Shisui is suitable for the Wind or Lightning Breathing Techniques, and he could possibly be one of a kind in terms of Illusionary Techniques (if there are techniques like Butterfly Breathing and others, it's undeniable that he can master an Illusion Technique). But I never imagined him having the Flame Breathing Technique; after all, he was known to be an extremely fast ninja.
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Is this a translation? Because if so, I understand the repetitiveness of some phrases that repeat in each chapter or even within the same chapter. It would also be better to stop using the previous name he had in his past life; now it's Harry, there's no sense in continuing to refer to him with another name that isn't Harry. The protagonist's mentality seems strange and by each chapter it appears as though he becomes more stupid in his decisions. The way he tries to dodge Hermione's questions is also silly... the only good and redeeming aspect of this FF is the idea of including the "Lord of Mysteries" sequence.
Beautiful chapter, I love this novel, keep up the good work.
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A short chapter, really short, but good. Now I wonder if he will leave a stone for Roger to enter and scan him, maybe even scan all his memories and leave a stone with Roger as a kind of AI. And in the future, when he meets Ace, he could let him see his father. He could also go to where Ace's mother is and do the same. Or he could go to Nico Robin's island and scan the books to have all the knowledge like Vegapunk did. So many ideas, I'll be watching.
Wait a moment, did they break up as in they're no longer a couple, or did they separate to do their respective activities but are still together... But what happened?
And here comes my enthusiasm to continue reading, as the blonde would say, shouting, this is ridiculous.
I understand about going to Ladybug's world, but I don't understand the reason why being the brother of the protagonist... Nor would any brother of the cat, I would have preferred it to be simply external to them, being brothers takes away all the grace and creativity and contains much that can be done...
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original En Miraculous, Con la voluntad de la Araña. (Español)
Una persona ordinaria fue tomada de su universo y llevada a la fuerza a otro mundo, que conoce a medias, con poderes, habilidades y recuerdos que no son suyos. ¿Qué va a hacer a continuación? ¿Dará la talla al gran peso que le dieron? -------- ---------- ----------- Autor: esto es solo para practicar mi mano al escribir, tomé un mundo realmente simple como es el mundo de Ladybug (Miraculous), porque el giro mundial es pequeño, centralizado y un concepto muy simple de moldear. El prota tiene poderes de Spiderman porque estoy pensando en una gran historia de Spiderman en Marvel y quiero ver si puedo escribir bien algunas escenas, además de que Marvel es demasiado extenso para comenzar a escribir directamente en él. No se tomen esto enserio porque es de práctica y sacar ideas de la cabeza, nada más ... Puede ser algo bueno como algo basura.3 Chs 70 收藏
Hey, great chapter! Quick question, how often do you release new chapters? I’m really enjoying this fanfic.
Reborn into a World Without Us
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