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''The only thing more lethal than a gun, is a woman.''
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[Warning: this novel features Mature content, meaning: sex scenes]
This is a story about a kidnapping, a knight with a Maserati instead of a horse, a girl who tries to find her best friend but stumbles on her journey, and falls in love.
It's a story about a man, who's in desperate need to find his sister, and in desperate need to punish the man who took her away from him. It's a tragedy, a lovestory and everything in between.
Cause sometimes love is the thing that saves us. It can be our rescue, when we seem to be entering darker times, and it can be used as a light, to guide us through the night.
But just as love can be our savior, it can also be our enemy, and the thing who, in the end, kills us.
Promises were made, not to fall in love. Could they break that promise, even if it would cost them their lives?
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This is seriously one of the best book I've ever read. 😅 I can't detect a single flaw in the pace. Its cohesion amazes me, like, wow, this author has talents! I can sympathize with what the character is going through, I can vividly see the world from her perspective, I can understand why she becomes who she is now, seriously, you have the touch that could evoke the feelings from your readers that can make them feel what your character is going through. And that's so amazing! Hats raised to you author! Splendid job on this book. Keep up the good work! Hope you keep updating for more!
Okay, I’ll try to make this as quick as I can. I’m not done with the book yet. This is splendid. I honestly have a hard time believing this is the author’s first book. The book is spotlessly and flawlessly written with so much emotions portrayed in it. I’m completely and crazily in love with the female lead. She’s so strong with an outstanding personality. I personally love mafia romance and if I should even try to compare this with any of the books I’ve read, the difference is clear. The male lead, whew... I won’t stop writing if I start. I love this masterpiece , a job well done, author. You’ll definitely be seeing more of me here, cause I’m coming back to review. Thanks so much, author for sharing this masterpiece with us and I’ll highly recommend this to everyone. You won’t regret you gave it a chance.
Here is my honest review. The female lead of this story is definitely someone you are going to love. Adrena has an admirable personality. The fact that she can think for herself and has this mem* Oops! No spoilers, read up to find out what I was about to say. Back to my initial comment, she is a mentally attractive woman and one of the FLs I've fallen deeply in love it, how she thinks, how she talks, how she does everything that she does. She's just my kinda girl. ❤❤ Don't even get me started on the ML, I think I might have a crush on him already. I know I can be that shameless😂😂 This book is highly recommended, not just because I am saying it. Read it and you'll see. Let's push this one to the top where it deserves to be alrighty? 😘😘😘
The author successfully laid out the plot with an interesting biblical start. I am happy for the author's courage to write this and I am proud of you. Your reader, here. Kudos and Peace! ✌️
i love this! especially the little ''notes'' that the female lead is writing in the beginning of her chapters - so different and original! the author is so talented and the writing skills are superb. the story is so exciting to read, especially because it's so different from the other romance novels i've read about mafias. the characters are so amazing and the story build is exquisite! much love from America <3 where is the author from?
Ive read about half the book so far, and it’s really good. You said that english is not your first language, but I wouldn’t have guessed that unless you said it. Your writing is some of the best i’ve seen. You’re able to express emotion and complex thoughts easily, and it makes it easier to understand the characters thoughts and feelings. The story is very unique. A lot of stories on this app are just retellings of the smae story, but I dont think i’ve read anything quite like this before. You have a new fan. Keep up the good work.
What a beautiful book! Everything in this book is wonderful! The way the author described the settings and wrote the dialogues are truly talented. The writings are neat and clear without a single mistake. I also love the way the author re-tell Adam and Eve's story. It's so smart and interesting. Five stars are not enough for this book, but I just have five stars to reward the brilliant author ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Wow! I read all 11 chapters and then discovered that a new chapter was released the second i finished! I love this book so far, it's so exciting to read and i'm already in love with all the characters (some more than other, Dimitri is disgusting..) but i love it! I can't say this enough, but this is a great read and i will recommend this to anyone who's looking for a book that has both romance and action. Can't wait to read more :)
Want a badass heroine? This is your stop! A novel with great potential. I am at loss for how beautifully written this is! Great job, author!
Oh my god. This is one of the best books I have ever read! Like seriously, I really like the way you write, the way the plot flows so easily. I have never read anything related to mafia or some sort, but this book surely made me become more intrigued about the life of a mafia. The suspense, the humor, everything is perfect. And not to mention, the two main leads are absolutely wonderful. I have no other choice but to like them!! This book is honestly going to be one of the best book out there! Trust me! You don't even need to think twice before reading it. I am definitely keeping this one in my library! Keep on writing, author! I'm rooting for you.
