’s just me but the grammar feels like it’s getting worse but it’s probably just because I haven’t read this in a while
I love this one so much! I'm a sucker for 40K fics, and this one's one best i've read (so far). Even if you're not familiar with the universe, you can still enjoy this no problem at all.
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The sheer amount of heresy in this is quite ridiculous. Changing the og shadow keeper custodian armor was dumb. The writing quality took a severe down turn after the first 5 chapters. It quickly devolved into a power fic incredibly quickly. Now I wouldn’t have a problem with that if wasn’t done so poorly. This is not to mention this custodian has no loyalty to the Emperor at all. Like if you wanted to do that just make the Mc a Primarch. As a Dc fic this is as generic as it gets. As a Warhammer fic it’s not just terrible it’s just vile heresy.
Good, but not for me cause harem. For the people who do not care it is certainly worth a shot.
I would normally wait for novels to have at least 50 chapters before starting them. However, this story seemed too interesting to wait. I regret nothing. It is as interesting as it looked
id love to get into this fanfic but I know very little about well what ever game it's based on so I'll just give you 4 stars based off recommendations