This is my type of book, I like something that has to do with a bit of something catchy and mysterious becuase thqt gets you thinking ehat will happen next.
Author, you're great for writing this book. Descriptive words is enough for your readers to be hooked in. Your cover is cool to be noticed too! And I like the prologue too!
Well, I actually don't read mafia romances, specially those with darker plots. But this book made me feel that I've been missing on an entire genre of romance! Now, coming to the plot, it's unique with occasional biblical references, action and sizzling hot romance. The characters are not perfect, they make bad decisions, regret it and try to rectify their mistakes as best as they can. All these make the characters more relatable to the readers! The world background also shows the readers the background and daily life of the mafia families. We get to see Lorenzo's struggle about his own mafia background— how he hates and loves it at the same time. The story also has a sense of adventure, as it is set when the characters are on the run. And last (but definitely not the least), the romance, though it's just at the budding stage right now is already so intense, which makes me believe that it'd only get all the more blazing and passionate as the story progresses!😉 Good job to the author for creating such an interesting plot![img=recommend] I definitely don't want more, I need more chs! P.s. A small request (sorry for being selfish😅), can you please make it so that the story has a happy ending? Please!🥺
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Your novel is very very veryyy engaging. I really like the way you tell the story of Adrena and Naomi especially the time where they were introduced as *cough* naughty girls. They're interesting ladies, if you know what I mean ;). Indeed, this novel is for mature people that are open for various topics. So, advise you all to enjoy reading this fantastic novel!
I'm so invested in this story from the first chapter lol I can't wait to see where this going 👀👀👀👀 its so intense and serious that I was a little on edge 😂
I haven’t finished reading but I’m already hooked. I don’t usually read this kind of genre but you opened a door for me. I really like how the story is so well written that I couldn’t write any flaws about it. Your wordings is really exceptional that it doesn’t look like it’s your first novel. I will binge read this for sure. Thank you for making this masterpiece 😊
So I just started reading it. And for some reason l'm allI like, Yep this is good. I like the idea really and the way you write. Amazing effort. Well done.
Damn, that was incredible. This story has a lot that isn't exaclty my cup of tea. Although I don't mind romance and multiple POV, I wouldn't be as immersed as I am here, if the writing quality wasn't top notch. I wolfed down 8 chapters and I have so much to do today. I was planning to check out the first 3ch and continue at night. The female lead is very relatable at least to me. The male lead is irritating to say the least. And that's what I like about him. I see so much character development ready for him that I just wanna see how they'll both change each other. I have nothing to say about the writing quality except that it is ABSURDLY GOOD. Honestly, I'm inspired.
Dear author my name is Vanessa dowlatram and I must commend you for writing this novel it is amazing wonderful great excellent exciting and words can't express more I really can say that I have no complaints about this novel actually to be honest with you I am a first time tryer reading those kinds of novels and I actually get hooked Reading it I must say you are one of the million best and talented authors \ writers in the world I must say I gave my best ratings towards this novel because I really loved it and it is enjoyable I say that this is 100% best novel in the world and I must wish you all the best in the future and may you always be successful in everything you do not only writing novels but anything I wish you be the best perfection and performance that will reflect on you and once again you are one of a million best author in the world I must say thank you very much for letting me comment like and rate on your novel 😀😀😀😀😀😀🎖 yours sincerely Vanessa dowlatram🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🇬🇾🇬🇾🇬🇾🇬🇾🎇🎆✨🎈🎉🎊🎀🎑🎋🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁🎁⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎷🎷🎷🎺🎺🎺🎺🎺🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩
Oh my goodness! The quality of this writing is to die for. Please, dear author, teach me your skills. The constant foreshadowing of biblical verses, adam and eve etc, give this book a really unusual but appealing quality, and the writer does a fantastic job of sustaining mystery and tension throughout. And dear gods, the tension and drama is high! Wow! The main character is beautifully written. Well crafted, strong, but also has many flaws which make her seem entirely human. She makes bad decisions, mistakes, and that really adds to the charm. I love the dual perspective of this book too! The shift in narrative adds a huge amount of depth to the story and the world building elements. Honestly I am blown away by how amazing this is. Fantastic work!